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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏 GR8 JOB..................PLZ CONTINUE.................👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
#12

u r doing gr8 plz dont stop cont

waiiting for ur next post

esha

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Posted: 20 years ago
#13

okay so here iz the next part....

angad ask naina where is kripa..... then as usual naina ka natak😡 beta vo vo ..... beta vo actually........

angad lookin really worried 4 kripa: vo vo kyaa mom... where iz kripa... ?

naina: beta tum aarram aako... zyada bolna tumahare liya thik nahi hai

angad: nahi mom main thik hoon... aap bas mujhe itna bataye ki kripa kaha hai.... meri aakhen uski ek jhalak dhekne ko tarasgaye hai... ..main toh yeh bhi nahi janta ki main yaha kab se hoon...... now angad getting really angry and shouts at every 1.... aarey koi mujhe batata kyun nahi... where is kripa damit!!!!!!!!!!!!

doctor: control urself mr khanna ... aap aabhi aabhi thik huye hai.. zyada bolna aapki health ke liye thik nahi....

then angad just gives i don care a damn look 2 every 1 and just walks away 4rm there.....

naina: angad angad.......

anitah: usse jane dijye masi ghar jayega toh sab kuch aapne aap hi pata chaljayega..... aakhir esi din ke liya toh hamne ek mahina intezaar kiya tha.... 😡

then naina n anitah gives an evil smile 2 each other...😡

next scene in da outhouse

angad goes 2 da outhouse n finds that it is locked.... now angd is almost crying a tells to himself kripa kaho ho tum.... 😭😭

then a voice 4rm behind tells him that woh aab nahi aayegi angad.... usne tumhe chod ne ki kimat liye hai humse.....

angad turns around n sees kartik in front of him.....

kartik: kripa ne kabhi tumse saccha pyaar nahi kiya tha.... woh toh sirf tumhare paiso se pyaar karti thi.... jab usse patachala ki tum coma mai ho aur tumhare bachne ki koi umeeed nahi thi ....usne mom se yeh kaha ki woh pregnent hai aur aagar usse paise nahi mile toh woh media k sammne yeh kaidegi ki tum ne uska rape kiya tha...... main janta hoon ki tum mera bishwas nahi karoge... magar ek bar tum hi socho hum toh tumhare aapne hai.. hum tumse jhoot kyun bolenge...aarey mom toh tumhare shadie k liya sab tayariya karrahi thi.... vo toh tut hi gayee thi jab unhe tumhara accident ka pata chala... 😡 khair chalo jo hota hai aache k liya hota hai.... aagar yeh na huwa hota toh.. kripa ki aasliyat kabhi samne na ati....

now angad is all shattered...😭😭 he does not utter a word n just leaves....while kartik gives a call n says kam hogaya... then we see our naina giving a wicked smile....😡😡

next scene angad en his room

angad who still doesnot belives wat he has just listened keeps on lookin at kripa's pics n finally burns all of them and yells "tum ne aaisa kyun kiya kripa kuyn.........".😭

okay guys... that's 4 2 day.... i know u guys r bored but don worry angad n kripa will be 2 gether after all i am not ekta😉.......

n plzzz plzzzz plz... some 1 continue n unite A n k.....

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Posted: 20 years ago
#14
Eshika yaar u r too good......continue plz....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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I love your fan-fiction. I love all fan-fictions. everyone is so amazing.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#16
plez clear angas n kripas misunderstandin i cant c them seperate
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Posted: 20 years ago
#17

gr8!!

continue!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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since no 1 continuing my story 😭 so here' goes da next part

Now angad without telling any1 leaves 2 Nainital

On da way he iz getting flashbacks of his past... all the sweet moments spend with kripa...... then he remembers kripa telling him that Zindagi main chahe halat kaise bhi ho.. main tumhara saath kabhi nahi chodungi angad.... .. then angad cries remebering each n every word of kripa...😭

kripa's voice echos all around....then da plane lands n he come back to his senses.....(by da way he was in the plane while he was remembering all this😳)

now angad iz on his way 2 kripa's house.... background song plays mera dil jis pe fida hai who bewafa hai...(guys plzzz tell me... if u like this song or not) he has soo much pain in his eyes..... 😭

next scene

while angad is about 2 reach kripa's home...he sees a newspaper store n sees kripa's pic in it...... it's written KRIPA SHARMA MISSING!!!!!!!

okay guys this is it 4 2 day.... i know it's a bit short but... i will continue very soon.... n if any 1 intereted in continuing plzzzzzzzzzzz go ahead.. i will be very glad😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
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😛

ASWEOME!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEZ CONTINUE~~

goldi2

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Posted: 20 years ago
#20

gr8 plz dont stop cont

plz post as fast as possible

wainting for next part

lots of love

esha

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