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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

Wowww! So this is another one of those history stories, ain't it? I am actually so excited to read this now! I really want to know what happened between Manik & Nandini and then how Mehika had played a part in the history!

Continue soon!


Yeah! Kind of! :P
Ahahah! You are TOO cute! :)
Yeah! Next update On Thursday
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Sparks-galore

Res 😊

Unres.

Goosebumps all over! Sense of deja vu for Mehika, she is so familiar with these surroundings. She felt a calmness when she heard the voice, the music. Her soul knew instinctively where to head... tragic how princess Nandini took her own life, perhaps to safeguard her love... * overwhelmed*

I love how you weaved the other characters into the story, hope to read some of their back stories as well 😉

Please please update regularly❤️


Yeah! As I said, Mehika is plying the protagonist here! :)
Nandini and her story will be unraveled soon!
Yes! Backstories would be there after sometime!


Will update on Thursday! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
I love this. It's really different and interesting.
I'm intrigued about this history of MaNan.
And suicide 😲
Woah! I'm waiting for the updates!
Sorry can't keep a long comment. Short on time.
Edited by -MyMy- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Unres so that I can sleep! :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
You are a very good writer...

i know that you are already aware about it,just wanted to say it,bcoz this one was amazing...

I don't know why ,still i am thinking that mehika is the rebirth of nandini,if it's not then what's she doing on the story?

ok,ok,enough of my stupid assumptions,i know you have better in your store for us...

and i am waiting for it...

continue soon...

waiting...

Jiya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
RES 😳 Unres
Woah this was so damn interesting.. seriously I had goosebumps
I just loved the fact that Mehika after all these years finds peace here in this palace and I am really interested to know more about her and her family too it seems they will be connected.
Cant wait to read the next update and more about Nandini Shekhawat too 😃
Edited by Desigirl_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
*goosebumps*

omg...fab yar...so many questns left unanswered...maanik is a musician right...umm..interetsng part :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Oh god!! Please save me...
You are making me mad Ipti...
What is wrong with you...
First chapter one mystery... Ok no problem...
BUT second chapter nine how and whys...
I cannot tolarate this ...
This is wrong to poor readers...
I will protest...till my death...(thats not true, donot worry)
Update jaldi jaldi...
OR ELse...

I

Will
..
..
Cry...😭

Byee...
Love you like always...
Angela..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: dewcute

You are a very good writer...


i know that you are already aware about it,just wanted to say it,bcoz this one was amazing...

I don't know why ,still i am thinking that mehika is the rebirth of nandini,if it's not then what's she doing on the story?

ok,ok,enough of my stupid assumptions,i know you have better in your store for us...

and i am waiting for it...

continue soon...

waiting...

Jiya


No Yaar! I am not yet a good writer!
I just got smacked virtually yesterday for changing scenes drastically and writing strangely from a writer for Checkmate
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wwooww! Sooo intriguing update! I luv ur writing! This chptr was so fascinating. Mehika blurting out 'Manik' when she felt the sword was a bit spiritual. Loved the role of the characters in here. Continue with the story dear!

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