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Virgo!

this one goes for u!

ab bhugto!

i am posting in parts!

acha!

how do i percieve love n affection?see this!

Itni taiz raftaari se shayad uss ne kabhi gaari nahin chalaye thee160 mph kee riftaar se woh apni gaari highway per chala rehaa thaakisi bhee waqt kuch bhee ho sakta thaa magar uss waqt uss keh zehan main kuch bhee na thaa siwaye aik baat keh,aik jazbay keh,aik insaan keh,,,,woh aik jaani pehchaani kashish kee dorr se khincha chala jaa rehaa thaawoh jaanta thaa keh dorr ka aik sirra uss keh saath hay tau agla sirra uss kee mohabbat keh saath bandha huaa hay!!!woh jaanta thaa keh AAJ agar woh waqt per na pohancha tau woh apna sab kuch kho baithay gaa,shayad apni jaan bhee!usse apnay dil kee dharkanon main sirf aik awaz sunayi day rahi theeKASHISH KASHISH KASHISH......kashish jo uss kee mohabbat hay,deewangi hay,junoon hay,aashqi hay,zindagi hay,,,aaj wohi zindagi uss se door hoti jaarahi thee...woh apni zindagi se doori kaisay bardasht ker sakta thaa..woh baar baar palat ker pichli seat per behosh parray uss wajood ko daikhta jiss keh honay se Sujal ka hona qayam hay!..Sujal aur Kashish,naam do hain magar pehchaan aik hay!!!!jism do hain magar rooh aik hay!!!dil do hain magar dharkan aik hay!!!Sujal baar baar apni ankhon main aaye paani ko saaf kerta aur accelator per uss ka dabaa'o barh jaata!!! Sujal(uss kee awaz band ho jaati hay ronay kee wajah se): Kashish! main tumhain kuch nahin honay doon gaa!,,,kiay tum yeh nahin janteen keh jab tak meri sansain chal rahi hain tab tak tumhain kuch nahin hogaa Sargoshi: Sujal! Sujal: Kashish! abhi tum ne mujhe awaz dee hay naa! main jaanta hoon! tumhain kuch nahin hogaa!,,,bus hum pohanhcnay walay hain( yukdum khush hotay huay) magar jab woh palat ker daikhta hay tau Kashish keh neelay partay jism ko daikh ker uss keh ander ka darr aur bhee barh jata hayabhi manzil door thee aur Sujal kee soch kisi aur hee dunya main safr ker rahi thee!!woh un beetay lamhon main khoya huaa thaa jab uss ne kashish ko pehli baar daikha thaa!!

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second part!

Start of flashback!

Kashish: ACP SUJAL KHANNA!maana keh aap shehr keh bohat hee eemaandaar police officer hain magar kiya kisi ne aap ko yeh nahin bataya keh aatang waadiyon keh ilaqay main AKAILAY ghussna koi aqal mandi nahin hay!!

kashish Sujal keh baazu kee marham patti ker rahi thee kiyon keh Sujal keh bazu ko aik terrorist kee goli laggi thee!
Sujal keh honton per dabbi dabbi see msukaan thee kiyonkeh aaj woh pehli baar
kisi keh lehjay main apnay liye fikr daikh rehaa thaa!

Kashish:ACP sahab! main aap se baat ker rahi hoon,dewaaron se nahin!

Sujal: waisay kiya aap apnay her patient ko issi tarah daant'ti hain?(masoomiyat se poochtay huay)

Kashish(thoray se ghussay main): kiya matlab hay aap kaa?main aap ko daant rahi hoon,aik tau aajkal kee dunya main koi kisi ka bhala na hee
keray tau acha hay!!

woh uss keh baazu per patti bandh chuki hoti hay aur ab injection laga rahi hoti hay jab
Sujal bohat ghaur se usse daikhta hay!!
seedhi maang,ghannay kalay baalon kee lambi see choti banaye huay!!
white overall keh neechay se navy blue color ka dopatta jhank rehaa thaa!
baby pink colour kaa kurta aur navy blue color ka choori daar pehnay huay,
payron main kolahpoori chappal pehnay huay,ankhon main kajal aur
honton per natural color kee lipstick lagaye huay woh ankhon keh rastay dil
main utar janay kee hadd tak haseen lag rahi hoti hay!,,,Sujal uss keh coat
per lagga huaa badge daikhta hay!!

Sujal: Excuse me Dr.Kashish Mehra! kiya main aap se pooch sakta hoon keh
mujhe kab tak yahan per rehna hogaa?(bilkul bachon walay style main bolay
huay)

Kashish: ACP sahab! jab tak mujeh yeh yaqeen nahin ho jata keh aap aindah
aisee bewaqoofi nahin kerain gay tab tak aap yaheen rehain gay!!

