FanFic:is Pyar ko main kya naam doon?

Hey Guys! I will post the first part of my fanfic. Please read and comment on it and let me know what you think. Tell me if i should continue or not! Thanku!

Part 1

Is Pyar ko main kya naam doon?

Background : Right after the last eppisode (July 28th) that we had seen
on thursday. THe eppisode about the concert where they hadn't
decided the winner yet. All relations and all characters
are same as seen on the show.

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The Host comes back to the stage to finally announce the winner. The crowd
watches while rooting for who they want to win.

Kripa watches in silence, still having a last drop of hope
to suceed and bring Angad down.

Angad prays for Kripa's win. He knows that if she doesn't win,
she will lose all hope in becoming a Star and give up.

Host: Wow, After seeing all these great perfermonces i know it
must've been hard for the judges to have made this choice.
And once again the winner is "Angad KHanna".

The crowd Roars with excitement and starts chanting

Crowd: ANGAD, ANGAD, ANGAD .........

A tear slowly falls down kripa's cheek.

Kripa Thinking: Aaj phir angad ki jeet hue aur meri haar.
Mai kaise soch sakti thi ke mai jeet jaou gi. Mai
to apne aap ko dokha de rahi thi. Mai use kabhi
nahin hara sakti. Wo jeet gaya. or mein phir har gayi.

Angad Thinking: Maine kou perfom kia? Ono nai
khalat faisla kia hai. Main ... Maine kya kia?
Ab Kripa is baat ko kabhi nahin bhoole gi.
Main to uski zindagi main khushia lana chatha tha.
Yeh maine kya kar dia?

Host: (looks around) Angad please join
us at the stage.

Angad slowly walks onto the stage and wipes
away his tears.

Host: So angad, what does it feel like to win
for the 6th time in a row? (while giving him the check
for the money he won)

Angad: It feels good. Lakin mujhe lagta
hai ke yeh jeet harne se be zeda buri
hai, main yeh paisey nahin lai sakta aur main
yeh album nahin karounga.

The crowd is astonished and so is the Host. Angad
walks backstage and passes kripa without realizing
she was listening.

Kripa Thinking: Angad ne paisey kyun nahin liey?
Yeh to koi nahi(new) chaal hogi. Backstage
ja ke kahe ga ke us se khalati hogi hai
aur paisey le lai ga. Yeh to public ko
dikhane kai liey hai.

Kripa evenmore upset walks out of the building.
A crowd of fans surround her waiting for an autograph.
She takes a pen from someone. But realizing
that she doesn't care about her career or anything anymore,
drops the pen and walks away from the crowd while
the media snaps many pictures of what she did.

She goes and sits into Pritvi's Car. After some minutes
Pritvi comes and joins kripa in the car.

Pritvi: Kripa.. tum yahan ho? Main to tumhe
kahan kahan dhund ra tha. Tume patha
hai ke mera kya haal ho gia tha?

Kripa: or kya tume pata hai ke main kis haal main hoon?
Mari akhri umeed bi khatam ho gai usse hara ne ke lia.
*Kripa says in an angry voice*

Pritvi: Mujhe to aise lagta hai ke tumhe sirf
yeh parva hai ke uski jeet hui or ke tumne
sirf use harane kai lihe yeh show kia hai, apne lia nahin.

Kripa: usne meri sari zindagi barbaad kar di hai.
Mujhe sirf uski haar chaiye hai. ushiki haar mai,
mere jeet hogi.

Pritvi: Tum abibhi uske baare main kyun sochti ho?
Is se tumhe kitni publicity mili hai. Is ki tumhe
koi parva nahin hai?

Kripa: (screams) NAHIN. mujhe sirf uski haar main parva hai.

Pritvi: (madly) Haan tum tikh khati ho. Tumhe sirf uski haar
main parva hai. Aur kisiki nahin, meri bhi nahin.

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hey burning_fire. welcome to the IF

and your fanfic is really awesome. and i really wanna knw whtz gonna happen next. Keep up the good work. just wanna knw one thing is tht are you gonna put A-K together. keep up the good work.

hey thats good.... u really have a good hand.....👏

continue soon

Originally posted by: angad_4me

hey burning_fire. welcome to the IF

and your fanfic is really awesome. and i really wanna knw whtz gonna happen next. Keep up the good work. just wanna knw one thing is tht are you gonna put A-K together. keep up the good work.

Thanks soo much for reading my Fanfic. About putting A-K 2gether.. you'd just have to wait and see.

Originally posted by: sunshine1983

hey thats good.... u really have a good hand.....👏

continue soon

Thanku soooo much for reading. means alot. I will probably start writing some more today.. and post 2morow!

Originally posted by: stonex

thats awesome

please continue

thanks

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Thanks! i will continue by 2morow.

Originally posted by: armaans4ever

lovely start! By the way whats ur name? cont soon!

It means alot that you think that. My name is Faryal. Ill probably be continuing by 2morow!!!