Fan fiction for the week 29th Aug-4th sep - Page 2

ok...i'll continue.........(do naam ek jaan)

.............(guys...woh mujhe bhi abhi khayal aya keh hindus cant marry with thier cousins.....so lets not make archie vasu's daughter instead she is vasu's devar;s daughter (brother-in-law). vasu's husband, devrani and devar have passed away...so she is taking care of archie! ok....so hope this makes it better!!!

archie and vasu bua had arrived at the garewal house. archie goes staright into sujal's room and hugs him....while sujal was still busy with kashish on the phone.....

sujal: archie, mere upar se utha....choro
kashish (to herself): archie.......kahin yeh wohi to nahi jinke bare mein sujal bata raha tha...........hello!
sujal: hello kashish....mein tumhe baad mein phone karta hon (he hangs up)
kashish too puts the phone down!!!!

sujal: archie.....tum mere kamre mein kya kar rahi ho
archie: tumse milne ayi hon....i missed you sooo much sujal! (trying to hug him but he backs off)
just then rishi enters : ahem!....woh big b aapse kuch kaam tha
sujal: haan haan...mein araha hon. ok bye archie....see you later! (sujal and rishi apni jaan bacha kar bahir nikal ate hain.........

archie: aur kab tak bacho ge mujse.......mein tumhe khud se dur nahi hone dongi.......

sujal aur rishi neeche ate hain......
sujal : bua! kaisi hain aap!
vasu: (hugs sujal ) tumhe dekha to jaan mein jaan agayi! jante ho tumhari itni yaad ati thi.......aur archie (who too was coming down the stairs) yeh to bus 24 ghanati tumhare hi gun gati thi!
archie: kya karun......sujal hai hi aisa (hitting her shoulder on sujal's)
sujal: (turns towards archie) haan.........kashish bhi yehi kehti hai!
archie ko ghusa ata hai...a little jealous.......: KASHISH.....sounds very boring!
rishi: tumhari raye kisi ne mangi nahi! (snubbing her)

just then CG enters........(chetan)
vasu: CG.......ohhhh..............(hugs him too) tumhara hi wait kar rahi thi....tumhe dekha to jaan mein jaan agayi..............(rishi and sujal look at each other and smile)
chetan: vasu......tum ati ho to ghar mein ronak si ajati hai.......are archie.....kaisi ho beta.........(archie gets his blessing)
vasu: kaisi ho sakti hai bechari...............jab se suna hai keh sujal ki shaadi teh ho gayi hai.... tabhi se..............
rishi: (cuts in btw) tabhi se............shaadi ke liye wait reduce kar rahi hai! hain na!
vasu gives him an evil smile!
vasu: waise CG........yeh kis ke saath kar rahe ho sujal ki shaadi....i mean.....
CG: woh......ek teacher hai....
vasu: haan....veena ne bataya...
CG: uske papa bhi proffessor reh chuke hain.......Mr sinha..........in fact......unki wife ne zikar kiya tha keh they were in mumbai before...........shayad tum janti ho..........akhir agarwal (vasu's husband) babu bhi to education ki field mein hi the...................
vasu: Mr sinha..................hmmmmmm....................the name sounds familiar......................likin kuch theek se yaad nahi...........kahir shoru......woh kya naam bataya tumne................haan kashish............kab mil wa rahe ho usse! akhir hum bhi larke ki bua hain......pura haq banta hai!
rishi: ab aap yahan hi gayi hain to mulaqat to ho hi jayegi.....

kab milenge vasu aur sinha's? kya yeh mulaqat koi naya gul khelaye gi!.........keep commenting guys!!!

love......farah

awsome story people.plzzz cont.
n thanx kiran 4 riting da part plzz cont.cant wait.

nids

Awesome...
Kiran, Farah... both of you did a wonderful job...
Waiting for the next parts...
Continue...

BTW... Kiran, do you know where Amna is??? It's been quite some time since I read the last part of her story...

awesome story plz continue writing

Thanks a lot all of you...i also loved this part..i was impresseed keh kash ney gurry ko itnay thapar marray is liye main ney bhi rishi ko thpaar parwaye..natz main bhi aamna ko contact ker rahi hun lekin uss ka reply hi nahi arah...guess she is bsy...farah great part...and the story of the pics will be disclosed soon...yeha i also liked the dialouge HARR JANAM MAIN KASHISH SIRF SUJAL KI RAHAY Gi ok luv ya..will write the enxt part soon!nids...thnaks again for reminding me!

THODA SA PYAR MILEGA...PART-14....Kashish dances 2 the song mardala....{Devdas]..PPL GOT INVOLVED in her pretty performance. the show was a huge success. kashish dreams that at the dance when he rounds & falls down,sujal cumes & carries her in his arms.but she weeps that its only a dream. they go 2 sign the divorce papers. sujal signs it with pain thats hidden in his mind.kashish was shocked that she never expected him 2 sign so fast. she was asked 2 sign. she hesitates. every1's face become dull. sujal:plz sign it fast kashish.all r busy.if u finish it fast,we can go fast. she stares at him. sujal:plz...kashish:1st..let me remove my wedding ring..sujal:1st u sign,then u remove it..plz don't catch these silly things. kashish's eyes got filled up.she thinks:these r not silly 4 a married woman..she was given the pen by sujal. her arms shiver.she cries:no i can't...every1 was shocked.akshat:kashish bhabhi,what happened?u had pain when u were asked 2 sign the divorce papers? so just think about sujal bhayya? she looks at sujal.he was taking effort 2 control his tears. he:kashish..now u understood the pain..?i had the same pain u had now. kashish cries & hugs him.they all smile.sujal was surprised that kashish who hated him like anything is hugging him infront of every1. he 4gets his shyness & hugs her back,since its her 1st expression of luv. akshat & charu laughs.sujal & kashish become shy. piyush:so,this stupid circumstance had 2 cum 2 show how much sujal & kashish luv each other. akshat:thats right. charu:actually 2day is their real wedding.so lets enjoy with a grand party. akshat:thats true. A grand party was arranged. sujal-kashish dance 2 the song 'thoda sa pyar hua....' 😊 😳 😉 THE END

hey guys where's the MERE DIL KO QARAR DO's next part. please post it soon. now it's getting interesting... waitingggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

too good.... farah....itz was realy small part.... i thnk evn u cant bear 2 write abt vasu?? 😆

plzzz yar sum1 cont "keep it goin".itna din hogaya parha hoa.
n plzzzz cont pyaar ki kashish n, do naam aik jaan n, pyaar to hona hi tha n,mere dharkano ko qarar do n all others 2.man we all r waitin 2 read it.or plzzzzz lamba parts likhna.

oh how cud i forget plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont thoda sa pyaar hoa hai kiran.

jaldi likna.

nids

hey i'll post mere dharkano ko qarara do tommorrow night inshallah