Kashish leaves!

Sujal: tab tau main aisee bewaqoofi her roz keroon gaa!

Kashish kamray keh darwzay se jhaankti huee : kuch kaha aap ne?

Sujal: ji,,nahin bus kuch nahin!
He lies down and goes to sleep!!!
Kashish kuch dayr ba'ad kamray main aati hay aur Sujal ko sota daikh ker uss
keh paas baith jaati hay

Kashish: kitni masoomiyat hay iss keh chehray per! aisa
lagta hay jaisay barso'n se safr ker rehaa hay aur ab aaker
usse apni thakan mittanay ka moqah mila hay!

woh Sujal ko bus diakhay jaarahi hoti hay,, kisi anjanay ehsaas keh saath,
kisi anjanay rishtay kee kashish usse Sujal keh paas baithnay per majboor ker rahi thee...
Sujal keh maathay per uss keh kalay baal bikhray huay thay,left baazu per
patti banchi huee thee aur right bazu per drip laggi huee thee!sufaid rang
kee chadar orhay woh so rehaa thaa aur Kashish ko lag rehaa tha keh jaisay koi
farishta so rehaa ho!yuk dum Sujal ne karwat badli tau kashish ne ghabra ker
apna barha huaa haath rok liya! aur uth ker chali gayee!
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FINALLY
THANKZ 😃
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aur main bhugto gi kyun ????????/
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third part:

NEXT DAY:
Kashish: ji ACP sahib! Ab kaisa mehsoos ker rehay hain?(uss kee nabz per haath rakhtay huay)

Sujal(mann main sochta hay): tumharay haath laganay se jaisay sab acha ho gaya hay!

Kashish: kiya baat hay ACP sahib! Aaj bolti band hay jinaab kee?

Sujal: nahin kuch nahin! Bus zara bazu main thora dard hay,mujh se revolve nahin kiya jaa rehaa

Kashish: tau kiss ne kaha thaa aap se keh aap apnay muscles show kerain..body building kernay kee abhi permission nahin mill sakti ( she is still checking Sujal,,stethoscope se uss kee heartbeat check kerti hay,,,blood pressure check kerti hay)

Sujal: Dr. Kashish Mehra! If u don't mind! Aik sawal pooch sakta hoon?

Kashish: poochiye ACP Sahib!

Sujal: yeh sab kaab tau aik nurse bhee ker sakti hay phir aap kiyon ker rehi hain,,,,,,mera matlab hay BP check kerna,,,,blah blah blah!

Kashish smiles : bilkul ker sakti hay lekin aap ko nahin laggta keh iss chotay se gaa'on main kisi doctor ka hona hee chamatkaar hay,,yahan per nurse kahan se aayi ACP sahib!
Lagta hay goli ne bazu per nahin bulkeh dimagh per laggi hay!

Kashish hanstay huay murr jaati hay!

Kashish; array yaad aaya! Mumbai se aap keh Commissioner sahib ka fone aaya thaa,,unhian aap kee health kee bohat chinta ho rahi thee,,,aur kiyon na hoti! Aap itnay qabil aur honest officer jo hain!,,chaplain ab aap rest kerain takay jaldi se achay ho ker aap humari rakhsha ker sakain!

Sujal( apnay aap se baatain kerta hay): yeh mujhe kiya ho jata hay! Jab bhee who samnay aati hay,khud ko bebus paata hoon,,,uss keh saamnay tau aisa lagta hay keh dunya ruk see gayee hay,mann kerta hay buss usse suntan rahoon,,,,jab who meri itni fikr kerti hay tau acha honay ka dil hee nahin kerta,,jab who daant'ti hay tau dil kerta hay keh baar baar aisee ghalti keroon….kiya hay iss larrki main jo main uss kee taraf khitcha chala jaa rehaa hoon!
Aur udhar Kashish yeh sochti hay: kitna pagal hay na woh !bilkul bachon jaisee baat kerta hay…pata nahin kaisa rishta hay humara! Aik doctor aur patient se barh ker lagta hay,,,,shayad hum donon main dosti ho gayee hay,,ya phir…….nahin nahin! Aisa kaisay ho sakta hay,abhi kal hee tau uss se milli hoon,,,,,,per uss kee ankhain!uss kee ankhon main lagta hay bohat kuch chupa hay,,,,,kiya mujhe uss ko khojna chahiye,,,main kiyon soch rahi hoon us keh baray main,,,,,kashish mehra! Now stop thinking and get back to u'r work!
MUMBAI POLICE HEAD QUARTERS:
Commisioner Abhay Pratap Singh: ACP Sujal Khanna humaray department keh bohat hee qabil officers main se hain,,,,,hum jaantay hain keh hum ne unhain aik bohat hee khatarnaak mission per bhaija hay,,,,jiss ilaqay main wwoh gaye hain,wahan per aatang waadiyon ne bohat darr aur khof phaila rakha hay,,humain umeed hay keh ACP Sujal Khanna humari umeedon per poora utrain gay aur uss area se aatang ko khatam ker keh hee wapis lautain gay,,,,any questions?

