|Checkmate|- SS of The Week...Week 1!

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Checkmate.

The game isn't over, until it is over.

A DhruNi.MaNan.CavYa Story.

Genre: Mystery, Crime, Romance, thriller.

Type: Short Story.

Introduction: A story of friendship, loyalty, faith, success, love, lust, revenge.



|PROLOGUE|

She froze at the sight in front her. Neither could she cringe, nor did tears escape her eyes. She couldn't reciprocate as her mind refused to register what she saw. She just felt her heart shatter into countless pieces making her lifeless, but knew her pain was nothing in front of his pain, his battle. He lay drenched in blood. His white shirt and his hood was stained, fresh blood flowing out endlessly. She endeavored hard to react at the crisis but her voice her limbs her soul, all betrayed her. She saw the knife plunged in his trunk.She sank on the floor not knowing how to undo the past, how to see him laugh again, live again. As he gestured her to pull it out she kept her hand on his chest and he faintly smiled.

"N-A-N-D-I-N-I", she heard him say, a name she loved to hear from him, created havoc in her today, cutting her hollow from inside as he resisted losing his senses as all he wanted was to capture her image so that she lived in him till eternity, even he was to call his uncalled death today.



Tere Dil Mein Meri Saason Ko Panah Mil Jaye Jaaye.

Tere Ishq Mein Meri Jaan Fanaah Ho Jaaye.

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Rule of PM: A like on the prologue will tell me that the story is being followed.

Your words mean a lot to me. Its true that I write as it pleases me but till someone points out my mistakes, critically reviews my work how will I grow? Also a lot of hard work goes into presenting a well thought story line, especially when there in complexity in the plot and your words will serve as a energizer.


Always

Iptisha

Couldn't decide whom to love more, DhruNi or MaNan, so this story belongs to both, hopefully not the good old love concept, but something different and more passionate. *fingers crossed*

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My KY2 works till now...

I have written more...So in case you wanna get more tortured, here you go!

"Yaariyan" Fab 5 One Shot!

"Orchids" MaNan One Shot!

"Ferrero Rocher" MaNan One Shot!

"Our Independence Awaits" A Social One Shot

"Million Of Small Things" Cabir-Mukti:: Friendship Drabble




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Posted: 11 years ago
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.INDEX.

Prologue...Page 1.

Chapter One...Page 6.

Chapter Two...Page 12

Chapter Three...Page 15
Edited by BeyondWords - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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reserved.
unreserved.


The prologue is heart breaking. Some one is dying?😭. Be it Dhruv or Manik I love both of them😭. Anyways continue soon can't wait for the story 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Iptisha ... You r awesome writer yaar ... Thanks for another new story ... I would love to read it ... The prolong is really very painful ... Waiting for the main story ... Plz continue it soon ... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't really watch this show regularly, Ipti!...but I find the show good...and I like crime thrillers...and the prologue is really nice...Do PM when you update 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Seems like someone going to be FANAA in love

waiting for the update
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Originally posted by: Abray

reserved.

unreserved.


The prologue is heart breaking. Some one is dying?😭. Be it Dhruv or Manik I love both of them😭. Anyways continue soon can't wait for the story 😳


Oh yes! I love both of them too. In fact after today's episode I guess I love the show as much because of Manik-Dhruv only.
Will continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nicky13

Hey Iptisha ... You r awesome writer yaar ... Thanks for another new story ... I would love to read it ... The prolong is really very painful ... Waiting for the main story ... Plz continue it soon ... :)

Hey thanks! I had to ask you your name...tell me please?
Yes i will continue very soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wrackspurt

I don't really watch this show regularly, Ipti!...but I find the show good...and I like crime thrillers...and the prologue is really nice...Do PM when you update 😛


Oh yes! especially Manik-Dhruv bond is something worth a watch! :D
Okay, I shall! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArchanaRM

Seems like someone going to be FANAA in love

waiting for the update


Ahahah! Let's see if someone is Fanaah eh? :D

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