His firefly||Manan OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: Desigirl_21

Res 😳 Unres

This was a beautiful OS, u wrote it so nicely

I loved the last line that Nandu the firefly glows only for Manik it makes me so happy that these two are together in ur story 😳

I loved how u depicted the emotions of Manik and how Nandini calms him

Loved reading it

Originally posted by: CrazyGirl.21

That was ubber sweet.. Really.. The last part mainly. Ohh I am in love with it. Well Done! ❤️

Originally posted by: ForeverForU

hey Bushra!!😃
loved it..Nandini and Manik together..nothing can be better than this...loved how Nandini has become his weakness although he makes him even stronger❤️ you are awesome..plz write more

Originally posted by: nyxx

Bushra - this was so precious!

I can actually see something like this playing out in the future for these two...Manik inflicting pain on himself because he cant see his Nandu in any...and she knows exactly how to heal him <3 They make fireflies glow, their love does...

Originally posted by: topsy003

Wow .. this is was very very beautifully written..👏 U made my Monday brighter.. thank u

Please do write more..

Originally posted by: Malika.Dua

Bushra this OS is insanely BEAUTIFUL!!!

I can so imagine Manik showing his anger and feeling helpless that he couldn't do anything for his Nandu. Breaking things in his room and ending with a bleeding fist this is so like Manik.

Nandu calming him down and that firefly dialogue just made me go awww so cute.

I would love to see such a scene in the show

Your way of writing is commendable! 👏