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Posted: 20 years ago
REALLY WHY, WHY LEFT US AT HIS POINT, CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE..........
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Posted: 20 years ago
Eshika u must continue. The suspense is killing me. lol.
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Posted: 20 years ago
Plz Continue. Can't wait to read the next part. Plz Plz Plz post the next part 2day. 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
Eshika meri jaan cont karo naa, suspence ka mara meri tho death he hojani hai 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago

Wow that was great, plz continue soon!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
hey thank u soo much guyz.... i am soooo glad that u liked it... but soo sorry 4 continuing late... anywaz here goes da the next part😃
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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 30

it's raining outside n angad pulls kripa out of the car……..

angad is holding her hand tightly n not letting her go….kripa is tryin 2 free herself but angad pulls her closer….

Both of them r wet in rain….

Angad looks deep into her eyes angrily…..

A:( yelling at kripa): kab tak kripa kab tak?????? Aakhir kab tak aapne aap se jhoot bolti rahogi tum????

Kripa looks at him with tears in her eyes…😭

Seeing those tears angad a bit clams down n pulls her more closer….

A( in a deep pained voice): kuyn kripa kyun???? Aakhir tum kyun mujhe aaur mujhse jyaada khud ko takleef de rahi ho????? tum kuyn khud bhi tadap rahi ho aaur mujhe bhi tadparahi ho…… ????

Akhir tum keheti kyun nahi ki tumhe mujhe pyaar hai????

Kripa ( tryin 2 free herself) : main tumse pyaar nahi karti….

A: meri aakho main dekh kar kaho ki tumhe mujhse pyaar nahi…..

Kaho kiiiii tum voh sari yaade bhula chuki ho……

Kaho ki main tumheri zindagi main koi manyeene nahi rakhta….

Now Kripa is cryin more….

A: tell me damit !!!!!!!!!!! talk 2 me…..

He holds kripa hard by her arms n shakes her…..

K: bas karo angad bas karo!!!!!!!! 😭

A: yehi toh main tumse keh raha hoon kripa… BAS KARO!!!!! Aab Bas bhi karo…..

Then he walks away angrily n gets inside the car leaving a cryin kripa behind……

Farm house:

misty n prithvi r really worried coz it's really late n both angad n kripa have not reached yet……

M: god!!!! Kaha rehegaye yeh dono… I hope everything is fine….

Angad kripa in car:

Both angad n kripa r sad….. there is a strange kind of silence between them…

The whole way they both r thinking of each other but not takin

Finally angad n kripa reach the farm house….. both r all wet in rain….

M: finally u both r here

aarey lekin tum dono itne bheeg kaise gaye…. Gadi main he aaye the nah????

Both angad n kripa r quite n look into each others eyes….. n before misty cud further as anything both of them goes separate ways………….

M( suspicious): jaroor inke beech kuch huwa hai……..

Okay 2 B continued…

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Posted: 20 years ago
awwww eshika, I loved it. Just read the last three parts. I am waiting anxiously for the next part.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Arre Eshika, when will they get together.... un logoko ekta jaise mat tadpao...
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: phoenixsuns

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Arre Eshika, when will they get together.... un logoko ekta jaise mat tadpao...

soon very soon... just wait n watch....

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