Silence for a minute: this was one of the meetings of the senior officers of Police department where they reviewed Sujal's performance and gave him the task of finishing off terror in the region….everyone sent good wishes to Sujal via Commisioner Sahab!

WOHI CHOTA SA GAA'ON,,RAAM-GARH,,,JAHAN PER SUJAL USS MEDICAL CAMP MAIN ADMITTED HAY!

Sujal kee tabiyyat kuch behter hoti hay,he goes out for a walk and sees kashish out in the verandah!

Sujal: array Dr. kashish Mehra! Aap aur yahan? Aap kee tau duty ka waqt khatam ho chukka hay naa!
He stands besides her
No response from kashish!
Sujal: Dr. Kashish Mehra! Main aap se baat ker rehaa hoon!
Kashish turns and starts sobbing,,,,,,,,,her eyes r so red that Sujal gets worried!

Sujal: aap kiyon ro rahi hain??is everything alright!
Kashish: nahin kuch nahin,bus yunhi aansu aagaye thay! Ghar walon se door hoon naa iss liye!
Sujal: acha aap ro'iye nahin,aap rotay huay bilkul achi nahin lagteen!
Kashish: tau kiya ghussay main achi lagti hoon?( aur hans parri)
Sujal(mann main): tum tau her roop main achi lagti ho!
Sujal: heheeheh!aji aap keh kiya kehnay,Dr. Kashish Mehra!
Kashish: acha yeh bataaiye keh ab aap keh bazu ka dard kaisa hay?dobara koi exercise tau nahin kee naa?
Sujal smiles on her careful tone: bilkul nahin kee Dr. Sahiba! Humain aap se pittna tau nahin thaa?
Kashish: haan bus issi kee kasar reh gayee thee
Then both of them smile!
Sujal: acha agar aap bura na maanain tau aap mujhe apni family keh baray main kuch batayen geen?
Kashish: aik shart per keh aap mujhe aap nahin bulkeh tum kahain gay!manzoor hay tau bolo warna apun ich chalta hay!
Sujal: array yeh bhai logon kee zaban kahan se seekh lee tum ne!....ab khush! Chalao ab bataao……ummmmmmm per nahin thehro! Pehle tum bhee mujhe tum kaho gee!phir main sunoon gaa!
Kashish: acha baba theek hay! Tum jeetay main haari….
Kashish(manna main sochti hay): kitni hayrat kee baat hay! Aaj main ne bina behas kiye kisi kee baat maan lee……
Sujal(mann main sochtay huay): ufffffffff! Yeh mujhe kiya ho gaya hay?main pehle tau kabhi iss tarah kisi se itni frankly baatain nahin kerta thaa….
Kashish:hmmmmmmmm! Tau ACP sahib! Mere parivar main 7 log hain!....main,meir mamma,mere bauji,meri dadi maa'n,aik chota sa shararti bhai,aik barri behan jiss kee shadi ho chuki hay,,,,,,aurr…………….
Sujal: aur?????????????????????????(kaheen iss ka fianc'e tau nahin,,,,,nahin bhagwan! Aisa annaye mat kerna)
Kashish: aur Rocky!
Sujal: Rocky,,,,,,Rocky kon?
Kashish: array ! itni hayrat kiyon ho rahi hay,,,,,,,,I just love him,,,,,,he's the love of my life!......tumhain pata hay who mere baghair kuch bhee nahin khaata,,pata nahin aaj kal kaisay reh rehaa hogaa,,,,,,thehro! Tumhain uss kee pic dikhati hoon!
Kashish goes inside!
Sujal(manna main sochta huaa): Sujal miyan! Lagta hay tumahri qismut main ghar basana hay hee nahin aur iss larrki keh saath tau bus na mumkin samjho!....aisa kabhi ho hee nahin sakta!,,,,,,,samjha lo apnay iss pagal dil ko keh woh kashish kee khuwahish kerna chorr day!
Kashish comes outside with a pic!
Sujal sees the pic aur hayrat se uss kee ankhain phutt jaati hain coz who pic,,,,,,aik bohat hee
CUTE
ADORABLE
8 month old baby kee pic hoti hay……….
Sujal: iss ka naam rocky hay?per yeh lagta kiya hay tumhara?
Kashish: nahin! Iss ka asli naam Aadarsh hay!....rocky tau main bus yunhi kehti hoon aur yeh mera baita hay,,,,,he's my son!,,,,,,,my life!( yeh keh ker
kashish uss pic ko choom laiti hay aur ankhon main aaye aik ansu ko saaf ker laiti hay)
Sujal is shocked to hear this!
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fourth part:

