manan ss: intolerable monster {chapter 5 updated} complete

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Fariha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Cool update dear! So harshad chalu ho gaya, manik ke khilaaf dheeraj ko use karega. Continue soon yaar & pm karna na bhoolio!

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valentina

@RK-ki-Kaneez

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

chapter 3

all are in deep thoughts about what to do and where to get the fifth member from

nandini : aiyappa what are we going to do why some thing like this always happens with us

then suddenly navya ki batti jali

navya : arey dheeraj ji aap kyun na hamare panchnve member banjao

harshad : good idea navya this can solve all are problems

navya: thankyou harshadji {with a lovedovey expression on her face }

dheeraj : but i am not so sure guys

harshad : come on dheeraj nandini tell him na

nandini : please dheeraj haan kehdo na please {with a puppy dog face}

dheeraj: okk theek hai {they proceed towards raghav sirs office for registration}

after completing the registration process they come out and see fab5

manek : so harshad mil gaya tumhe tumhara panchnva soldier hume harane ka liye

harshad : uske liye mein hi akela kafi hu

manek : in your dreams harshad in your dreams vaise yeh toh batao tumhara panchva sipahi {soldier} kon hai?????????

then he sees dheeraj standing near nandini

manek : ahh toh tum ho abb bohot maza aayega

dheeraj : whatever chalo nandini

manek : kyun new boy dar gaye saare hiropanti nakal gaye itni jaldi maidan chodke bagh rehe ho

dheeraj: tumhari problem kya hai why are you always pmsing problem kya hai tumhari \

at this nandini and navya begin to laugh and this enrages manek

manek : toh tumhe bohot hasee aarahi hai {and catches nandinis sholders and gives navya a piercing look}

dheeraj : leave her {and pushes manek away from nandini}

manek : how dare you {punches dheeraj}

which ensues a fight between them in the mean time nandini tries to stop them but manek by mistake manek pushes her and she falls

dheeraj : tum theek ho

nandini: yaa i am alright

when manek sees that nandini is hurt he comes near her

manek : i ...

nandini : {in anger } you monster stay away, i dont understand tumhe kya sukun milte hai dusroo ko pain mein dekar saying this she walks off

manek : { whispers} i am sorry nandini i have never wanted to hurt you

precap : nandini-manek fight and confessions

this is for the day guys hope you like it

Edited by RK-ki-Kaneez - 11 years ago

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Aparajita

@apardh_ba

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

wow nice ss. But I didnt understand one thing did nandini knows dheeraj before or not. really waiting for the next part. update soon.

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MuguetDScorpion

@MuguetDScorpion

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Dheeraj is truly the hero by becoming the 5th member.

Loved the fight and a jealous Manik.

It was a good one. 😊

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valentina

@RK-ki-Kaneez

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

No nandini didn't know dheeraj he is just a new guy in college and he is just being a gentleman as he can't see any girl begin ill treated

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valentina

@RK-ki-Kaneez

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

No dheeraj is a new guy in college they haven't meet anywhere before

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zohasad2.0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

fab...read it in one go

update soon

---Zoha

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valentina

@RK-ki-Kaneez

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

CHAPTER 4

Because of the scene that had been created outside raghav sirs office nandini had been quite upset she knew that her monster was like that short tempered but today it had hurt (but in the mean time manek was searching for nandini in college)

Terrace

Manek : nandini

Nandini : why are u here (in a angry voice)

Manek : I am sorry Jaan I know that I have hurt you

Nandini : signs why can't we just stop all this its killing me I can't pretend anymore

Manek : I know this pretence of hate and ignorance is even tough for me but if the truth comes out it will destroy everything

Nandini : i know but ...

Manek : i can understand your problem as you see that i know i m irresistible that you can't be away from me

Nandini : what non sense ????????

Manek : but on a serious note just be away from that new guy

Nandini : he is just a good friend

Manek : i know but he doesn't give me good vibes

Nandini : possessive monster😆😆

Nandini : in a serious voice manek when are we going to tell them

Manek : i don't know maybe after the inter college fest

Nandini : alright then

A few days had passed away after the terrace scene nandini and manek were trying their level best to keep their emotions under control and in the mean time the inter college fest practice were going on in full swing manan would try different ways and means to be with each other and after the office scene manek had mellowed towards nandini in public as well and this was observed by harshad and he felt that something was not correct and once while nandini was going to meet manek he decides to follow her

And on that day he got the weapon he had been searching for to destroy fab5 and manek.

hope you liked the update guys

Edited by RK-ki-Kaneez - 11 years ago