MaNan FF:Irrevobaly In Love With You *COMPLETED wid EPILOGUE* - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb!!!! and the precap also increased my curiosity 😃 so plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
great writing :) keep up the good work...excited for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome do keep updating,,,, waiting for next update,,,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update...i hope evrryone accepts manan frm fab5...
thnks fr d pm n update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
jldi jldi update kra kro...ek to itta acha likhte ho...phr itta wait b krvate ho...thats not fair...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plz update soon
I'll give a long comment once ma exams get ova. ...
For now ill say I wish u were writer of kyy. ... loved ua ss. .. waiting eagerly for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago

NAndini reached the college to find Navya and Harshad waiting for her at the gate. Nandini was in a hurry to meet Manik so she just said hi to them and tried leaving when Harshad stopped her.

Harshad: what's going on Nandini? You are spending quite a lot of time with Fab5...Have you forgotten that they are our rivals and you are a part of NH3...

Nandini: No harshad it's nothing like that...I have some work...I will meet you all at the practice room...Right now I am in a hurry...

NAndini tried going but Navya stopped her.

Navya: No Nandini...you have to listen what Harshadji has to say to you...

Nandini was really pissed with the way they were behaving...

Nandini: What's wrong with you Navya...I said I am in a hurry. And it's not that I am not going to meet you at all...I need to rush somewhere...

Harshad: Forget it Navya. Your best friend is more inclined towards Fab 5 now...

NAndini wanted to say something but then she said

Nandini: Harshad I know I am your friend but that does not mean I forget my humanity and myself. I don't have restriction order that if I am your friend I can't be friends with Fab5.You know what...jus forget it..I don't want to spoil my mood right in the morning.

Harshad looked at her and nodded his head negatively...

NAndini: Ok fine...tell me what do you want?

Harshad: why did you kiss Manik in the concert yesterday? Don't you know that you are the band member of NH3...And that too the concert celebrating winning of Fab 5 in musiccana...What do you want to prove Nandini? First you ditch me on the D day and then you celebrate the success of my opponent and kiss my rival...

Nandini: Harshad...It was not just me with whom MAnik danced...He danced with Navya as well...And about the musiccana I have apologized many times...Why am I even explaining my action to you...Just forget it...

NAndini walked away when Navya hold her hand...

Nandini: Navya leave my hand...I need to go

Navya: first you need to answer Harshadji...

Nandini: Navya I am not liable to your Harshadji to explain my actions...What I do whom I kiss, it should not be his concern...HE is your so called boyfriend...Have I ever asked you why are you with him when I know what a big bas***d he is, no na...SO why do you expect me to answer your questions...It's none of his concern...

NAndini went away but Harshad grabbed her really bad and pressed his nails in her arms...

Nandini: Harshad leave me...How dare you...

NAndini pushed Harshad badly and then punched him...

NAndini: Don't you dare touch me again...I am not your girlfriend who will listen and believes to whatever you say and act accordingly...

Harshad was about to hit Nandini when he saw someone holding his hands...It was Cabir along with Alya, Mukti and Dhruv...

Cabir: Harshad...How are you?

Harshad: Cabir don't come in between. This is the personal matter of NH3...So back off...

Mukti: Harshad are you really this stupid or you act to be one...Do you seriously think that NAndini will be a part of your band after this eventful morning?

Harshad took a big stride towards Mukti when Navya caught hold of him...

Cabir: Back off...We have a jamming session to attend and I want it to be a j happy and jolly one...Not full of anger, revenge...You get what I am saying right...

Harshad was burning in anger...He jerked Navy's hand off and walked angrily...

The rest of the Fab 5 turned to find NAndini already gone...

Cabir: Where did NAndini go?

Alya.I think she got scared seeing the side of Bhai...She will be fine...just giving her some time...

NAndini rushed to the stairs to find MAnik waiting for her. He saw NAndini and she adjusted her stole so that Manik could not see her arms hurt by Harshad...

She hugged Manik and he hugged her back tightly...NAndini had really got scared seeing Harshad like that so she was not letting go off Manik. She felt so protected around his arms...MAnik felt it weird that NAndini was hugging him for so long...Nandini had some lone tears in her eyes while hugging Manik so when Manik came out from the hug he could figure out that NAndini was crying. But then knowing NAndini and her stubbornness he decided to know it all...He cupped her face.

