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Hola lovelies. To those who don't me, I'm Bushra, and to those who know me, I'm insane. 😆 I am writing on this forum and on Manan for the first time. I am writing after 1 1/2 or 2 years maybe, and I can say it turned out crappy. There, I warned you. 😆Over to you.
*Ignore the mistakes, not been proofread. *
h.i.s. f.i.r.e.f.l.y

She frantically ran, looking every corridor, searching for only one face, his face. She crossed the rehearsal room where he practiced with his band members, it wasn't right to call them his band members, they were more important to him; they were his friends, his buddies.

She heard giggles echoing the room, they weren't practicing, they probably took a break, and she heard Cabir crack one of his stupid jokes, earning a smack from Mukti and a chuckle from Alya. She heard everyone's voice, just not his. She walked to the other side of the room, hoping to get his glimpse from the slightly opened door.


There he was, sitting in a secluded corner, his left leg resting on his right leg, arms crossed across his chest, facial muscles clenched. Anyone who knows him well would say he was thinking, about music maybe. But she knew him beyond that. She knew he wasn't thinking about music, not now. He was thinking about that moment, which burned him inside, which was causing a havoc in his mind, which made his eyes gush with blood. She wanted him to look at her, just once. She knew he had already sensed her, but he won't look, she knew the level of his stubbornness.

___

He knew she was there, hoping for him to look at her once, just once. But he won't, he knew if he looked at her she would reason with him, justify everything and calm him. He wasn't ready for that, he wasn't ready to let go of his anger, not after what he saw, he wasn't letting that jerk Harshad go so easily.

He stood up, slipping his hands in his pockets, he walked out of the room, his friends followed.
Manik walked the corridors, replaying that moment on loop, in his mind.

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She was practicing with her band, for the competition, she probably got disturbed and hit the wrong note, or maybe her voice shook, it was natural, with all the pressure of winning, it was alright. But Harshad didn't think it was fine. He started screaming at her, at his girl, his Nandini. How dare he? She was trying to speak, say something to Harshad but she stopped, when she saw a shadow near the door.
"Aiyappa, please let it not be him" she thought, but it was too late for her Aiyappa to do anything about it. He stood there, at the entrance, seething with anger, ready to kill Harshad. She looked straight into his eyes, pleading him to leave, not do anything he would regret about later. She didn't want Harshad or anyone to know about their relationship, now not, and he had promised to keep it a secret until the right time came.

He looked at her, sighed and left the room, unnoticed by everyone but her.

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Nandini followed him, hoping that he didn't come across Harshad, not now, not today. But to her dismay, she saw Harshad, walking across the hall, Navya and Shahid tagged along. She quickly joined them, hoping to distract Harshad but he'd already seen Manik, both the guys standing opposite each other, few inches apart. Manik's anger came back, how he wished to strangle Harshad to death, but he did what he has been avoiding, he looked at her, over Harshad's shoulder, her eyes pleading, and her lips curving into a smile.

That smile. Her signature smile. The smile did a lot of things to him. It melt his insides, which eased his pain. He loved it when she smiled for him, she smiled for everyone, but that didn't have the same magic. She reserved this smile only for him; he had a copyright on it.

It worked, he walked away, not saying a word to Harshad, giving a sideways glance to his Nandini, and he left. She tried following him, but he was too fast. She called him, once, twice, no answer, thrice, he switched his phone off. She hired an auto rickshaw to Manik's place.

"Aiyappa! I hope he's alright. He didn't say a word to Harshad only because I asked him not to. Aiyyo, he's going to blast his room. I hope he doesn't hurt himself", she slapped her head with her palm. "Aiyappa", she looked up, silently asking her Aiyappa to take care of everything.

She asked one of his servant's about Manik, she was right, he had come home. She leaped into his room, only to be shocked at the sight. The pillows were torn, soft white cotton spread all over the place, some sprinkled on the lamp, which lay broken. Cupboard open, clothes lay on the floor, she walked into the room, carefully placing her feet one by one. She looked at the trophies, scattered, broken, a blood stain on the wall, he must have punched the wall, she shook her head.

She searched for him, calling out his name, "Manik?" He sat on the floor, behind the couch, his fist tightened, face blood red, eyes bulging out a little, legs spread long. She saw his head peeping from behind the couch, she sighed and sat next to him, taking his bruised hand, he flinched and moved away, she drew herself closer, held his hand again, wiping the blood with her handkerchief. A tear rolled down her right cheek. How she hated to see him in pain, how she hated to become his weakness. How she hated to be in a rival band, how she hated everything that happened today.

