|Yours Till Perpetuity| Short Story-Udated - Page 9

Originally posted by: BeyondWordsPM

No Yaar! I am not yet a good writer!

I just got smacked virtually yesterday for changing scenes drastically and writing strangely from a writer for Checkmate

Originally posted by: Desigirl_21

RES 😳

Originally posted by: pratsy

*goosebumps*

omg...fab yar...so many questns left unanswered...maanik is a musician right...umm..interetsng part :)

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

Unres please? :o

Originally posted by: Stana_Katic

Oh god!! Please save me...

You are making me mad Ipti...

What is wrong with you...

I was like...Was it that bad? You are good at giving me heart attacks Angela!! Yes! You surely can call me Ipti! :)

First chapter one mystery... Ok no problem...

BUT second chapter nine how and whys...

Ahahah! I am laughing!

I cannot tolarate this ...

This is wrong to poor readers...

I apologize, but I can't help it! That's how I write! :"(

I will protest...till my death...(thats not true, donot worry)

Update jaldi jaldi...

OR ELse...

I

Will

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Cry...😭

No No! Don't you cry! :*
Will update after 2 days! :)

Byee...

Love you like always...

Angela..

Originally posted by: Desigirl_21

RES 😳 Unres

Woah this was so damn interesting.. seriously I had goosebumps

I just loved the fact that Mehika after all these years finds peace here in this palace and I am really interested to know more about her and her family too it seems they will be connected.

Cant wait to read the next update and more about Nandini Shekhawat too 😃

Originally posted by: TasmiaFaye

Wwooww! Sooo intriguing update! I luv ur writing! This chptr was so fascinating. Mehika blurting out 'Manik' when she felt the sword was a bit spiritual. Loved the role of the characters in here. Continue with the story dear!

Originally posted by: rima4ever

please continue

Originally posted by: nadiafarjana

My god...very diffrent and interesting story