Kashish: Sujal! aaj se 2 saal pehle meri shaadi Jay se huee thee,,,bilkul arange marriage thee,,shaadi keh shuru keh aik saal woh bohat acha rehaa!,,,phir pata nahin kiya ho gaya usse,woh beemaar rehnay lagga!,,,un dinon main pregnant thee,,,,hum apnay aanay walay bachay keh baray main bohat batain kertay thay!
bohat khush thay hum donon jab aik din Jay kee blood report aayi jiss main likha thaa keh Jay ko Blood cancer hay,,,,aur phir apnay baitay keh paida honay se pehle hee woh humain chor ker chala gaya,,,Aadarsh aik maheenay baad paida huaa thaa,,,,
Sujal gives her water coz she was sobbing!,,she waits for a while n then continues!!
kashish: aur phir main Aadarsh keh saath 6 months tak rahi,,maa hoon main uss kee,,magar shayad abhi tak main Jay ko bhula nahin paayi thee,iss liye maa honay ka garz bhe enahin nibha saki aur aadarsh ko apnay mamma papa keh paas chor ker yahan aagayee,,,,magar aaj ghar se fone aaya thaa keh aadarsh kee tabiyyat theek nahin hay!...
Sujal: kashish!aik baat kahoon!,,tum main himmat hay bus tum saamna nahin kerna chahteen,,,Jay ko jana thaa woh chala gaya magar ab Aadarsh ko tumhari zaroorat hay!
Kashish: yahan per bhee tau kitnay logon ko meri zaroorat hay!
Sujal: bilkul hay magar kiya tum bhagwan kee dee huee ne'mat se moonh mor lo gee,,,abhi aadarsh sirf 8 maheenay ka hay!kal woh 8 saal ka hogaa tau kiya kahay gaa! keh mera paida hona itna barra jurm thaa keh meri maa mujhe chorr ker chali gayee!kashish! tum uss keh baray main socho!iss sab main uss ka kiya qasoor hay?
Kashish: Sujal tum bilkul theek keh rehay ho! ab tum hee bataao keh main kiya keroon!
Sujal: main tumhain abhi tau janay ka nahin keh sakta coz raat ho rahi hay!
Kashish: Sujallll! be serious!
Sujal: acha acha! suno! main apnay commissioner sahib se kal subah baat keroon gaa coz mujhe yahan rehnay keh liye kuch cheezon kee zaroorat hay tau woh main sheher jaa ker lay aaon gaa,aur phir tumhain bhee tumharay ghar per drop ker doon gaa! sounds good?
Kashish: yess boss!,,,,chalo ab tum ja aker rest kero,tumhara bazu tau kaafi hadd tak theek ho gaya hay bus bandage change kerwatay rehna!,,
Sujal turns away to go back to his room!
Kashish: suno Sujal!
Sujal:haan bolo kashish?
Kashish: thanx!
Sujal: for what?
Kashish: abhi abhi itni achi advice jo dee tum ne!
Sujal: ab dost kaha hay tau dosti ka farz bhee tau nibhana parray gaa na!,,good night! ab kal subah milain gay!
Kashish: good night!
next day:
Kashish apna travel bag laati hay aur wardboy se kehti hay keh uss ka medical
bad bhee jeep main rakh day!..
Sujal uss keh itnay concern per smile ker daita hay!
jab woh apna travel bag uthanay lagta hay tau kashish rok daiti hay:
kashish: aap koi samaan nahin uthayen gay! abhi abhi tau tumharay stitches
khulay hain! ab chalay ho apni muscle power dikhanay!
Sujal: Dr.Kashish Mehra!,tum aik baat per decide ker lo,,ya tau mujhe aap kaho
ya tum!
Kashish: Sujal! tum bhee naa,,,kaheen se nahin lagta keh ACP ho,lagta hay keh
College boy ho!
Sujal: thanx for the Compliment ma'am! ab chalain!
Kashish: drive main keroon gee!
Sujal: yaar! ab tau stitches bhee khul gaye hain,i am perfectly fine,,aur wasiay
bhee agar mujhe kuch ho gaya tau tum ho naa!,,,
Kashish: Bhagwan na keray! tumhain kuch ho!ab calo waran poora din yaheen
batain kertay raho gay!
Both leave for Mumbai:..
Sujal: kashish! tum chup kioyn ho?
Kashish: main yeh soch rahi hoon keh jab Aadarsh ko daikhoon gee tau
kaisay react keroon gee?
Sujal: yeh tau main bhee daikhna chahta hoon..and then he smiles!
Kahsish smiles back!
15 mins kee khamoshi keh ba'ad:
kashish ka haath barhta hay cassette player kee taraf,aur udhar se Sujal ka
haath barhta hay cassette player kee taraf,donon keh haath takratay hain,
donon aik doosray kee taraf daikhtay hain,,kashish muskura ker bahir
daikhnay lag jaati hay aur Sujal cassette play ker daita hay
~Kehna hi kya ye nein ik anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lagi mohabbat ke jaise ye silsile
Armaan naye aise dil mein khile
Jinko kabhi main na jaanoon
Vo humse hum unse kabhi na mile
Kaise mile dil na jaanoon
Ab kya karein kya naam lein
Kaise unhein main pukaroon~
kashish mann main sochti hay: aisee feelings main ne pehle kabhi mehsoos nahin
kee,,jab Jay mere saath thay tab bhee nahin,,,kiyon aisa hay keh main Sujal
kee taraf daikh nahin paa rahi,,,kiyon mujhe aisay lag rehaa hay keh Sujal
keh saath keh bina main adhoori hoon?,,kiyon mera dil itni zor se dharrak
rehaa hay keh mujhe saaf awaz sunayi daiti hay,aur kiyon mujhe aisay lag rehaa
hay keh Sujal ko chorr ker main khush nahin rahoon gee..aakhir mera uss se
rishta hee kiya hay!
Sujal mann main sochta hay: aakhir kiyon aisa ho rehaa hay!main ne pehle tau
