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Amnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: diya_snow
nice part... 👏

😭😭itna chota sa reply.thanx alot for making an effort to rite such a long reply.luv u and keep reading and replying

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Amnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: nsheena
tats sweet!! Angad cant do nythn w/o Kripa 😍

where r u😡let me make one thing clear itne chote se comment se kuch nahin hone wala,jaan i m missing u there no one to scold me😭angad ki chinta hai meri nahin😡.well i can't do anything w/o u

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago

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Shina

@nsheena

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Posted: 18 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: amneet89

where r u😡let me make one thing clear itne chote se comment se kuch nahin hone wala,jaan i m missing u there no one to scold me😭angad ki chinta hai meri nahin😡.well i can't do anything w/o u

Am sorry honey😳!! *Shina holds her ears and makes an irresistable puppy face*

U missin ma scoldings?? No probs! i luv to scold! (hehe... something tat mom does nearly 4 nythn and everythn😆 😆 ) I was totally into the Maayka forum this week! Mahi (Neha's character) had a makeover and she was gorgeous. There is extra treat in the form of a hot guy who has entered for Neha (not gonna tell d name. check him am sure u'll luv him)! Do check him out! He's like: WOAH!! ❤️ (Not more than my Angad though) Am really sorrrrryyyy!!! Got carried away by tat guy. Pay a visit to tat forum and u'l kno wat am talkin abt 😳

Ok! I've deviated enuf!! Now if u dont continue soon, am gonna fly to canada and pull ur ears untill u can scream no more!!!!😡 😆 😆

Edited by nsheena - 18 years ago

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ishiqa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#214

continueeeeee soooooooooooooon!!
i'm so into ur fanfic can't wait any longer
ishuu<33

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tanya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#215

omg...u r making us all wait so long..plz continue soon...me missing u so much nd ur ff 2...i love ur ff plz plz pzl plz continue ASAP

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Amnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#216

recap- angad and kripa are really good frnz.they all ar in goa for some kind of singing competition.kripa is having fever.angad yells back at her for not taking care of herself.

Part-19

IN THE RESTAURANT

everybody is there except kripa.
a- aaliya kripa kahan hai,voh theek to hai na
aa- bhai relax,aap se ziada mujhe uski tension hai.she is sleeping
j- lekin kripa ne kuch nahi khaya hai
m- don't worry hum hain na.main aur aaliya sab handle kar lenge
an- lets order some food.
a- i don't feel like eating
angad gets up and leave.kaavya wanted to stop him but josh stopped him.
ka-josh why did u stop me,angad ne kal se kuch nahin khaya
j-(confused)kal se?matlab
l-kal morning kripa se fight hui thi uske baad se kuch nahi kahya hai angad ne.
ka- anhgad bhauat badal gaya hai.pehle to kitni bhi badi fight ho jaaye par ye food addict khana nahin chodta tha.
m- pyaar mein sab hota hai
an- PYAAR aur angad...forget it
kt- mishty u r kidding.u know that angad does not belive in love
aa- mujhe yakeen nahin hota ki tum dono..anjali aur kt ..tumne ye notice nahin kiya ki jab se bhai kripa se mila hai.he is different person.
j-angad ko lagta hai ki kripa uski dost hai,lekin dost to hum bhi hain so why he don't behave same with kripa as he does with all of us.she is special with angad.
m- problem ye hai ki angad sochta hai pyaar naam ki koi cheez nahin hoti,issi liye voh kripa ko lekar apni fellingss ko understand nahin kar pa raha hai
an- confused like kaavya
ka-ab iss sab mein kahan se aa gaya
an- yaad hai tumne propose karne mein kitna time lagaya tha
kt-well anju.lakshya has given kaaya tough competition in this matter
all laughs whereas kaavya and lakshya are fuming. yes,kaavya anad anjali,lakshya and kt are dating each others.the last four months have changed everybody's life.kripa was the one who made them realise them thier love for anjali and kt and angad was saying all this a bullcrap.