Manik: so what's wrong with you; are you telling me yourself or you want me to know it from my ways

Nandini: Nothing is wrong...

Manik: what's wrong with your eyes?

NAndini: eyes...nothing...woh...I did not have proper sleep last night Na...so

Manik: ok so when you don't sleep well your kajall get smudged...something I did not know...

With this Nandini tried touching her eyes and MAnik hold it and cleaned her eyes...

MAnik: done... it's clean...

He then touched her arms and Nandini flinched.

Nandini: ouch...

Manik got worried and removed the stole to find marks on her arms...HE turned her to the other side to find the same marks on the other arm as well...

NAndini started weeping and Manik asked

Manik: Nandini...who did this.

NAndini was just crying...

Manik: Nandini I am asking some ting...Who did this...

NAndini: H...arsh...Harshad...

Manik got really mad and he made a direct move towards the door only to be stopped by NAndini...

Manik: I will kill that bas###...that son of b####.How dare he touch you...infect how dare he even touch you...

Nandini kept her hands on his mouth.

Nandini: Manik...calm down please...please

She said him with pleading eyes. Manik took a deep breath and said

Manik: ok fine...let's go to the medical room...and do the dressing...

Nandini: Manik for this you want to go to the sick room...

MAnik: you might get tetanus or infections...

NAndini started laughing and said

Nandini: Manik Malhotra you are impossible...

MAnik was about to say something when he was interrupted by a phone call.

Manik: yah Mukti...

Mukti: Manik where are you?

Manik: yah at SPACE.I am waiting for you behind the music wing. Come there and yes please come alone.

With this he cut the call and nodded at NAndini and NAndini went from there to the adjacent room...

Mukti came and hugged MAnik.

Manik: arrey wah...bada pyaar aa raha hai...apne dost par...

Mukti: Manik...why have you called me here and that too alone...

Manik: Mukti...I want you to meet someone...

Mukti: who

MAnik: counselor...

Mukti: Manik counselor...NO

With that she walked towards the door...but she heard MAnik speak...

Manik: For Fab 5 the matter has ended but I know that you reached in that condition that night because you were in pain and not being able to forget him...So I understand that you don't like sharing stuffs with Alya as he is her brother and with the other members as we are boys and can't relate more to it...

Mukti: Manik it's nothing like that...

Manik: Mukti...Stop lying...I have known you for 15 years now...And I know exactly what's going in your mind and what you long for. But do you release seeing you in that condition what we go through...What I feel when I see you all helpless and then your need to take the pills as you can't open up to anyone..Do you realize Mukti that you have lost yourself...So this is not a request this is an order that you have to meet the counselor...

Mukti felt really bad and guilty for making her friends go through this.

Mukti: ok...I agree but just for you...

Manikin knew you would not see no...Let just meet the counselor then...

Mukti: you knew I would say yes...

Manik: I am Manik Malhotra...and I have inherited perfect genes from Nyonika for doing such things...

Mukti: yah right...is he hot...

MAnik: err...whom...

Mukti: my counselor...

Manikin knew that this is going to ring your head so your new counselor is a girl...

Mukti: Manik...

Manik: in fact you do know her...you picked up lots of fights with her...

Mukti: You brought my mom or what...

Manik: No someone who is more dangerous than your mom.

Mukti: Don't tell me it's Nyonika...

Manik chuckled.

MAnik: Mukti I said dangerous not disastrous...There she is.tun back

Mukti closed her eyes and looked back to find Nandini standing there...

Mukti looked at Manik with shock and asked him...

Mukti: She is my counselor...

Nandini: yah...I am going to talk to you as Manik told me that you don't like hospitals and doctors...

Manik: Mukti please...just give it a shot and try...

OK so I leave you with her...Talk and open up...for my sake please...It will all be good...

Manik nodded at her and Mukti said

Mukti: ok fine...just for Manik...

MAnik: that's my Mukti...You guys talk I have some accounts to settle with someone...I will see you all later...

And with that MAnik barged out of the door.

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Posted: 10 years ago
😊awsome update...😊
thank u so much for the pm...😊
continue asap...pls...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Go Go go manik and just break dat mouth of that harshad. And yeah I m excited to see d bonding of mukti and nandu. The story is getting more interesting and I loved it how nandu hd jhadofy navya. God I hope show maine bhi kuch aisa ho. plz update soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm

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