Dil Kya Kare-AK ff pt20@pg40 - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
just read it all...its really awsum...esp. last two parts...angad's attitude is so much to handle 😳 😉 ...i luv the way he is possesive abt his share of luv...but hope he wil b not mean to krips nemore...lol cont sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago

recap-angad is really mad at himself for hurting kripa.he is driving madly.josh tells dadi everything.dadi helps angad.dadi and josh make a secret plan,dadi also make some calls.next day everbody is at farm house angad is late
ktripa was doing decorations.she was on standing a stoll,she tripped but angad holds her.angad puts her down very carefully and asked
a- r u ok kripa
his voice was calm and was soothing her horror.she noticed the bandages on his hand..she felt like screaming at angad at top of her lungs for hurting himself.angad's voice took her out of her thots
a- i m sorry for yesterday kripa...plz forgive me ...


Part -12

everybody's mouth fell open and in disbelief except josh,he knew this was going to happen but he also got a slight shock becos it was first time ever angad is asking for an apology.kripa is all shocked she stood there bewildered.she took hold of herself she is about to speak but angad speaks
a-(calmly) i know i was rude yesterday...i m also late sometimes(khota(donkey) 😆 .he is always late)

the whole incident of yesterday flashed around her eyes.anger took over her.her blood started boiling.everybody noticed that.angad stood there quietly waiting for reply.there is pin drop silence as if there is no one in farm house.finally kripa broke the silence
k- who the hell do u think u r(anger can b easily recognised in her tone).tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum jo chaahoge vohi hoga..pehle kissi ko jo jee mein aaye keh do,hurt karo aur phir sorry keh do.kitna aasan hota hai soory bol ke apni galti ko chupana BUT MR.KHANNA I M SOORY... I CAN'T FORGIVE U FOR YESTERDAY'S DEED

kripa says this and again get busy in her work.she is confused that what she did was right or wrong,atleast angad realised his mistake and asked an apology whereas angad stood there confused.he realised anger raging in him but before he loose his temper he made himself busy in work.he thot"kripa u have to forgive not today then any otherday."he had a satisfying smile on his face 😊.every body was busy in work, josh took the opportunity,goes outside and calls dadi
j-hai dadi how r u
da-i m fine and now tell me what happened
j- dadi i got biggest shock of my life...angad asked an apology(josh said in disbelief)
then he tells everything to dadi.dadi smiles
da- at least ..angad ne meri baat to maani aur tum jaldi koi bahana bana ke yahan aa jao baaki ka plan discuss karna hai
j- noted boss
josh hangs up.he goes inside.misthi sees him coming from outside and asks
m- josh what were u doing outside?
everybody turns towards josh
j- vo main.. main vo..vo
ka- kya vo vo laga rakhi hai
angad noticies but ingores and get busy in his work
kt- josh tum kuch bolne ki takleef karogr ke nahi
j- ek important call karne gaya tha...voh catering waalon ko batana tha ki food mein chinese bhi hoga
by hearing this angad lost control and again got his same hand hurt.he yells in pain
a- aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh
all hurries towards nagad.kripa was first one to reach.she sees angad has removed his bandage.she gets mad in concerns and shouts
k-tumhe bandage khol kar kaam karne ko kisne kaha tha.see u again hurt urself.tumse bada idiot maine apni poori life mein nahin dekha.
kripa is holdong angad's hand.there is so much concern in her voice.she yelling at him but angad is lost in her eyes he was so touched by kripa's concern.he felt as if he was the luckiest person on this earth.those eyes..had so much concern for him.kripa kept on yelling but angad was stairing at her and smiling.aaliya's voice brings him back
aa- omg bhai aap ke hath se to kitna khoon beh raha hai.lets go and do bandage
all are sitting in living room.mishti is doing bandage
m- tumse bada idiot is duniya mein koi nahin hoga angad..trust me
a-(wid lots of innoncence)bhabhi(angad calls misthi bhabhi outside collage)i was not able to do my work properly so i removed my bandage.(looks at kripa)
m-(worried) par angad u shuold b careful.see ur hand's condition.it got hurt twice
a-not twice but thrice(looking at kripa who was looking at angad continously in disbelief)
ka- and how's that
angad realies what he said and he knew he was in trouble now but he handled the situation nicely.misthy was still doing bandage.josh takes a big sigh and speaks
j- kaash angad teri jagah main hota aur itni pyaari or meethi daant mujhe pad rahi hoti
m- shut up josh its not at all funny
ka- is mein josh kya galti hai .after all misthi he loves u..
an- shut up kaavya
ka-(irritaed) ab tumne shut up kyun kaha
an-kyunki ye waqt mazak nahi hai...par main tumhe kyun bata rahi ..meri baat samajhne ke liye dimmag ki zaroorat hai jo ki tumhaare paas to definately nahin hai
ka- what do u mean 😡
an- dekha tum nahin samjhe 😆
j- chillax ..i have to go becos of urgent work ..(turns to angad)angad u better take care of urself

