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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: dewcute

i am second again?thanks a lot ipti..😛
res😛

unres😉

sooo...hmmm...ok!😆

what?i have nothing to tell about manrose🤣

i think it's nandini with whom he collided...🤔

then what will be the twist will make nandini manik's wife?

continue soon...

waiting for your darky...darky...updates...😛

Jiya😈

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_Grey_

@_Grey_

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

your story seems to be intresting 😃
Manik ne apne dad ka naam sperm donor se save kr rkha hai🤣
poor guy has to go through so much since his childhood :(
thanks heaven alya will leave in 3 updates🤣
update soon

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Bubblie1490

@Bubblie1490

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

I don't understand why do you call it a Dark FF?

I didn't find anything dark about it, atleast so far in the story.

BTW I didn't mean any offence by the question I was just curious.

Anyways nicely written, & now I'm wondering if Manik found Alya georgeous, than what will be his opinion about Nandini? I'm really looking forward to their meeting.

Please pm me about the updates.

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tich_pms

@tich_pms

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: nadiafarjana
Awesome story
plz pm me when you update

yes, I'll surely PM you when I update.

Thanks for linking this story.😊

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tich_pms

@tich_pms

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: dewcute

unres😉

sooo...hmmm...ok!😆

what?i have nothing to tell about manrose🤣

i think it's nandini with whom he collided...🤔

then what will be the twist will make nandini manik's wife?

continue soon...

waiting for your darky...darky...updates...😛

Jiya😈

Jiya. yes, its nandini.

manrose.. lolzz. carose, dhrurose.. well i love them all, interesting and funny.

will continue soon.

This is gonna be really very interesting.

love

Tich.

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tich_pms

@tich_pms

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: -DEvil_Heart-
your story seems to be intresting 😃
Manik ne apne dad ka naam sperm donor se save kr rkha hai🤣
poor guy has to go through so much since his childhood :(
thanks heaven alya will leave in 3 updates🤣
update soon

hahahah.. manik will change his name soon.. stay tuned.

yeah, u see i cant tolerate alya much.

so i'm making her bhaagofy..😉 *plot revealed*

will update tomorrow..

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tich_pms

@tich_pms

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Bubblie1490
I don't understand why do you call it a Dark FF?
I didn't find anything dark about it, atleast so far in the story.
BTW I didn't mean any offence by the question I was just curious.

Anyways nicely written, & now I'm wondering if Manik found Alya georgeous, than what will be his opinion about Nandini? I'm really looking forward to their meeting.

Please pm me about the updates.

Well Bubblie ( i hope i can call you that ) let us list out points needed for DARK FF

1. Hero has to be filthy rich and angry young man and a pervert (reserved to the heroine)

2. Heroine should be meek, shy but a wild cat on seeing the hero

3. The FF has to have lots of bedroom scenes between them where he literally forces himself on her and she feels disgusted but enjoys it somewhere down. Like she doesnt mind him kissing and cuddling and even sleeping naked with him on bed but minds sex with him.

BULLSHIT.!

You have been mislead if this is the definition of Dark FF you heard or india-forum made you believe.

Dark FF is literally dark, with little hope of light, love and gathering broken pieces. As you progress with the story you will almost give up on happy ending (synonymous with light). Hence it is Dark - filled with pain, suffering and grave mistakes (takes sins under humanity and crimes under law)

I'll try to make this FF interesting if you can give this a chance.

Will update MaNan's first meeting next and you will find it realistic.

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Neha

@..Neha.

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Amazing!
At last found aff on manan!
Pls pm me!

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A_Crazy_Leo

@A_Crazy_Leo

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

A very intriguing start!! N as am an ardent M&B reader,ur story has upped my antena:)).plz add me to ur pm list so dat I can cntinue wid dis story.BTW am Betsy:)

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Jaan,

For a long while I have been seeing this Manik - Nandini uproar over the net. Well I won't be watching them but I sure will read about them. Let's see how I will connect with a couple I haven't seen even once.

Coming to the story. Dark and Angst huh. Makes for a tempting combination.

Manik's darkness can be understood. He comes with a heavy baggage of a past. Sperm donor - nice coinage there he he.

Nandini - let's wait and watch and also Dhruv. The moth and flame thing - who wouldn't want to see.

I have missed reading your works. For sometime till next March I will be pretty much on and off Jaan.

Finals are approch ing fast and it's time to get down to work.

Love you and Miss you.