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@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Reswa!😛

It is such a treat reading your works again Tich! *secretly hopes that one day Tich will update YSMS"

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: dewcute

i am second again?thanks a lot ipti..😛
res😛

bwahaha! Stop being sarcy! :P

Jiya ji was LATE like always! :P

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Aparajita

@apardh_ba

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Its relly so good but did manik talking about rose when he said that he heard the voice of the women he love the most.I m slightly confused. And you by ment morena remind me of MJHT. Nice update. Cont soon.

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Fariha

@TasmiaFay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

OMG! Seriously! Manik & Rose! *no comments*. Other than that ur 1st chapter was cool! It is really difficult to imagine Alya in a conservative saree. Pm me when u update next. Luking forward to MaNan meeting!

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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

yayy!! finally...I was waiting him to meet Nandini😆
"my sperm donor" LMAO🤣
Thanx for the PM dear

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Tich

@Jin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: apardh_ba
Its relly so good but did manik talking about rose when he said that he heard the voice of the women he love the most.I m slightly confused. And you by ment morena remind me of MJHT. Nice update. Cont soon.

well yes, Morena was taken from that... MJHT.. well I loved it.

The woman he loved the most is his mom. He was remembering her.

I wanted to show that he is alert even in sleep and with closed eyes he knows what is happening.

Hope i made my point clear.

i'm glad ytou read it. I'll continue this in two days.

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Tich

@Jin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ForeverForU
yayy!! finally...I was waiting him to meet Nandini😆
"my sperm donor" LMAO🤣
Thanx for the PM dear

you are welcome..

yes, Manik and Nandini first meet, well will it be dhamaakedaar or just a plain normal meeting... hmm.. let's see.. One thing is sure, Manik will get obsessed with her.

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Tich

@Jin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: TasmiaFaye
OMG! Seriously! Manik & Rose! *no comments*. Other than that ur 1st chapter was cool! It is really difficult to imagine Alya in a conservative saree. Pm me when u update next. Luking forward to MaNan meeting!

Well Rose, I feel she is beautiful and confident..

Just because she is bit healthy side and dark doesnt make her ugly. She has been a bikini model in goa and I think she is very sexy. Morever people who have one night stands dont look at looks, they only look into the matter and experience. hehehhe.

Yep, It is difficult to imagine her in saree but you see in next update she is quite a modern girl.

Will PM you for sure.

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Tich

@Jin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: samanta175
omg..it seems so much interesting...
MY SPERM DONOR...lol..😆dat was too funny...

manik nd rose sleeping together😲bad choice monster manik...very bad choice...😆

manik nd nandini...pehli mulakat...i'm waiting 4 dat...update soon..otherwise i'll die out of xcitement...

nd pm me...😃

thank you samantha..

About Rose (Scarlett) I already mentioned in above comment that her dark skin and plump figure is not criteria for manik choosing her. It is my attempt to show that MAnik doent go on looks but quality.

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nadiafarjana

@nadiafarjana

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Awesome story

plz pm me when you update

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