kabhi aisa mehsoos nahin kiya! kiyon Kashish ko daikhay bina aik bechani see
hoti hay,,yeh jaantay huay bhee keh uss kee shaadi huee thee,uss ka aik
bacha hay,,tab bhee main khud ko uss kee taraf jhuka huaa pata hoon,kiyon
khud ko rok nahin paata keh uss keh saath guzara hua her pall mujhe aik
qeemti yaad lagta hay,,kiyon mujhe aisa lagta hay keh main Sujal Khanna jo keh
aik tough officer hay,ab aik baraf keh golay kee tarah pighal rehaa hoon,,,
donon apni apni sochon main gum hotay hain,,donon keh paas apni kisi baat
ka jawab nahin hota! tabhi yuk dum jeep ruk jaati hay:
Kashish: kiya huaa?
Sujal: i guess! battery main paani khatam ho gaya hay,tum ruko,main paani lay ker aata hoon!
Kashish: nahin,main bhee tumharay saath chalti hoon!i won't leave u alone1
Sujal smiles: acha theek hay,chalO!
he locked the jeep aur donon paani kee talash main nikal jatay hain!,,un keh
paas sirf mineral water kee 2 bottles theen jo keh un keh peenay keh liye
theen,thats y they left for the search of more water!
Sujal: jaldi chalo kashish!itna slow chalo gee tau pechay reh jaao gee!
Kashish: slow kahan chal rahi hoon,,ouchhhh!
Sujal turns: kiya huaa?
woh daikhta hay keh kashish ne apna right foot pakra huaa hay!
kashish: shayad moch aagayee hay,,,
Sujal: dikhaao..he bends to look at her foot!
kashish apna paaon peechay ker laiti hay!
Kashish: nahin kuch nahin huaa!
Sujal: r u sure?
Kashish: haan haan! i am sure!
kashish do qadam chalti hay aur phir ruk jaati hay
Sujal: kahan theek ho tum! chalo mera haath pakar lo!
haath pakarnay keh bawajood kashish se nahin chala jata! sujal uss ko water can pakrata hay aur usse baho'n main utha laita hay!
kashish tries to protest but Sujal stops her:
Sujal: apni halat tau daikho,madam se chala jata nahin per ghussa abhi bhee
dikhana hay!hadd ho gayee hay!,,,koi khayal nahin rakh sakti ho tum apna,aur
mujhe dant'ti ho,ab chup ker keh baithi raho!
Kashish: main baithi huee kahan hoon,mujhe tau tum ne uthaya huaa hay!
Sujal: haan,,nahin,,woh mera matlab thaa keh bus ab nadiya paas hay,tum wahan
per baith jana,main gaari se medical kitlay aaon gaa!
(remember Veer-Zara scene where Veer picks her up,on the way back-bilkul waisee
jagah hoti hay)
sujal kashish ko aik pathar per bithata hay aur khud jeep kee taraf jata hay!
achanak aasmaan per kalay badal aajatay hain,aanan faanan saara aasmaan ,gehray
kalay badlon se chup jata hay,,sooraj bhee so jata hay,,andhaira honay lagta
hay,,bijli chamaknay laggti hay...badal garajna shuru ker daitay hain,,
kashish ko bijli kee chamak aur badlon kee garaj se bohat darr lagta hay
woh zor se chillati hay
SUJALLL<<<<SUJALLLL<<<<SUJALLLL
udhar Sujal uss kee cheekhain sun ker paraishaan ho jata hay aur bhaagtay huay
kashish keh paas pohanchta hay,,
kashish jab usee daikhti hay tau foran uss keh seenay se lag jati hay aur ronay
lag jaati hay..Sujal aur ziyadah pariashaan ho jata hay!
woh uss keh balon main haath phairta hay,,aur mathay per kiss kertay huay:
Sujal: kiya huaa kashish?,,tum darr kiyon gayee thee?
Kashish: Sujal! mujhe kabhi chor ker mat jana( rotay huay kehti hay)
Sujal: nahin jaaon gaa!,kaheen nahin jaaon gaa!,,woh uss keh gird apnay bazu'on
ka ghayra aur tang ker daita hay,,apni bahon main aisay samait laita hay
jaisay kashish keh kho janay ka darr ho!
Kashish: Sujal!plzz,,kabhi mat jana!
Sujal: kabhi nahin jaaon gaa per tum rona band kero!,,daikho barish bhee honay
waali hay!
Kashish( abhi bhee uss keh galay laggi hoti hay): aisay hee mausam main,main ne
Jay ko khoya thaa,ab tumhain khonay ka hosla nahin hay mujh main!
Sujal gets more tensed!
Sujal: chalo! shabash! ab apnay ansu saaf ker lo,,in fact Sujal wipes her tears!
Sujal: main tum se wadah kerta hoon kashish keh tumhain kabhi akaila nahin
chorron gaa,maut juda keray tau keray...kashish uss keh moonh per haath rakh
daiti hay,,aur NAHIN main sir hila daiti hay..
then both again HUG tightly,,,aik doosray kee bahon main khoye hotay hain,,
aur barish shuru ho jati hay!
Sujal: issi tarah kharay rehay tau donon beemar parr jayen gay!
kashish smiles: ouchhhh!mera paaon!
Sujal: ab tum ne mujhe itna darra diya tha keh main medical kit waheen bhool
aaya,,,ab wapis jaaon kiya!
Kashish: abhi tum ne promise kiya thaa keh akaila nahin chorro gay!
Sujal smiles on her innocence! aur phir ussay apni bahon main utha ker jeep
tak lata hay!(kashish had already filled the water can-jeep is ready to go)
Kashish khirkee keh bahir daikh rahi hay,,Sujal kabhi kabhi kashish per nazar
daal laita hay,,,donon keh darmiyan khamoshi hay,,srf wipers keh chalnay kee
awaz aarahi hay,,,donon apni sochon main gum hain!keh yuk dum Sujal ko kashish
keh payr ka khayal aata hay

