MaNan FF:Irrevobaly In Love With You *COMPLETED wid EPILOGUE* - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Hii dear.
Read whole ff in one go.
After exams i m also about to write an SS on manan. And i too thought to show these moments.
I just loved it.
I loved the park seen more. Best scene.
Plz continue soon nd do pm me plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

NAndini: your friends Na, I am telling you land up anywhere at any time. Why your friends? Even you land up at anytime. Don't you all have watch...?

Manik: shut up Nandini...don't panic...just go and open the door...I will sit here and make no noise...don't hassle and relax

Nandini: Manik just go from here...just go...if your friends see you here...it will turn out very bad.

Manik: relax Nandini...my friends won't enter your room...I will stay here...Now go down and please act normal...

He pushed her towards the door and she turned back towards him.

NAndini: everything will be alright...just go...and yes when you speak please make some sense and don't panic...Go

Nandini came downstairs and opened the door to see all of the Fab 5 standing. Manik peeped from door and kept his ears on the door to listen to the conversation.

Cabir: SURPRISE...

Mukti: Shut up Cabir...Were you asleep???You seem as if in a shock.

NAndini: no...yah...actually...I was about to sleep...

Cabir: ok...so I welcome us on your behalf...come in guys and be comfortable...

Dhruv: You don't mind us coming...actually we thought of spending some time with you...We came to know that you were alone as your chacha Chachi are out of town...

Nandini was not listening to Dhruv at all. Her mind and eyes were still in her room where MAnik was. But to her surprise she saw MAnik peeping from the door and what shocked her more was Alya was about to look in that direction..She screamed loudly

NAndini: MAnik...

Manik hurriedly closed the door.

Dhruv: Manik...

NAndini: I mean where is Manik?

Dhruv: Actually this was also the other reason we came. Manik is not there to trouble you. He has headache so he is resting in his home.

Nandini: Ok...come in Na Dhruv...

All of the members of Fab 5 were exploring her house and Cabir was going upstairs.

She screamed loudly: Cabir

Cabir: woaah...you scared me...

NAndini: Actually Rishab is asleep after taking his medicines so ...We can stay downstairs. Please don't go upstairs. He does not get sleep if disturbed once...

As she said this she saw MAnik giving her thumbs up from the door.

Cabir: oh...sorry about that...actually I was searching for the kitchen...

NAndini: Kitchen??

Cabir: yah...I am hungry...can I get to have some homemade food...

Nandini: right now...

Mukti: yah even I feel like eating something...

Nandini felt really awkward but just smiled and went towards the kitchen.

NAndini: let me check what I can do for you.

Dhruv signaled Alya to go help Nandini and so ALya said

Alya: Wait Nandini...I will help you...

Nandini was really new to all this but then she thought that they were her Manik's life so she should not mind this and so she went to the kitchen cabinet to see Manik's coat on the side...It was the very same coat MAnik was wearing today.

NAndini got really scared and said: No Alya...No need...

She realized she was catching hold of Alya's Arms and shouting which looked really rude and so she composed and said

NAndini: no Alya...I mean you have come to my house for the first time...so just feel at home and be comfortable. I will just come...don't worry...

Alya found that sweet and so she replied

Alya: I am feeling at home so I want to help you...

NAndini was touched but she could not let Alya come into the kitchen.

NAndini: don't worry Alya...just be there. I will come in a moment...however Mukti and Cabir might need you...ok...just give me some time...

Alya felt sweet as she was not bad as her brother. She did not have such a big grudge against NAndini. So she gave in and finally went to where her friends were.

Manik who knew what was happening could not let Nandini get more confused or else Nandini being the HARISHCHANDRA would blurt the truth any moment. He thought of calling Cabir but then if he calls them they would hear him speak as Nandini's house was small. He thought of going to the terrace and talking so he slowly came out of the room.

On the other side

Nandini hurriedly kept Manik's coat inside a cupboard and looked in the fridge. Thanks to her Aye Appa that the maid had cooked extra food expecting Chahca and Chachi to arrive by dinner time. She heated it hurriedly and took the food outside. Dhruv of course helped her. Nandini set the table and fab5 had the food.

Cabir: The food is amazing. I feel like kissing your hands.

He took Nandini's hands in his making her really scared and nervous.

Mukti: Cabir...you will never change...Btu yah NAndini the food is really good.

NAndini: I did not cook the food. The maid did...So Cabir I will tell Santa bai that you want to kiss her

And everyone laughed.

Nandini's thought: MAnik must have slept by now and she looked at her watch .It was 4 in the morning.

But Manik was in the terrace about to call Cabir. He called Cabir.

Here in the room

Cabir: Manik's calling...

Cabir: hello...

Just then the door bell rang.

Cabir: Manik I will call you in some time.

And he cut the call.

Manik: oh shit...Chahca Chachi

NAndini opened the door with the fab5 sitting on the sofa.

As expected by Manik it was Nandini's chacha Chachi.

Chachi: What took you so long Nandini thought you were awake by now?

Nandini: sorry...Chachi come in Na...You arrived so fast...Where Chahca is...

