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Posted: 20 years ago
u guyz shuld b proud!!!!👏
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Posted: 20 years ago

ok i will continue:

K: angad u know love has no boundaries and why do u say u will destroy my future

A: i feel so as i am good for nothin

K: why do u think that. u can make a mark for ur self

A: how can i do that

K: hey u have a good voice ur charming why dont u sing.

A: sing and me.....

K: yes u

K: and the best reason is that i love u and trust u.....

A: but.....

K: what but......

K: kya tum nahi chahte ho ki hum dost se humsafar bane. angad tumhe meri kasam sach kehan

A: haan

K: to fir yeh tumhe mere liye karna hoga, please.....

A: ok mein papa se baat karta hoon. par mujhe nahi lagta unhe yeh achha lagega

K: nahi unhe yeh achha lage ga

A: ok i will try that, but ab yeh sab chodo aur kuch baat kaho main tumse

K: kya

Angad takes her hand and they stare at each other oblivious to the world... keep on looking and then finally hug and what a hug...

a: kripa main tumhe kuch dikhana chahta hoon

K: kya

A: chalo to...

kripa ok

THEY LEAVE FOR A PLACE THAT IS NOWHERE IN THIS WORLD. TRESS ALL AROUND AND U CAN SEE THE MOON...

A: maine socha that ki mujhe sab sachha pyar hoga to main api sweetheart ko yahan leke aaonga

K: shies away and hugs... angad

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Posted: 20 years ago
awww..soo cute someone plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

A: Please Kripa, please. Marry Rahul please. He'll give u all the happiness of the world which I won't be able to give u……………..

Kripa looks at him: i don't care I know i'll be happy wid u.

A: please mere liye marry rahul please.

K: why should I marry him i don't love him

A: Jaanta hu, but Kripa ur parents izzat, ur entire future depends on it.

Kripa looks at him: why is my life always like this. Angad but I love u

Angad can't control himself and hugs her again.

A: I'm sorry jaan, i won't be able to keep u happy and give u the love that u deserve.

A: promise me that we'll always be best friends.

Kripa has tears in her eyes but takes his hand. "i promise."

Angad kisses her on the forehead.

A: promise nothing wiil be different in our relationship

K: I promise

A: promise ki u will always smile

K: I promise.

A: ok r we taking vows or something.

kripa smiles and Angad says comeon lets get back to the hotel.

They go back to the hotel but their'a an odd feeling of love and care between them now.

They both go to sleep in ech others arms

Rabba-Ve-Delena thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
2 stories, wow both excelent!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

oops i didn't know she was continuing.

sorry

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Posted: 20 years ago

it's ok deepy...

guys pick one story and continue.....

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Posted: 20 years ago
both of them are sooo good the next person who is going to continue can decide which story to go off of...
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Posted: 20 years ago

The next day Angad n Kripa spend working in the morning, then having fun on the beach n in the mall as friends. They have to go back in the evening

Angad is driving back to Mumbai. Kripa keeps looking at him

K:Angad, tumne business join kar liya hai. Uve become responsible now. Kya tumhe nahin lagta ki ye kaafi hai hum dodno ke liye? Hum shaadi kar sakte hai

A:Kripa...I love u but i dont wanna lose u

K:Tum mujhse shaadi karke mere aur paas aaoge, mujhse door nahin.

A:Theek hai. Main Mumbai jaakar dekhta hoon ok

Kripa smiles n hugs him

K:Oh i love u Angad

A:Ok ok cgodo. I cant see the road.

She lets go.

They reach mumbai n have a big smile on her face. They go inside to see a different atmosphere

G:Kripa beta tum aa gaye

Angad's parents r inside as well. So is Kartik

K:Haan mama. Kya hua sab theek hai?

G:Woh actually beta, tumhare papa ki tabiyat tumhare jaane ke baad kharab ho gayi

K:Hey Bhagwaan. Main unse mil kar aati hoon

G:Woh abhi so rahe hai. Tum kal milena. Woh jald se jald tumhari shaadi dekhna chahte hai. Pundit ji ne agle mahine ka mahurat diya tha. Par Rahul ko isi hafte wapas jaana hai. Isliy hum shaadi 2 din baad kar rahe hai.

Kripa n Angad r shocked. They just look at each other silently. Their eyes r doing all the talking. Kripa makes her way to her room while Angad stays downstairs n greets everyone. He forces a smile on. Kripa reaches her room n stares at the floor. Silent tears r running down her face.

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Posted: 20 years ago
nahin !😭 plz dont let kripa and rahul get married !main mar jaoonge!😆😆o/j

plz sum1 continue !

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