we see angad alone at beach.its evening time.the sky is all orange.he is walking along the sea.he is tensed and he himself does not why.he is confused that why is he so worried about kripa. she is just a friend but what i feel for kripa why i don't feel for anyone.he answers his questin himself by thinking that becos all other girls in his group are already hooked up with but this was not much satisfactory.he is now smiling by thinking that how kripa has become so important in his life in past four months.he really wants to know that what destiny has planned for him.he was still in thots when his cell phone rings.its aaliya
aa-(tensed tone) bhai vo kripa..
a-(worried)kya hua kripa ko aaliya
aa- bhai aap jaldi hotel waapis aajao.kripa ka bukhaar aur zoada increase ho gaya hai.we called doctor but josh told me inform u also
angad immediately disconnects the call and leaves for hotel.in kripas room we see the whole group standing and smiling at angad.he is scared to death.he was horrified by thot that kripa is serious but as soon as he sees everyone smiling he gets that it was nothing but a silly joke played by his friends.he is really mad.
a-(angry tone)whose idea was this and where is kripa
k- main yahan hoon and ye idea bhi mera tha,waise kaisa laga mera joke angad
a- joke was so cheap.meri jaan nikal gayi thi,tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kitni important ho,kripa tum aisa kaisa kar sakti ho.plz never do it again,i will die before u
all shocked on angad's words but kripa stood there dumbfounded.she is not able to get why angad said this but his words made her happy from inside.angad is shocked and confused why they are looking at him astonished.what he said that they were so suprised.getting out of shock,josh tells angad thai tis joke was to call him back as all were waiting for him at dinner but there was no sign of him and they all were starving to death.so kripa came up this idea.well after that they all have thier dinner and go for sleep
kripa is lying on her bed thinking abouth what angad said today.his words are still ringing in her ears and make butterflies wrestle in her stomach.thinking about that she goes to sleep

AT REHARSALS IN MORNING
all are at reharsal hall.all insist kripa to sing but shr refused.she is busy watching a newly wed coule in the restaurant from the window.angad notice that and starts singing
a-Jaane kyoon log pyaar karte hain

all join angad with thier instruments

a-Jaane kyoon voh kisi pe marte hain) - 2
Jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon
Jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon
Pyaar mein sochiye to bas gham hai
Pyaar mein jo sitam bhi ho kam hai
Pyaar mein sar jhukaana padta hai
Dard mein muskuraana padta hai
Zaher kyoon zindagi mein bharte hain
Jaane kyoon log pyaar karte hain
Jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon
Jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon

kripa gets that angad is saying this to her and she also joins him

k-Pyaar bin jeene mein rakha kya hai
Pyaar jisko nahin voh tanhaa hai) - 2
Pyaar sau rang leke aata hai
Pyaar hi zindagi sajaata hai
Log chhup chhupke pyaar karte hain
Jaane kyoon saaf kehte darrte hain
Jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon
Ho jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon

angad give her a hopeless look
a-Pyaar bekaar ki musibat hai

k-Pyaar har tarah khoobsurat hai

a-Oh, pyaar se hum door hi achhe

k-Arre pyaar ke sab roop hai sachche

a-Ho, pyaar ke ghaat jo utarte hai
Doobte hai na voh ubharte hai
Jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon

k-Pyaar to khair sabhi karte hain
Jaane kyoon aap hi mukarte hain
Jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon

a-(teasing kripa)Jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon, jaane kyoon

AT NIGHT
all are sitting in kripa's room.josh excuses himself and goes out.he calls dadi
j-dadi mujhe lagta hai plan 2 action mein laane ka waqt aa gaya hai
dadi- theek hai main vedh aur gayatri,dilip aur naina se baat karti hoon

here goes the next part.sorry for the late post.plz reply

as ever😉
amneet 😳

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago

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Shina

@nsheena

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Posted: 18 years ago

#217

b4 i say nythn, am really sry for the late reply . Dunno wat went rong, but the screen went blank suddenly. tats y took so long to reply .My comp has lost it!! and is driving me nuts 😡
Now ur update. I luvd it!! Angad is so sweet and stubborn. But he shudnt starve himself. If u make him starve again, am gonna catch the next flight from india and land up in Canada 😡 😆 😆.
Angad luvs Kripa but doesnt kno tat... tats nice. Alwayz like it wen he's confused abt this 😆 😆 (Crazy right? 🤪 )
The song suited the situation so well 😳
Josh and Dadi are so naughty. Am luving them 😳
And yea, Wonderful part 😛