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Jia Roh

@dewcute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

IT WAS BEAUTIFUL,BUT DHRUV HIT MANIK????????😔,I AM FEELING SAD,U ARE TELLING THIS STORY IN A DIFFERENT WAY IPTISHA,WHICH IS DIFFERENT FROM ALL YOUR OTHER WORK,AND I AM LOVING IT...,HMM,ONE QUESTION TO ASK...DID U TOOK HISTORICAL STUDIES AS YOUR SUBJECT??😛,BUT YA GREAT WORK👏...

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

OOOPS,FORGOT TO ADD,CONTINUE SOOON😛

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: -MyMy-
RES
UNRES
Oh my god Iptisha...I just can't.
This was just AMAZING!
The whole Akbar-Rajput thing was hilarious. 😆
Dhruv hitting Manik. 😕
That conversation where Dhruv was telling Nandu about if something happens to him, and Manik will be there. I almost started crying. It was so sad and sweet. 😭
That last bit was just...I can't.
This was so good. I love it so much.
You have to update soon!
P.S. First comment 😉

Ahahha! I am obsessed with Rajput at the moment, can't help it! My mother is fed up too! :P

Dhruv hit Manik in chappy one remember?:o

Shit! You almost cried...I wish my writing had enough potential to make you actually cry! :(

I have eams tomorrow onward! :P Now the suspense begins! :P

P.S-Yeah...What made you ckeck the thread by the way? :o

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: dewcute
IT WAS BEAUTIFUL,BUT DHRUV HIT MANIK????????😔,I AM FEELING SAD,U ARE TELLING THIS STORY IN A DIFFERENT WAY IPTISHA,WHICH IS DIFFERENT FROM ALL YOUR OTHER WORK,AND I AM LOVING IT...,HMM,ONE QUESTION TO ASK...DID U TOOK HISTORICAL STUDIES AS YOUR SUBJECT??😛,BUT YA GREAT WORK👏...

I am sciencee but I am currently obsessed with Rajput..I have always been but I recently watched Maharana Pratap (I know its pretty fake but i researched the actual story :P)

Manik was hit my Dhruv in chappy one! :/

Yeah this is different as this one is a long fiction unlike my short writings! :D

Thanks Jiya...Me loves your name! <3

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: dewcute
OOOPS,FORGOT TO ADD,CONTINUE SOOON😛

Ahahah! I wish you had forgotten that! :P Okay I will...but wait for it! :D

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

I am sciencee but I am currently obsessed with Rajput..I have always been but I recently watched Maharana Pratap (I know its pretty fake but i researched the actual story :P)

Manik was hit my Dhruv in chappy one! :/
Yeah this is different as this one is a long fiction unlike my short writings! :D
Thanks Jiya...Me loves your name! <3

I Remember that dhruv hitted manik in chap.1,but my question is why are you reminding me that again😭" vo hit kaafi nahi tha kya?"😒,and ya i am shocked even after taking science u have time to research on histories?😲,and ya me loves you🤗 and your stories🤗..

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: dewcute

I Remember that dhruv hitted manik in chap.1,but my question is why are you reminding me that again😭" vo hit kaafi nahi tha kya?"😒,and ya i am shocked even after taking science u have time to research on histories?😲,and ya me loves you🤗 and your stories🤗..

Yeah! I am interested in History much! :D

Ab Manik was hit...that indeed can't be forgotten! :/

Thanks! :D Me waiting for you to write! :D

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Kaay

@-.serendipity.-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Res

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Finally got a chance to read this and man, Iptisha! Girl, you are a rockstar! Honestly! The way that you penned out every word in the chapter makes this whole thing a fabulous piece of work!

Quite eager to read the next chapter!

Keep writing,

Kiret <3

Edited by -.serendipity.- - 11 years ago