manan ss: intolerable monster {chapter 5 updated} complete

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valentina

@RK-ki-Kaneez

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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 1

their love story had always been quite different from others. He had never been her knight in shining amour. Quite the opposite he had always been the one who had always caused the trouble. Her monster or you could call her worst nightmare. But he had always been quiet content with this description of hers as he had always been the only one in her thoughts until had fateful day when their equation had suddenly changed

It had been a regular day for him he was thinking of devices to make his spots life miserable, how yo make her agree that she was nothing but a commoner.

Kabir: Arey Manek kya soch rahe ho?

Manek: nothing yaar, I think it has been quite some time we didn't have our daily dose of fun don't you think.

Alya: yes manek you are quite right.

Mukti: what say guys??? Then what are we waiting for.

Manek: hey see my spot has just entered college 😆 why don't we go and have some fun????

Dhruv: don't yaar let her be.

Mukti:come on Dhruv it's not as if we are going to harm her or something. We are just trying to have some fun.

Kabir: Arey chalo na yaar kya it na soch rahe ho

(And they all head towards nandini)

Manek: hey nandini aaj bohot khush lag rahe ho Kuch khass baat hai kya???(tries to stop her)

Nandini: tum se matlab???

Manek: Arey bolo na kya khass baat hai???

Nandini: manek mera rasta chodo mujhe baat karne mein koi interest nahi hai.(she tries to go but manek catches her shoulders and tries to stop her)

Nandini: chodo mujhe let me go

Just then they hear someone saying

Voice:if the girl wants to go then why don't you let her go???

Manek: and may I ask who are you to give me this wonderful advice aapna rasta napo Yeh mere aur mere ke beech ka mamla hai.

Nandini:(to that boy) you just go from here. Don't interfere please just go (in a pleading voice)

Manek: Arey meri nandu tum he iss ladke par bohot pyaar aa raha hai??? Mein bhi toh dekhu kya baat hai issme. (Leaves nandini and goes towards the new guy).

Nandini:(suddenly comes between both of them and tries to protect the new guy). Don't harm him please just let him go (but seeing this manek gets more enraged).

This is for the days guys hope you like it and would like to know your views about should I continue or no.

I would love to know your views keep liking and commenting😛😛😛

index

part 1 : above

part 2 : pg 2

part 3 : pg 3

Part 4 : pg 4

Part 5 : pg 5

Note : pg 6

Edited by RK-ki-Kaneez - 10 years ago

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MuguetDScorpion

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ahhh now I want to know who this guy is and how Manik reacts. 😛

Yes please continue. 😊

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Parud26

@Parud26

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Posted: 11 years ago

great start! 👏

please continue! I really curious to know Manik's reaction and who is / what will happen to the new guy. Even though I'm pretty sure that the new guy's not going to have it easy now at his new school now 😕

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow,starting itself is enough gripping...

who's the new guy?

i think,i can feel jealousy in manik's anger😆

continue soon..

jiya:-)

Edited by dewcute - 11 years ago

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valentina

@RK-ki-Kaneez

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks for your encouragement guys and I will post the second part in 2 to 3 days

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nicky13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow nice concept ... Amazing start ... Who is that guy ...??? Waiting for the next part :) plz update it soon :)

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LifeGoesOn

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Posted: 11 years ago

The starting looks quite gripping 😃

Continue soon!!

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valentina

@RK-ki-Kaneez

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Posted: 11 years ago

chapter 2

kabir : arey manek let it go na {and just then the poean comes and informs them that raghav sir wants to meet all the band members in his office}

kabir : arey yar subhe subhe isse kya ho gaya what does he want now????????? {and they all start moving towards raghavs office}

nandini: hie , i am nandini

new guy : dheeraj kayshap

nandini : thanks for saving me just try and be away from them especially that monster

dheeraj: dont worry about me but i dont get it how can you tolerate such non sense

nandini: let it be lets not talk about it and spoil our mood come i will introduce you to my group but before that lets go and meet raghav sir

raghav sirs office

raghav : i hav called you here to inform you that the inter college fest would be held in our college this year and i want u all to participate in it but there is a problem here according to the competition requirement there should be minimum 5 members in the band {looks at NH3} so if u want to participate you need to find your fifth band member

in the cantene

harshad : arey this is not done yar now from where are we suppose to get the fifth member from and where is nandini { in a irritated voice}

just then nandini enters with dheeraj

navya : arey dekho nandini agayi

nandini: what happened guys why do you look so tensed

harshad narates to her what happened in raghavs officed

nandini : ayappa what are we supposed to do now?????????

harshad : i dont know what we are going to do but i cant miss this opportunity to defeat manek and fab5

navya : arey par iskeliye hume woh panchva member toh milna chaliye aur vaise nandini yeh tumhare saath kon hai

nandini : aiyoo sorry guys this is dheeraj

and starts narating to them all that happened in the morning

harshad : so dheeraj you stood against manek malhotra