FanFic:is Pyar ko main kya naam doon? - Page 3

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Posted: 20 years ago
#21
thanks guys.. im going to start working on the next part.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#22

i really liked the last part you wrote............plz make kripa hurt angad a little.......lol....just kidding😉............i dont want to see angad cry anymore............keep up the gud work............cant wait for the next part................................

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Posted: 20 years ago
#23
Love ur story, but I don't like seeing Angad cry...plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#24
awesome 👏👏👏 continue soon plssssssss
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Posted: 20 years ago
#25

hey! thanks guys.. im glad that you want me to contine.... Im still in the process of writing the 3rd Part.. !!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
cant wait for the third part!! u r doing a great job!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#27

Part 3

~ Is Pyar ko main kya naam doon? ~

Kripa takes Angad's arm off of hers and joins
pritvi back in the car and drive off.

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The Next Morning Kripa goes out to the market
to get some food where she hears a conversation
that interests her.

Woman1: Tumne us ladki ke bare mein suna hai?
Woh ek anjaan ghar mein kisi ladke ke saath re rahi hai.

Woman2: Haan, jobhi unka rishta ho, yeh
to ek bohot bara paap hai.

Woman1: Kya tha us ladki ka naam?

Woman2: Hena Shaam or ladka amir sharma hai.

Woman1: Woh to kitna acha ladka tha, lakin ab
logo nai to uski family ko badnaam kar dia hai,
woh to ab mooh dikhane ke like nahin hai.

The women walk away but leaving Kripa stunned.

Kripa thinking: Pritvi tikh kera tha, mein uske bare
mein kabhi nahin sochti hoon. Uski or
uski family pe kya kya gosriga, maine
ek bar bhi nahin socha. Main us ghar
main nahin re sakti.

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Kripa is back at home and is packing all her things up.
Just as she is Pritvi walks in.

Pritvi: Kripa.. hamari ek dafa larie ho gaye or
tum jarahi ho?

Kripa: Main ab ek second ke liye tumarhe saath
nahin rahoon gi.

Pritvi: Kripa main.. Mujse khalati hogi thi,
ase tum mat jao.

Kripa: Jo tumne karna tha, wo to tumne kar dia,
ab mafi se koi fida nahin.

Pritvi: Agar tum aaj chali gaye, to main
tume kabhi maaf nahin kar sakou ga.

Kripa: Aur tumhari mafi mujhe nahin cahiey.

Kripa leaves and takes a taxi to dadi's house.

Kripa Thinking: Mere paas aur kohi chara nahin tha.
Agar mein pritvi se lari nahin karti, woh mujhe
kabhi nahin jane deta. Kash pritvi, tum
samaj sakte ke mera paas aur kohi nahin raasta tha.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#28
awwwww so sad but as long as kripa and angad get together, I am happy.

welcome to IF. your story is awesome.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#29
awwww....sad but glad that kripa got away from prithvi now she wont be brainwashed that often that angad is bad....
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Posted: 20 years ago
#30
i am so glad tht she is out of his house. i never liked the idea of her staying with prithvi in the first place. great part again.....continue fast.......

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