"Manik, look at me na", she looked at him, face slightly tilted forward.

He didn't move. "Manik please, look at me", she requested, her throat forming a lump.

He looked at her, into those big doe eyes, those beautiful eyes, and just like that, his pain and anger had disappeared, as if her eyes cast a spell on him, his body relaxed, his fists opened, letting her entwine her fingers with his. He loved how she calmed him, as if she knew how to push the right buttons.

"I know you're upset, because I stopped you," she shook her head while speaking, "but Manik, you know why I did it. I didn't want Harshad to taunt you, to create a rift between you and your friends", she cupped his cheek while he looked on.
"I hate it, I hate it when I cause you pain, but Manik, I wasn't hurt with Harshad's words, he's not important to me. I was hurt because you had to see all that, I knew that would cause you pain, and I hated to see you like that, you're very important to me Manik, I didn't want you to get affected by Harshad," she shook her head again.

Manik never understood how he found her. He had always lived a loveless life, all he had was his friends, his music, but there was a yearning, which never left him. A desire to have someone, who could love him like no one, who could clear his messed up life, who could bring out his better side and here she was, his love, his happiness, his world. Manik smiled at her. He loved her, he promised that he would give her the best love story and she trusted him, just like he did.

"Manik, I wan't you to win this competition," she smiled.

"I know I'm from the rival band, and I shouldn't say this, but I want you to win, Nandini wants her Manik to win," she pecked his lips lightly and rested her head on his chest.

"I've already won Nandu, I've won the most important thing, " he finally spoke, wrapping his arm around her shoulder, softly caressing it.

"I won you, my precious." He smiled. "I won you, the stupid firefly who glows only for her true love," he chuckled while pinching her nose, earning a smack from Nandini.

"Stupid firefly that glows only for her Manik," she corrected.

It was blissful to see these two people in love, wrapped around each other, comfortably happy in their own little world.

****

That's the end of the torture. 😆 Please leave in your comments and let me know what you thought. <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES!
Who got here first? Moi did!đŸ„ł
Lemme read now xD

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Edited!
I usually don't know "aaw", I really don't (it doesn't go with my swag😆), but I will make do it today by saying "Aaaw!"
The line about her being his weakness, but just so adorable😳
And you know I really do wish to see something like this happen in the show... Where they keep their relationship a secret! Gaaah! Gushing now xD

My comments are pretty lame, so you will have to deal with the lame-ness xD
Keep writing bae, you are quite a writer! Hoping to see more and more works from you😎
Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago
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Besutifulll
.every word every emotion is so well written.
love it. Great job :)
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such a sweet os. Want this type of scen in d show. very nice.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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BUSHRAA
Oh my god.
This OS literally just lit up my day.
I was having a terrible moment, and this OS just made it amazing.
I love it!
The emotions, and the pacifying Manik.
Secret relationship <3
You have inspired my to write something now :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res 😳 Unres
This was a beautiful OS, u wrote it so nicely
I loved the last line that Nandu the firefly glows only for Manik it makes me so happy that these two are together in ur story 😳
I loved how u depicted the emotions of Manik and how Nandini calms him
Loved reading it
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Its amazing..I can.actually picture Manik & Nandini with this OS after watchin Manik hug Nandini..ThankU for the beautiful story.. 😊
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R

Edited

One word for this OS. And that is beautiful!

You haven't lost your skills at all! This is seriously one of the best OS I have read in this forum.

Please do write more!

-- Kiret
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Originally posted by: gujjupari

RES!

Who got here first? Moi did!đŸ„ł *slow caps* You made it girl. đŸ„ł
Lemme read now xD

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Edited!
I usually don't know "aaw", I really don't (it doesn't go with my swag😆), but I will make do it today by saying "Aaaw!"Naww! You let go of your swag *wipes tears*
The line about her being his weakness, but just so adorable😳 Thank you <3
And you know I really do wish to see something like this happen in the show... Where they keep their relationship a secret! Gaaah! Gushing now xD I really want their relationship to be a secret for a while, it would be so adorable to see them sneaking and meeting secretly. *dreams* 😳
My comments are pretty lame, so you will have to deal with the lame-ness xD
Keep writing bae, you are quite a writer! Hoping to see more and more works from you😎Lame? Shut it. Its adorable and I'm honored. You're being too kind chickaa. <3

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Originally posted by: sonu-monu

Besutifulll
.every word every emotion is so well written.
love it. Great job :)

Aww thank you. <3 Means a lot. :D

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