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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 5 {last chapter}
guys this is gonna be a little long update bare with me

harshad now had the perfect weapon to destroy the mighty fab5 after that day he started to follow them and our manan were in their paradise they didnt know what storm was going to come their way and harshad had deviced a perfect plan to break these two aswell as the fab5 he didnt had any grudge against nandini but she now has to be the pawn in destroying them

and he got the perfect chance just two days before the inter college compete our two love birds were romancing on the terrace and this seemed the perfect opportunity to harshad he messaged alia to come and meet him on the terrace

alia : bhai wants to meet me on the terrace

cabir : kyun ????????????

mukit : u idiot how will she know lets go and find out

alia-cabir : okk chalo

and when they enterted terrace they were shocked would be an understatement

cabir : manek!!! what is going on ?????????

manek : guys {in shock]

alia : you knew this bhai and thats why you called usw here

harshad ; yes i knew it and i had been following them for quite a few days

alia : bhai

harshad : alia i just wanted to show you that manek is not perfect even he has his secrets

alia : to manek why manek why ???????? how could you lie to us

manek : listen to me guys

mukit : what are we suppose to listen too the truth is in front of us

manek : guys i can explain this

cabir : no manek it is to late for explanations and they start going away

manek : guys i can do anything you want but just forgive this time

mukit: okk manek then we wnt you to decide nandini or fab5

manek : mukit ...

cabir : no manek she is right nandini or us

manek didnt know what to do and whom to choose he was in a delimma on one hand he had his love and on the other he had his friends who were his only family and in all there was harshad who knew that his plan had worked quite well and hence he left from there

and for nandini she didnt know what hit her a minute ago her life was perfect and now it was in pieces shattered in front of her eyes and she coulnt do anything about it she knew her monster was in great pain she even knew that how important his firends were for him so she took a decision because she couldnt take him away from them

nandini : manek i think they are right we are not good for each other

manek : nandini what are you saying

nandini : that it would be better that we would part ways now only for us aswell as for everyone and with that she had walked away leaving shattered manek behind

Fab5 had got what they wanted and harshad was happy as he knew that there were cracks developing in the fab5 and in the mean time the college fest had begun but in all this the fab5 could see that manek had lost his spark

the D- day had also arrived when the bands had to compete against each other all the performances were quite good but fab5 won because they felt that their lead had sung exceptionally well he had a pain in his voice that they could relate with

fab5 could see that manek was very unhappy he looked defeated and they though of cheering him up

suddenly manek gets a message

cabir: come and meet us on the terrace

on the terrace

manek : guys what happened why are we here???????

dhruv : we have decided to have a victory party

manek ; here ??????????

cabir : kyun terrace peh sirf tumhara aur tumhari spot ka copy right hai

manek : huh ??????????

alia : manek i forgot to ask you how did it happen ??????????

manek : what ?????

alia : you and nandini

manek : i dont know alia it just happened

voice : and now do you know how it happened

manek couldnt believe his ears as he turned behind

manek ; nandini

cabir : toh tumhe kya laga manek ki yeh tumhare liye itna bada sacrifice kar sakte hai toh hum tumhare liye isse bardash nahi kar sakte

mukit : we accept her manek we cant see you like that and with that she goes and gets nandini and pushes her towards manek

dhruv : welcome to the family nandini

END

Edited by RK-ki-Kaneez - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow I am so happy they hv acpt nandini and the last line said by dhruv is really very good. I wish u hv written how Harshad has reac after seeing nandini with fab5. But all in all its really good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
This is the sweetest ending ever.. Loved it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
This is such a lovely ending. 😊 This is called friendship. I just wish we could see Harshad's reaction on that.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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such a cute ss..
For a minute i was like why did Nandu back off.
But she was right friendship comes before everything.
I am glad fab 5 realize their mistake and accepts MaNan..
It was such a sweet ending..
Keep Writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow read it in 1 go..n jst loved da ending..
da last line 'Welcome 2 da family' is smethng i wna hear in da show too..
Lovely SS..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE
thank you guys for all your comments and encouragement it actually means a lot I am new to this forum and have tried my hand in writing for the first time so thank you for bearing with me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely ss
loved it
very nicely written

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