check this out!u guys r gonna like it!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey guys,I think u would like this poem .not my best work but tell me if u like dit or not


REMEMBER
Remember the time we spent together
Oh,how I wish those days could last forever
Remember the endless talks and fights we had
Just thinking of them makes me both happy and sad

I remember clearly the time when u were unwell
And how u used to help me the endless times I fell
No matter what happens,our love will stay in my mind
And in my eyes,like stars it will shine

Remember when I told u "I think u don't luv me anymore"
That time I felt I was in an ocean and couldn't find the shore
I saw the doubt u had in your eyes
Which were clouded with a sky of lies

And now I long for being with u,
These days i look into your eyes for some clue,
For I thought our love would stay forever,
Remember the time when we were together

Hope u guys liked it
Luv
geet

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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was really kool and so sweet
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Sniff...sniff...sniff.A-K! Get back together....NOW!

Lovely poem, Geetu.😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
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🤗awww geet....u deserve a tight huggie for this poem....

luv u.....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thx u guys,main aur acchi poems likhti rahungi aur ak ke baare mein likhne ki bhi koshish karungi!

luv u all
geet
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Posted: 20 years ago
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omg dis poem is so nice. i really luv it. keep up the gud work
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Posted: 20 years ago
#7
it was a lovely poem geetu!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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If Kripa would Read this Poem.. Um Sure she'll Forgive Angad!!

Whts say.... but must say A Gr8 & SHo Shweet Poem U Wrote!..

Keep up the Good Work Buddy!!

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