Chachi: no...your chacha did not come...at last minute AMs had some work...SO I arrived la...

She could not complete her sentence as she saw there were other people in the house as well.

Chachi: Nandini, you did not tell me that your friends are also there to welcome me...

NAndini: Chachi...I am sorry...Actually they were hungry...so...I promise it won't happen from next time...

Chachi: oh my god Nandu...You get so scared...It's ok...In fact I am happy that you had your friends by your side when we were away...Won't you introduce me to them?

The Fab 5 got up and for the first time in their life they were scared.

Chachi: I know this boy (opinionating at Dhruv)...he came that day...to stalk you...remember when we were cutting the cake...

Nandini: Chachi...he is a friend...That is Mukti...This is Cabir and She's Alya

Chachi: Such good friends you have Nandini...really very disciplined...

Cabir and Mukti chuckled to themselves.

Chachi: All this is fine...but where is Manik, NAndini? Did you again fight with him?

Fab 5 exchanged questioning glances to Nandini and each other...

Nandini knew that today is surely going to be the end. But then suddenly a voice made her go into another shock

Manik is here Chachi

She turned towards the front door to find Manik standing there wearing only his t-shirt and jeans.

Fab 5: MAnik?

Chachi: ahh...MAnik...Why are you standing there come in...How many times have I told you that this is your home only...

Manik: Chachi...how are you???You look so tired...I think you need some rest...You go sleep...Such a long journey you have come from...You must be really tired...I will come tomorrow...and we will talk...and yes of course Chhole for breakfast then...ok...right now let us take your leave...come guys

He said to Fab 5 who was looking at him in total shock...

Manik: guys...

Fab 5 left Nandini's home and Manik thought of something to divert their mind so that they don't question him. He felt really bad to do this but he had to until he makes everything alight. He felt really guilty but composed himself.

Manik: What the hell guys???I waited at the club for you all for the past 2 hours and you are all here at Nandini's home ...What is wrong with you all...thank god...I have GPRS that I can track you all...You all can't even imagine me when I found all fours of your location at Nandini's house...What...What were you all doing here?

Cabir: we wanted some homemade food Manik...and after my secret is out my mom...so we thought Nandini...

MAnik: it's alright...let's just head home...It's really late...

Mukti: yah...But Manik...Your servant told that you were sleeping and did not want to be disturbed???Everything's alight...with Nyonika. And...

Manik:yah...yah...it's just that I wanted so lone moments...but then again I thought if I am with you all I might feel better...so...

Alya: Are you better now...just dont stress yourself so much Manikk...everything will be aright...ok

Manik: i know and he smiled towards them...

Dhruv: But MAnik...how did Chachi know you so well...like she is so rude to me and...

MAnik fumbled initially and then said...

Manik: actually buddy...I have come here before...You know...During Nandini's spot days...so...at that time I impressed her...

Mukti: oh...that why she was over friendly to you...I freaked when I saw her,

Cabir: over friendly Mukti...it looked as if Manik was her son in law...

Manik coughed but then composed himself and

MAnik: guys let's get going...

With that Alya and Dhruv left in her car and Manik was to drop Cabir and Mukti...

They got in their car and when Manik was about to get in his car he looked towards the window where he saw Nandini peeping from the window. HE showed her his phone and then got into the car and left.

NAndini saw Manik showing his phone to her. She got it that he wanted her to see her phone .She saw there was a message for her which read

:-)!!WELL PLAYED PARTNER!!:-)

Precap:

Manik: Mukti you have a new counselor with whom you can share your feelings and all your problems...She won't tell your feelings to anyone...not even me...trust me on that...So here's your new counselor...Nandini Moorthy

...

Someone gets to know of Manik and Nandini's relation.

Edited by Shreyame - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Awesome..!!! Simply gr8.. I luv this ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
tooo good
i wish manik was really that smart
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
wowie I m so happy. u wont believe me if I say throught out the chapter my heart ws beating so fast that what will happen if they will see manik.
"over friendly Mukti...it looked
as if Manik was her son in law..." epic one.
Such a great update.plz cnt soon and I hope whoever cm to know about manan, that person dnt try to break them. update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
🤣🤣 tis is wat i was dng while reading the update...hahahaha that was soo funny...
precap so nandhini will counsil mukthi wow nd who is that person..
no MaNan in this update😭
thnx for the pm😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Terrific chapter- thanks for the PM!

Manik smartly got out of there- loved his convo with Chahchi.

Wonder who is gong to find out about them- can't wait for the next update!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
😊 awsome update yaar...continue soon...
thank u so much for the pm...
eagerly waiting for ur next update...pls update asap...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
awesome update

fab 5 s just too much...

bt now its great that nandhini get along with them...

chachi s always d best...

n def manik is her son in law...

so its obvious he l get those spl treatment...

update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOw yar nyc update.
Thnku for d pm.
I loved d update to the core.
Precap is nyc. Cant wait to read.
Ya cabir hoga ya mukti jisko pta chla hoga about there relation
Continue soon

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