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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 3.

She all of a sudden received a message, which read "Dhruv". Wiping her tears she opened it to read it.

Where are you?

I'am here in Jenex, waiting for you since the past thirty minutes. The network is too weak here.

Even Manik hasn't arrived yet, though he said he would come within ten.

I am waiting for you, come soon.

Reading the message, her face lightened up with immense joy. She jumped up and asked the driver to take her to the Apartment as fast as he could. She washed her face before sitting in the car. Her big black eyes dazzled like a little kid.

She dialed Manik's number as Dhruv's phone wasn't reachable. But she was astonished that Manik didn't pick her phone up. "He might have kept his phone in silent mode" she thought. Yet she didn't seem satisfied. Indeed something was wrong with everyone around today.

As the chauffer was drivinf, he stopped all of a sudden.

"Agey Nahi Chal Sakti Gaari Madam",he spoke in a worried tone, "Petrol Khatam hai. Apne gaari chalayi thi kya madam? Kal toh Tanki Full karvayi thi na aapne fir kaise?"

She nodded and frowned. Indeed had she asked Manik to get the tank full. In fact he had even got the job done while she and Dhruv was rehersing for their duet act.

"Are you sure? Manik ne karavayi thi full" she sighed, while the chauffer showed him the reading.

She said she would wait in the car till he got a bottle filled from the Petrol pump. The signal had dropped by then. All she could do was wait, because using any public transport in the middle of the Friction Controversy wasn't safe.

Short Updates

But Will be regular enough! :)

Edited by BeyondWords - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres pg. 13
& res for chp. 3😳

Edited

Thank God Dhruv is fine! Wonder why the car ran out of fuel 😕

Waiting for the next one! 😳

-- Kiret
Edited by -.serendipity.- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

Res


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Finally got a chance to read this and man, Iptisha! Girl, you are a rockstar! Honestly! The way that you penned out every word in the chapter makes this whole thing a fabulous piece of work!

Quite eager to read the next chapter!

Keep writing,

Kiret <3


Yeah! :)
Really? I thought Angst was missing! :o
Thank you!🤗
Updated ! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
ok!!!!!!!!!!!!
i got the update of checkmate too...😳

the update was short..😳

so,the comment is also short😆

will wait for the looong updaate...
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Posted: 10 years ago
1st thng m quite 😡 wid u
cuz u didnt PM me :p
i could have missed this!!
the length of the stry 😲
well the mystery is intact here again
& ur gonna update it REGULARLY? huh :)
will wait :p
as always ur the bEST 😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
why didn't u pm me or scrap me????
finally ...my Dhruv is all right 😃
i was so tensed
u described all things soo mysteriously that i was praying to god for DhruNi 😆
update soon
BeyondWords thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dewcute

ok!!!!!!!!!!!!

i got the update of checkmate too...😳

the update was short..😳

so,the comment is also short😆

will wait for the looong updaate...



Yeah! :)
I had to keep this one short as there are too many ongoinf stuff!

Thanks! :*
Next is long...pakka! :*
Edited by BeyondWords - 10 years ago
BeyondWords thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiR

1st thng m quite 😡 wid u

cuz u didnt PM me :p
i could have missed this!!
the length of the stry 😲
well the mystery is intact here again
& ur gonna update it REGULARLY? huh :)
will wait :p
as always ur the bEST 😎

I was too lazy! : O : )
Yeah its short but will come up with next part soon! :)

Thenks! But am a bit sick (u know its not a bit right? )
Will try to update asap!:")
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: malavikajoshy

why didn't u pm me or scrap me????
finally ...my Dhruv is all right 😃
i was so tensed
u described all things soo mysteriously that i was praying to god for DhruNi 😆
update soon



Kishu! :*
Was lazy to PM sorry! :)
Yeah! He is alright! :)
You are one adorbs girl! :)
Will update next week! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BeyondWords



Kishu! :*
Was lazy to PM sorry! :)
Yeah! He is alright! :)
You are one adorbs girl! :)
Will update next week! :)


u gave me a nickname...nice

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