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Posted: 20 years ago

LAST PART:

Prithvi is all heart broken N remembers all those moments with kripa….

When he saw her 4 da 1st time in airport ……

When kripa was about 2 fall n he holded her in his arms….

Kripa's smile….. kripa's innocent face…. Kripa holding those candles……

Tadap tadap k ish dil se aah nikalti rahi….

Mujhko saja di pyaar ki yesa kyaa guna kiya…..

Toh lut gayeeeeeeeeeeee

Haan lut gayeee

Toh lut gaye hume teri mohobaat main….😭

On the other side.. angad n kripa r still in the rain….. .now every 1 is lookin at them n kripa feels uncomfortable……… then angad.. takes off his jacket n makes her wear that …… she looks deep into angad's eyes n then walks away with all those tears in her eyes…….. 😭

Misthy is really sad 4 her bro n decides 2 talk 2 him…

Prithvi is cryin but as soon as he sees misty coming 2 wards him.. he wipes his tears…

M( all in tears): bhai…. Aap kripa se……..

P: kitni aajeeb baat hai nah misty….. maine zindagi main peheli baar kisi ko chaha … aaur usko yeh bat batane se peheli hi usko kho diya…..

M: bhai kripa aur angad……..

P: haan main yeh janta tha ki angad kisi ko chahata hai… bahot chahata hai.. lekin woh ladki kripa hogi yeh maine kabhi socha naa tha……..

Lekin aab .. aab main khud angad ko uska pyaar wapas dilaunga…. Aaur isi main meri khusi hai…..main kripa aaur angad ko phir se ek dusre k kareeb launga…. Aaur main kripa ko kabhi pata chalne nahi doonga ki main usse kitna pyaar karta hoon.. usne hamesha mujko ek dost k roop main dekha hai aaur main ek aache dost ki tarah usko uska pyaar wapas dilaunga……

Misty is all in tears listening 2 her bro's words……. But she still smiles n is really proud of her bhai….

Kripa's room

kripa is holding angad's jacket n is cryin when prithvi comes in….

as she sees prithvi she quickly wipes off her tears….

P: kripa….. main tumse bahot naraaj hoon…. Main toh samjta tha ki hum aache dost hain.. lekin…..

K: lekin kyaaa prithvi……. ???

P: lekin tumne toh aapne dost se bahot kuch chupaya hai….. . mujhe itna paraya banadiya kripa ki tumhari zindagi ki itni badi baat mujhse chupayee tumne??????

Now kripa is cryin….. she knows wat prithvi is talking about……

P: main janta hoon ki angad ne tumhe bahot hurt kiya hai….. lekin kripa woh aaba badal gaya hai…… maine dekha hai usse din raat tumhare liye tadapte huwe….. aery kaha kaha nahi dhuda usne tumne….. jab usse ehsaas huwa ki usne tumhara dil tod diya…. Nafrat karne laga woh aapne aap se…... aapne aap ko mitadena chahata tha woh

Kripa is all shatterd n has tears in her eyes….

Kripa itna chahane wala kismet walo ko milta hai……. Bahot kam log hote hai.. jinko kisi aaur ka pyaar hasil hota hai….. tum lucky ho kripa angad tumse bahot pyaar karta hai…… bahot pyaar!!!!! Itna pyaar toh sayed main bhi……… ( then he stops 4 a while)…….. I mean itna pyaar toh tume koi aaur kar hi nahi sakta……. ..

Aapne pyaar ko pehechano kripa…. Isse pehele ki bahot der na hojaye……

The prithvi just walks away leaving a shattered kripa behind…..

Prithvi's words r keep repeating in her mind…… n all those scenes where angad tried her 2 expalin that he was sorry 4 everything…… …

now as soon as she realizes how much angad loves her she is running 2 wards angad …. But he not there…….. she searches 4 angad here n there but cannot find him……. It's already mindnight n angad is still missing……. She calls angad's name here n there but there is no response……..

finally she sees angad stting on a rock near by the beach……. .

she goes 2 wards him n angad is all shocked 2 see her in front of him…….

He just cannot belive his eyes…….. he is about 2 hug kripa when kripa pushes him away…….

K( with all tears in her eyes): I hate u angad !!!! I hate u…..

jante ho in do salo main tumhare waje se bahot royee hoon….Aapne dil se tumhara har ehsaas mitana chaha….. kuyn ki tume mera dil toda.. mere vishwas ko toda…. Mere pyaar ka mazak banaya……

lekin maine tumse kabhi nafrat nahi ki angad….. sirf tumhare liye mere maan main kadwahat thi…… kuyn ki mujhe laga ki sayed meri hi galti hai jo maine tum jaise insaan se pyaar kiya…. .. uspe itna vishwa kiya….

lekin aaj…. Aaj main tumse bahot nafrat karti hoon… I hate u angad I hate u!!!!!!!!! jante ho kuyn?????? Kuyn ki tum mujse bahot pyaar karte ho…. jo main desrve nahi karti!!!!!!!

