Fan fic (first love) - Page 58

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Posted: 20 years ago
YOU PEOPLE HAVE DONE A REALLY GREAT JOD👍🏼 TO ALL OF YOU. KEEP IT UP..............
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Posted: 20 years ago

I am, giv me few mins

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Posted: 20 years ago

K: haan... cryin... sirf dost.....

BOTH TURN ARND CRYIN AND THE SONG PLAYS....

I'll continu

Kripa runs upto Angad fpr one last hug, they hugged each other very tightly, from behind a tree somone, took a camara out and took started takeing pictures of Angad and Kripa hugging.......................................

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I hav 2 go and eat, now! But i'll be bac 2 continu, if u want 2 u can contiue!

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Posted: 20 years ago

Kripa runs upto Angad fpr one last hug, they hugged each other very tightly, from behind a tree somone, took a camara out and took started takeing pictures of Angad and Kripa hugging.......................................

I'll try to continue

Angad and Kripa let go off each other

A: okay ab bas kripa. hume aapne aap ko sambhalna hoga. We can't do this anymore.

They both wipe their tears.

K: come on, let's go home.

They reach home and go inside. The families are talking about preparations for kripa's wedding.

As they walk in;

K's mom: Oh god, how are we going to do the preparations for the wedding in just two days? Oh, (spotting angad and kripa )aa gaye aap loge

A: hey auntie, don't worry about the preparations, main hoon na! Main sab kuch karoonga! You won't have to worry about a single thing!

Kripa looked at Angad and could see the tears in his eyes.

A: Ek minute auntie, main abhi aata hoon.

Angad goes upstairs into the bathroom and cries his eyes out.

Meanwhile Gayatri (that's the name of k's mom isn't it?) looked at Kripa and knew there was something wrong.

K's mom:Beta kya hua ?

K:Erm kuch nahin mom.

K's mom (thinking): Kripa ki ankhen itni lal kyun hai? kuch to baat hai ……

Ok that's where I stop. Sorry about the bad Hindi!😳

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Posted: 20 years ago

K:Erm kuch nahin mom.

K's mom (thinking): Kripa ki ankhen itni lal kyun hai? kuch to baat hai ……

KRIPA'S MOM GETS WORRIED AND ISNT ABLE TO TAKE HER MIND OFF THE TOPIC. GOES TO NAINA...

G: naina i have a problem....

N: what happened? why r u so tense....

G: i just met kripa

N: to

G: mujhe lagta hai ki woh is shaadi se khush nahi hai....

N: tumhe aisa kyon lagta hai..

G: bahar sab shaadi ki baat kar rahe hai aur woh gumsum si udaas bethi hai.. uski aankhen bhi lal hai jaise bahut roh ke aayi ho....

N: are woh tum sab ko itni jaldi chod ke jaane ka gam hoga

G: pata nahi ho sakta hai par meri gut feelin hai kuch to gadbad hai...

N: tum tension mat lo main angad se kehti hoon usse baat karne ke liye....

G: ok

NAINA GOES ON A LOOK OUT FOR ANGAD...

ANGAD.. ANGAD.... WHERE R U

SHE ASKS TEDDY.. HAVE U SEEEN ANAGD

TEDDY: mam he is in his room

N: ok

INSIDE ANGAD'S ROOM NAINA ENTERS AND SHE SEES ANGAD CRYIN....

N: kya hua angad what has happened???

A: angad just hugs her and says nothin mom....

N: kuch to baat hai kya hua angad

A: mom maine kaha na kuch nahi..

NAINA THINKIN THERE KRIPA IS SAD AND HERE ANGAD THERE IS SOMETHIN FISHY

N: r u sad on kripa's leavn...

A: yes ma..

N: par ek dost ki judaiii ka itna dukh.. kahin tumhe..

A: kya mom..

N: kahin tumhe kripa se pyyaar to nahi ho gaya

A: nahi mom.. she is not my type

N: tell me the truth angad

A: mom

N: angad.... truth...

A: yes mom yes i love her more than life itself

N: and she

A: she too

N: KYA!!!!!!!!

SILENCE...

N: ITNI BADI BAATTUMNE MUJHE KYON NAHI BATAYI

A: i was abt to tell when this happened...

N: pa yeh shaadi to phir barbadi hai, ise rokna padega

A: nahi mom yeh KD (kripa's dad) ki wish hai

N: par...

A: mom aap promise karo aap yeh baat kise se nahi kahoge....

NAINA IN TEARS... OK NAHI KAHONGI AND SHE RUSHES OUT OF THE ROOM AND ANGAD BREAKS DOWN....

KRIPA AND ANGAD BOTH PUT ON THE CD PLAYER AND LISTEN TO THE SONG THINKIN ABT THE HAPPY TIMES AND CRY... THE SONG IS:

Bichhde abhi to ham bas kal parson
Jioongi main kaise, is haal mein barson
Maut na aayi teri yaad kyon aayi
Hay lambi judai
Chaar dinon ka pyaar ho rabba
Badi lambi judai, lambi judai
Honthon pe aaye meri jaan duhai
Hay lambi judai
Chaar dinon ka pyaar ho rabba
Badi lambi judai, lambi judai

Ek to sajan mere paas nahin re
Duje milan di koi aas nahin re -2
Uspe yeh sawan aaya -2
Aag lagaayi, hay lambi judai
Chaar dinon ka pyaar ho rabba
Badi lambi judai, lambi judai

Toote zamaane tere haath nigode, haath nigode
Dil se dilon ke tune sheeshe tode, sheeshe tode
Hijr ki oonchi, hijr ki oonchi deevaar banaayi
Hay lambi judai
Chaar dinon ka pyaar ho rabba
Badi lambi judai, lambi judai

Baag ujad gaye, baag ujad gaye khilne se pehle
Panchhi bichhad gaye milne se pehle -2
Koyal ki kook, koyal ki kook ne hook uthaayi
Hay lambi judai
Chaar dinon ka pyaar ho rabba
Badi lambi judai, lambi judai
Honthon pe aaye meri jaan, duhai
Hay lambi judai
Chaar dinon ka pyaar ho rabba
Badi lambi judai, lambi judai

OK SOMEONE PLEASE CONTINUE...

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Posted: 20 years ago

thanks but gtg go now... have to sleep. so agood night to everyone and see u tomm..

GOD BLESS...

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Posted: 20 years ago
sweet dreamz!! the stry was amazing!!!!!!👏 plz continue!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

Hey guys im new here!and i read thiskyph first love thing and i really liked it !plz continue

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Posted: 20 years ago

it is a amazingly good story

thanks

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Posted: 20 years ago
that was sooo cute i have tears in my eyes. Please cont as soon as possible

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