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Posted: 20 years ago
#21
u r creative my frnd keep up the good work😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#22

NIce story Eshika

many can continue this story but your touch will be missing

so i suggest you write it up

akhir isse story ka jaado tho tumhare dil mai hain na?

lots of love

Soni

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Posted: 20 years ago
#23
When is thenext episode... Plz cont. Eshika
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Posted: 20 years ago
#24

okay thanks 4 a wonderful response!!!!!!!!!!

now angad is all shocked.... he tells 2 himself kripa missing....??????? ish ka matlab kripa NAinital nahi aaye... toh aakhir kripa gayeee kaha.....????????? As a shocked Angad looks at kripa's pic... naina calls him in his cell

naina: hello angad ... angad kaha ho tum... tum jante ho ki tumhari tabiyat thik nahi ...yese bina bataye.. koi jata hai kyaa?

angad: mom woh actually main nainitaal main hoon....

naina: angad itna sab hone k baad bhi tum kripa k pas.....

angad: nahi mom!!! kripa iz missing... who yaha nahi hai.....

naina( giving an evil smile): huh!!!! i am not surprised!!!!! aakhir usne tume chodne ki keemat li hai humse... toh woh nainitaal wapas kyun jayeegie....? now naina who is tryin 2 B like a sweet mom 😡tells angad that... main janti hoon ki tum kripa ko kabhi bhoolanhi paoge but beta ..... tum koshish toh katsakte ho? u can start it all over again...tum bas mumbai wapas aajao....

angad: nahi mom jab tak main kripa ko dhood nahi leta.. main kahi nahi jaaunga.... main kripa ko mile bina kahi nahi jaunga.....

angad cuts da phone as naina is all stunned........

next scene in kripa's house

As angad reaches kripas house he is shocked 2 see Prithvi with kripa's parents....

Gayatri: main Khanna pariwar ko kabhi maf nahi karoongi..... unno ne mere beti k saath jo kuch bhi kiya hai.... bhagwan bhi unko maf nahi karega.....

Prthvi(consoling Gayatri): aapne aapko samhaliye anti... kripa jaroor wapas aayegie.... main kripa ko wapas launga....aur yeh mera vaada hai aapse....

as a confused angad stands at the door.... prithvi sees him and says angad tum yaha????????

gayatri: tum ????????? tum yaha kyaa lene aaye ho? mere beti ki zindagi barbaad karke khusi nahi huee jo aab phir yaha aagye.... chalejao yaha se... main tumhari sakal se bhi nafrat karti hoon.....

prithvi: aanunti samhaliye aapne aap ko.... ish main anagd ki koi galti nahi hai..... he is innocent... arey woh toh yehh bhi nahi janta ki.... aap yeh sab kyun keherahi hai.....

angad: prithvi..... yeh sab kyaa hai.....mere samaj main kuch nahi aaraha.....

prithvi: main janta hoon ki tumhe kuch aur hi bataya gaya hoga.... lekin yeh kisi ki sazish hai angad...... ek bar aapne dil se socho.. kyaa tume lagta hai ki kripa kuch yesa karsakti hai? kyaaa kripa itni giri huhi kam kabhi kar sakthi hai..... tumhe toh yeh bhai nahi malum ki tumhara accident ek accident nahi bali woh jan bujh kar karwaiee gayi thi.....

prihvi says all as a shocked angad has all tears in his eyes😭😭

okay guys 2 be continued... i may be a bit late 2 do the next part.. hope u don mind....

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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
hehe really nice plz cont..
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Posted: 20 years ago
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CHEERZ!!!😛

WELDUN!!!

SURELY CONTINUE!!!

TAKE CARE

ANOLI

xxx

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Posted: 20 years ago
#27
that was a nice story please do continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
#28
Hi Harishita,

Nice to see you back...How are you???

Raksha😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: rakshal

Hi Harishita,

Nice to see you back...How are you???

Raksha😃


I am fine thanks for asking that was sweet of you to ask

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Posted: 20 years ago
#30
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue i cant wait 😭

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