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Posted: 20 years ago
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😭hey guys this ez da 1st time i am writing a story hope u guys like it...

angad comes 2 know about naina's intention and ez very annoyed by his mom's behviour and tells naina in a rude way that ap chahe kuch bhi karle.. meri shadi aagar hogi toh sirf aur sirf kripa k sath.... now naina iz up 2 something... she tells herself that mujhe jaldi hi kuch kuch karna padega warna angad ko ish pagalpan k vaje se bahot badi kimat chukana padega...... she thinks something n calls anita!!!!

Next scene iz between A n K

kripa is sitting in her room thinkin about angad...

angad: kripa maine faisala karliya hai.. hum dono kal hi shadi karenge...

kripa: par angad...

A: shushhhh !!!!!aab kuch mat bolo... aab bas woh din dur nahi jab tum aur main hamesha k liye ek hojayenge. mujhe duniya ki koi parwa nahi hai ..jisko jo samaj na hai shamjhe... aab mujhe tumse koi dur nahi karsakta koi nahi....

then both of them hug each other n angad kisses kripa's forehead

next scene between angad n naina

naina: beta woh main tumse kuch baat karna chahti thi kripa k bare main

angad: mom plzzz aaba main kripa k khilaf kuch nahi sununga. aap agar chahe ya nachahe mai kal kripa se shadi kar rahaho

naina(crying) 😡 : nahi beta tum mujhe galat samajraheho .. main toh yeh kehena chahati hoon ki mujhe tumhari shadi se koi aaitraaz nahi... mujhe ehessas hogaya hai ki mere bete ki khusi main hi meri khusi hai..aab tumhari shadie k reponsibility sab meri hai...

naina walks away as a surprised angad looks at her.

angad n kripa:

angad see that kripa iz deely thinkin some thing n iz very tensed...

angad( giving kripa all joking expression): kyaa yar kripa!!! hamari shadi ko sirf 24 hrs bache hai aur tum ho ki najane kis duniya main ho... kyaa huwa Mrs angad khanna? peheli bar shadi karrahi ho esiliye nervous ho kyaaa? don worry yar.. paheli bar mai yesa hi hota hai... lekin bad main sab thik hojayega

kripa: aaba kyaa kare Mr khanna main aap ki tarah experienced nahi hoona esiliye..

angad: tum aapne aap ko lucky mano kyunki tume ek experienced rock star hubby milne wala hai..then both of them laugh and angad holds kripa's cheeks n says nahi kripa tumse jyada toh main lucky hoon kyunki sirf tum hi woh ladki ho jo mere adheri zindagi ki roshni banke aaye ho...

kripa: pata nahi kyun angad mujhe dar sa lagraha hai...aaisa lagta hai ki kuch galat hone wala hai..

angad: aaisa kuch nahi hoga kripa.. tum yuhi darrahiho aab toh mom bhi razi hogaye hai...aaba kuch nahi hoga

kripa: i hope so angad. then she rest her head on angad's shoulder.

next day A n k's marrige(kripa geetting ready in da outhouse) when anita comes in

anitah: baut khush lag rahi ho kripa. haan bhai kyun na ho... tum jaisi middle class ladki ko ek bahot rich pati jo milne wala hai... am i right kripa? main toh tume ek bahut smart ladki samajti thi lekin tum toh ek number ki bewakuf nikli ... tum ne yeh soch bhi kaise liya ke angad tum jaise down market ladki k sath shadie karega... woh toh sirf tumse aapna badla le raha hai... yeh toh aapni khusnasibi samjho ki angad ne tume badla lene ke bahane se hi sahi... woh tumhare kareeb toh aaya.. warna tum jaise ladki ke liye toh............ khair jane do.. mai janti hoon ki tum mere baato par yakeen nahi karogi...... esiliye main tumhe ek tape dikhna chahati hoon

she shows kripa da tape in which angad tells manaan that i will destroy kripa.... he tells that ush ladki ko toh mai kahi mu dhikane k layek nahi chodunga

kripa who is all shattred and crying tells herself that nahi angad yesa nahi karsakta... mera angad yesa nahi hai..... woh jarur aayega.... mera dil keheta hai ki woh aayega😭😭

next scene

angad is driving his red car n is thinkin about kripa (a happy version of kypn plays) he is thinkin all thoes cute moments spend with kripa n tells himself that main aa raha hoon kripa main aa rahahoon.....bas aab intezaar ki ghadhie khatam huee

suddlely a a truck hits his car .........

on one side we see kripa cryin and tearing all Angad's pics on the other we see angad taken 2 da hospital. doctor says that he has gone 2 coma...😭😭

now we see some1 calling kartik in his cell n tells him that kam hogaya....kartik gives an evil smile.....😡

1 month later....

kripa has gone back 2 nainital n angad ia slowly recovering.... the first word he utters is kripa but when he opens his eyes he sees misthi in front of him.....everyone is happy that angad has recovered.... he sees all of his family members 1 by 1 but his eyes r searchin 4 some 1 else.. he ask his mom that where is kripa? ???????????????

okay guys this is it... i cannot write more... if anybody want's 2 continue plzzzzz continue n make it more intersting n romantic... coz my story is not soo romantic.... n plzz tell if u liked it or not...😳 n sorry guys if my hindi spellings r incorrect

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Posted: 20 years ago
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its brilliant i love it plz continue👏👏👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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its too good please continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey that wa samazing pleas eplease do continue i cant wait to read the next part 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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I loved it. It was amazing. please continue.

angad fikar mat karo kripa toh na sahi main zaroor aa rahi hoon. 😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Amazing.....i love it......plz carry on.....

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
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great story and i have write my story Part:1 and Part:2 if u like to read then go to this post

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=40509&TP N=1

plz tell me if you guys like it

*mehvish*

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow thats sooo good plz continue !👏👏
charmedangel thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey guys... thanks 4 appreciating da story..... but i am really confused how sud i continue.... 😭 i'm sure u guys have some brilliant ideas 😳 so if some can continue plzzzz go ahead..........😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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plz, any1 continue...

i would have but i've run out of ideas

luv

Soni

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