Now angad is all in tears n at the same time has a smile in his face…..( khusi k aaasu)……. 😳.he is really relifed n wants 2 hug kripa…..

But kripa again pushes him away….

K: tum bahot bure ho angad……. I hate u…… tum ne aapne aap ko takleef di mere waijse se….

Maine najane kitni bar tumhe galat samjha… phir bhi mujhse itna pyaar karte ho….. kuyn angad kyun?????

I hate u …. I really really hate u…

Now angad comes close 2 her……

Grabs her by her arms tightly……

A: phir se kehna that u hate me!!!

K: I hate u

A: kyaa ???? sunayee nahi diya zara zor se kehena..

K: I hate u…

A: again..

K: I hate u…

Angad pulling her really close…

Again…

K( lowering her voice): I hate u

A: again….

K( all in tears): I hate u…..

Angad wipes off her tears…..

A: phir se kaho .. that u hate me…

Kripa looks deep into his passionate eyes…… ..

Now she just can't do it anymore n throws herself into his arms…..

K: I hate u.. angad… main tumse bahot bahot bahot nafart karti hoon…………..😳

They both r cryin n hugging each other!!!!!!! N after a long time…. They let go each other….

K: I'm sorry angad …I'm sorry….

A: no kripa I am sorry…..

K: dekha I told u nah … I hate u…

Tum toh mujhe sorry bhi kehene nahi dete

A: kyun ki jab tum sorry keheti ho toh tumhere aakho main aasu aate hai…. Aaur main tumhe rota huwa nahi deksakta…..

Then kripa smiles n again hugs him sayin I hate u……

K: kyun karte ho mujhse itna pyaar????? I really hate u….

Now both of them r hugging n smiling….. n enjoyin the moonlight in the beach…

Prithvi n misty sees them 4rm a distance n smiles……

Prithvi( smiling with tears in his eyes): kaha tha nah… main in dono ko milaunga….

M: I am proud of u bhai…. U r just da best…..

6 months later

there is a huge celebration goin on in Khanna house…. N it's angad n kripa's engagement…… both angad's family n kripa's familya r really happy seeing them 2 gether….

Prithvi is still in love with kripa but now as a best fren…. Both angad n Kripa are really very thankful 2 misty n prithvi coz they r da 1 who brought them 2 gether……

The ring ceremony takes place……

Angad has a evil smile on his face n says

A: aakhir bana hi liya nah tumhe Mrs Kripa Angad Khanna…

K: ooo hooo …. Itna confidence aacha nahi hai…. Mr khanna .. aabhi toh sirf engagement huwee hai… shadie nahi…. kyyaa pata kal kyaa hojaye????

A( lookin deep in her eyes) ayeeee!!! tum sirf angad ki ho!!!!! u r only n only mine samjhee!!!!!!!!

M: ooo nooo aab tum dono phir se suru mat hojana…… kitne papad belne pade teh tum logo ko milwane k liye……. I don wana do that all over again…..

P: aarey sis!!! Inke inhi jhagde main hi toh inka pyaar chupa hai….. ..

Jaha pyaar hai waha takraar hai…. Right ?????

Angad n kripa 2 gether :RIGHT!!!!!

Now every 1 is happy n ladte jhagate angad n kripa lived happily 2 gether…

Okay guyz this was the end of this story…. Hope u all liked it…. N thanku sooo much 4 the appreciation…………. I'm really getting emotional rite now…while concluding this story……BUT Guyz I'm gona start a new fan fic named "Someone Somewhere is made 4 u……"

I'm gona post that story really soon… plzzzz do read that story… all my stories r 4 all my frens in this forum…..😃

love u all

eshika😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
Guyzzz if u don mind.... plzzz let meh know which were u fav scenes or parts in this story!!!!!!!!! coz that will help me 4 my new fan fic.... N if u don have any ... that's perfectly fine... i'll try 2 make it better in the other fan fic 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
WoW!!!! Ur A GrEaT WRIter!!!! Jst WANNa saY ThanKZ For eNterTaiNG Us WiTh Ur WoNdErFul StOry!!!! My FaV PaRt WaS..............Hmmm............JSt To MANy To NamE!!!!!!😃
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Posted: 20 years ago

that was just too good.

very very emotional ending.

well done.

thanks

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Posted: 20 years ago

wow...its great story....and nice ended...thanx bunch...

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
your story was awsome sad that u ended it but glad that u r gonna start a new one!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: eshika

OMG!!!!!!!!! i am just crazzy 4 songs...... i included 3 songs in 1 episode 2 day!!!!😆😆 😆

hope u guyz liked the songs i choosed😳

yes even i love the song, its simply awesome!

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Posted: 20 years ago

Wow, Great ending....thanx for writing an awesome story..👏👏👏

Defintely going to read ur new fan-fic...can't wait!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
oh eshika i just loved the story
angadkripafan thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey u told 2 tell which were the parts v like n i wanted 2 tell that i loved all the parts n cant choose 1 or 2

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