josh reaches dadi's house.he sees both khanna and sharma family sitiing there.he is confused.he greets everybody and hugs nishant.he go to dadi and sits beside her.they all plan something that v all can't hear. all r happy.dilip and vedh hug eachother.


AT NIGHT OUTSIDE FARM HOUSE

angad & aaliya has got the duty to bring nishant and gauri to farm house.every body is there and all are waiting for themall the lights are turned off.
n- tum dono humne farm house par kyun le ke aaye ho
aa- bhai chup chaap andar chalo
nishant and aaliya are having an argument where angad is asking gauri silly quetions.he was bossing over gauri like gauri isv a kis.there was lots of innocence and concern in his voice.
a- app ne khana waqt pe khaya
g-haan
a- app walk pe gayi
g- haan
a- aapne zaida kaam toh nahin kiya
g- naahin
a- aapne rest kiya ke nahin
gauri was fed up now and was smiling at silly questions of angad
g- angad tum to nishant se bhi zaida possesive ho,ye sab to nishant ne bhi nahin poocha mujhse.i wonder jab tum baap banoge to kya hoha...i feel pity on ur wife

angad didn't like the fact that ninshant didn't ask her anything he was to get back at nishant but they all entered out house.as they entered the lights were turned on & all screamed
all-THANK YOU
there was huge smile on gauri's face...naina told four of them to go change.angad and kripa has not seen eachother yet as angad is busy getting mad at nishant not taking care of gauri.kripa is noticing angad and smiling at his silly acts.angad was telling and complainig to everybody that nishant didn't ask gauri all the questions he asked.he was saying nishant irresponsible.all were smiling at angad is upto.kripa was noticing an another side of angad. he was wearing a black sherwaani and red duppataa arount his neck.he was looking adorable 😳 she was so confused about angad when dadi joins her.kripa hugs dadi and starts crying.
da- kripa voh itna bhi bura nahin hai
k- aap kiski baat kar rahi hain(getting seprating)
da- kya tum nahin jaanti
k-dadi aap nahin jaanti ki usne kal kya kiya..
da-(interruptig)- main sab jaanti hoon aur ye bhi jaanti hoon ke usne apne aap ko punish bhi kiya aur sorry bhi kaha...tum soch rahi hi ki main toh uski hi side loongi afterall i m his dadi but kripa..
k- main jaanti hoon aap jitni uski dadi hain utni meri bhi hain
dadi smiles but before they can continue kt and lakshya drags them for dance.all r dancing except angad.he is standing beside gauri like her bodygaurd. but josh drags angad too.this was the time when there eyes meet.it was coincident or someting kripa was also wearing a black salwaar kameez with red embroidrey on it.when angad saw her,totally lost in her eyes..


well guys this it all for this part.i hope it is long enough as i was told to make long parts.plz plz plz reply

AS EVER😳

AMNEET😉


Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok...i m d 1st one 2 rep...hey u edited so menay times.....lol....ok...dis part was really gud... 😳 ...nw atleast dey are meeting.... 😃 ...its niceeeeee 👏 ..n con soon....really i juz came online 2 chek yer part 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 sorry for late reply its mindblowing dear 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was a wicked part cant wait for them to get together
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow great part amneet!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up...cont soon... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
luvd it! am really vvv SOORRRRRYYYYYYY!!! 😭
grt part! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

such a cute part, oh and kripa, u r very bad, u should forgive ur love 😆 angad, u r so romantic, hay gosh agar koi humse bhi aisa dekhta. maaare gaye main toh. 😆 when are angad and kripa going to be together, wait i dont want it to happen so soon. anyways plz continue i am still dying to hear the rest of the story, plz continue fast. 😳

Edited by tweetylicious - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
such a cute part, oh and kripa, u r very bad, u should forgive ur love 😆 angad, u r so romantic, hay gosh agar koi humse bhi aisa dekhta. maaare gaye main toh. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nsheena

luvd it! am really vvv SOORRRRRYYYYYYY!!! 😭
grt part! 👏 👏

chillax.i m not mad at u

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