Sujal: kashish! tum ne koi dawa lee?
Kashish: kis liye?
Sujal: kashish!!tum ne payr keh dard keh liye koi dawa lee?
Kashish: oh woh,,nahin!...i mean haan( woh sujal ko aur paraishaan nahin kerna chahti thee)
Kashish: sujal! ab main thori dayr keh liye sona chahti hoon
Sujal: haan theek hay so jaao!tumhain waisay bhee aram kee zaroorat hay!
sujal uss ko mazeed dard main nahin daikh sakta thaa!
kuch waqt guzra..kashish kee ankh khul gayee,,usse piyas laggi hay!
sujal abhi bhee drive ker rehaa hay!
kashish: Sujal! mujhe piyas laggi hay!
Sujal: tum thehro,main tumhain paani daita hoon!
He picks up the bottle from the back seat and gives it to her!
Kashish drinks the water!
kashish: abhi Mumbai kitna door hay?
Sujal: taqreeban 2 ghantay aur laggain gay!..tum beshuk phir se so jaao!
Kashish( mann main sochti huee): kiya sochta hoga Sujal mere baray main?..keh main itni kamzor hoon
keh uss keh bina mujhe kitna darr lagta hay,,kiya sochta hogaa keh mujh main itni see bhee himmat
nahin hay keh main apni zindagi kee mushkilaat ko khud face ker sakoon( she was thinking abt the
moment when she hugged him)
Sujal: kashish! chup kiyon ho?payr main ziyadah dard tau nahin ho rehaa?
Kashish: nahin Sujal! tum meri chinta kerna chor do!
Kashish keh lehjay main kuch aisa thaa keh Sujal chonkay bina reh na sakaa!
Sujal( mann main sochtay huay): itnay ukhray lehjay main kiyon bol rahi hay!kiya
ho gaya hay iss ko!
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Originally posted by: vivacious_virgo

