Fan fic (first love) - Page 52

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Posted: 20 years ago
Hope u enjoyed ya sleep Deepey!🤗Wow Kaj! ur gud, i'll continue after!
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Posted: 20 years ago
gud job Kaj and Deepy did u sleep well enuf??😉 hey dancing babe- i also hav 300 2 go!! congratz!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

Good job 👏

Plz continue...

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Guys I don't know if u'll like this part or not coz my brainn isn't working right now. I'm still half asleep.

Kripa gets upset n angry. She gets up n shouts

K:Pyar karte ho to darrte kyun ho? Kyun nahin kehte ki tum mujhse pyar karte ho?

Angad looks at her with stunned eyes. She goes running back into the little room in the garage

Angad is really surprised and doesn't know how to react. He thinks "is it true that the feeling that I'm feeling inside is love. But no I can't love Kripa. She deserves better. I don't deserve her. I'd ruin her future. So he decides that he should talk to her.

He knocks on her door, but she doesn't open it.

A: Kripa please jaan I wanna talk to u.

K: go away angad.

A: please tumhe meri kasam.

Kripa slowly gets up and opens the door.

Angad goes inside and sits next to her, he takes her hand and says, "Kripa please listen to me."

K: angad I'm sorry, actually I was stupid, I don't know what happened to me.

A: Its ok Kripa I understand but Kripa I don't know I don't want all of this. I want us to be friends forever. All these relationships will cause complications for us.

K: Angad please don't feel sorry for me ok, I know what ur trying to say.

A: no u don't know what I'm trying to say. I love u too damn it I love u too.

Kripa looks at him surprised.

Angad has tears in his eyes "Ha its true I love u."

Kripa also has tears in her eyes.

Angad hugs her tight.

Finally they let go of each other.

A: Kripa please don't take this the wrong way, but I don't want this relationship. I just want us to be friends.

Kripa looks at him: I know Angad, I'm scared of my feelings too.

A: kripa I just want the best for u, and I'm not the one for u. I don't wanna ruin ur life.

K: I don't care Angad, I still love u.

A: Please Kripa, please. Marry Rahul please. He'll give u all the happiness of the world which I won't be able to give u……………..

I'll continue later

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Posted: 20 years ago
aww😭. that was lovely Deepey. i'll be waiting for ur next part
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Posted: 20 years ago
😭😭😭Datz so sad, Deepey, yaar, tum hara muqabla, Ekta bhi nahi kar payeghi!😭😭😭Pleze continu sum1!
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Posted: 20 years ago
tat waz amazing!!😭 i had tears!!!!!!plz cont.!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
who's gonna continue or should i???
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Posted: 20 years ago
go on deepey, u write the next part. Make up for ur absence😉
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: Evee

66 pages!!!!! great going!!!

woohoo!!! Im so proud of us 😛

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