aur main bhugto gi kyun ????????/

ab parho itnay lambay lamay parts!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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fifth part:

tabhi woh huaa jiss ne sujal keh hosh-o-hawaas urra diye!..uss keh samnay aisee situation
kabhi nahin aayi thee!,,ACP Sujal Khanna jiss mission keh liye uss gaa'on main posted thaa,
usee terrorist gang ne uss kee jeep per hamla ker diya!
Sujal ko apni fikr nahin thee,,fikr thee tau sirf Kashish kee kiyonkeh aaj se pehle uss ne kabhi
aisee situation ka samna nahin kiya thaa!
her taraf se goliyon kee barish,dhamakay,,,charon taraf se log jin keh haath main guns theen,,
in sab ne kashish ko darra tau diya thaa magar woh apna sarr zahir nahin ker rahi thee!
Sujal: kashish! tum foran se neechay ho jaao,kabhi bhee kuch bhee ho sakta hay!
Kashish: nahin Sujal! main tumhain akaila nahin chorr sakti!
Sujal(ghussay main): meri baat maano kashish! mujhe kuch nahin hogaa!
kashish: magar Sujal!
Sujal: main ne kaha naa kashish! mujhe kuch nahin hogaa!
Sujal ne jaldi se apni gun nikaali,,aur apni belt main pistol rakha!woh bullets check ker rehaa thaa keh achanak
aik goli ne uss keh jeep kee windscreen torr dee!
Sujal foran cheekha.KASHISHHHH!
uss ne kashish ko foran apni taraf khaincha!aur bazu'on main yoon chupa liya keh usse koi daikhay bhee nahin!
Sujal: kashish! mujhe inn ko rokna hogaa!,,,in kee dushmani mujh se hay!,,,,tum se tau nahin!
woh kashish ko instructions daita huaa neechay utarta hay!
gaari ko lock ker keh woh murrta hay aur firing shru ker daita hay!aakhir ko police kee training main kuch tau dum
thaa keh woh jahan jahan bhee fire kerta wahan per log girtay jatay!woh donon hathon se pistols chala rehaa thaa!
udhar Sujal terrorists se larr rehaa thaa aur idhar kashish mann main dua'yen mang rahi thee keh Sujal ko kuch na ho!
woh aik baar phir akaila nahin parrna chahti thee!,,woh Sujal ka saath nahin chorrna chahti thee!
kashish bhee gaari se utar ker bhaag ker Sujal keh paas chali jaati hay jo keh iss waqt aik darakht keh peechay thaa
aur firing ker rehaa thaa!
Sujal: tum,,,,,,,TUM yahan kiyon aayi ho!..jao yahan se!,,woh usse paray dhakailta hay!
Kashish: main aik baar phir tanha nahin hona chahti,,jahan tum wahan main!Sujal! main koi qasam nahin khaaati but
U R VERY IMPORTANT TO ME aur main tumhain khonay ka soch bhee nahin sakti..
Sujal is touched by her,,,he gives her a tigt hug by holding her from side,,,,he still has a gun in his other hand!,,,as
they r prtoected by the tree,the terrorists have no clue where to fire the hand grenades!,,,,they r throwing them here n dere
jab achanak aik hand grenade Kashish keh paas aaker phat'ta hay,,,she injures her leg!
Sujal: kashish! hatto yahan se....aag hay yahan per,,,
woh foran apni jacket utaar ker Kashish keh leg per rakh daita hay aur aag bujhanay lagta hay!
aag bujha ker he stand up and fires like blind!,woh ghussay main pagal ho chuka hota hay coz kashish behosh ho chuki hay!
uss keh samnay sirf kashish ka behosh chehra aur uss keh aakhri alfaaz hotay hain!
Kashish: Suj..Sujal,,,bohat,,,,,dard,,,,ho,,, rehaa,,,,,hay! she says this and faints!....
Sujal ka jawabi hamla daikh ker bacha kucha gang apnay saathiyon kee lashain waheen chorr ker bhaag jata hay!
Sujal Kashish ko apnay hathon main uthata hay!
~background score~
mujhe na chorr ker jana
itni iltija hay meri
tujhe chahoon umer bhar main
yehi tamanna hay meri
dard tu ne jo sahay
hooooooo oooo
apnay ansu jo giraye
aisa hogaa na kabhi bhee
thora sa piyar huaa hay
bohat hay baaqi
thora sa piyar huaa hay
sun mere saathi~
Sujal is running towards his jeep,,woh kashish ko lamha ba lamha apnay aap se door jata daikh ker darr jata hay!
woh kashish ko back seat per litta ker jeep start kerta hay and drives really fast towards a hospital near by..woh 2 hrs
tak intizaar nahin ker sakta thaa,,,,kashish ka behta khoon Sujal ko paraishaan kernay kay liye kaafi thaa....
sujal kee ankhain bhar aayeen kiyonkeh woh kashish ko kabhi takleef main nahin daikh sakta,,,,yeh uss keh dil main chupi
huee mohabbat thee jo usse aik khof main dal rahi thee keh agar kashish ko kuch ho gaya tau,,,,iss se aagay Sujal kuch
nahin soch sakta thaa!
END OF FLASHBACK!
Lifeline Hospital:

Sujal apni baho'n main behosh kashish ko utha ker lay aaya!,,
,uss ne receptionist se doctor ko bulanay ko kaha tab tak ward boy stretcher laa
chuka thaa!..Sujal ne kashish ko strecther per litaya!...doc aachukay thay!
Doc: aray in ka tau bohat sa khoon beh chuka hay,chehra bhee kitna peela ho chuka hay,,,inhan jaldi se OP main shift kero,,aur in keh saath jo bhee hain woh yahan aayen,kuch paper formalities poori kerni hain!,,,Lucy!,,doc receptionist kee taraf murra..."inn se hopital keh papers per signatures kerwa lo,,,aur suno police ko bhee inform ker do,main koi treatment nahin ker sakta jab tak police nahin aajati"
Sujal: police!,,,,police ko kiyon?
Doc: daikhiye! patient ko goli laggi hay tau yeh aik police case hay au jab tak
police patient ka bayaan nahin lay laiti,hum log kuch nahin ker saktay
Sujal: excuse me Dr.Sahab!...jab tak aap kee police aaye gee,meri kashish ko kuch bhee ho sakta hay aur yeh main bardasht nahin ker sakta!,,,aap ko police hee chahiye naa,yeh reha mera card,,,,,i am ACP Sujal KHanna!,,,aur koi saboot chahiye,ab aap jaaiye aur apna kaam kijiye!..after saying this in anger,Sujal left the reception area!,,,
At the Dargah:
Sujal sir per romaal bandh ker Dargah keh ander dakhil huaa,,,baba ji kee qabr per chaadar charhayi aur duaa keh liye haath uthaye!
Aye mere Rabb!tu hee jaan dainay wala hay aur lainay wala,main tujh se sirf aur sirf kashish kee sehatmand zindagi kee bheek mangta hoon!
At the church:
Sujal goes in,makes a cross, and sits by his knees...
my Lord!i have just come here to ask thy forgiveness and i ask for my kashish's well-being and long life!
At the mandir!
Sujal aarti kee thaali lay ker mandir kee seerhiyan charhta hay aur ghanti baja ker bhagwan se duaa mangta hay,,,main tujh se haath jorr ker kashish kee zindagi keh liye duaa mangta hoon,usse zindagi bakhsh day!,,,,,,
jab tak Sujal wapis hospital pohancha! aik khabar uss ke muntazir thee!
Sujal jaisay he hospital pohancha usse Lucy ne bataya keh doctor ne usse bulaya
hay,,woh foran doc keh kamray main gaya!
doc: Mr.Sujal,,,aap kee wife ka operation ho gaya hay!
Sujal: wife(hairaani se)
doc: ji haan! kashish ji aap kee Mrs hain na!
Sujal ko yaad aaya keh form bhartay waqt uss ne kashish keh saath apna rishta husband n wife ka bataya thaa!
Sujal: ji doc kahiye! kashish keh baray main kiya kehna hay aap ko?
Doc: hum ne un kee body se bullet tau nikaal dee hay magar khoon keh ziyadah beh janay kee wajah se aur sir per chot lagnay kee wajah se un per partial paralysis
ka attack huaa hay,,,gardan se neechay ka hissa kisi bhee cheez ko respond nahin
ker rehaa!na woh apna hath hila sakti hain aur na hee chal phir sakti hain!
Sujal: doctor sahab! yeh aap kiya keh rehay hain?kashish,,,,paralysis,,,,nahin doctor sahab! aap ko koi ghalatfehmi huee hay!,,,aisa nahin ho sakta,,,
Sujal ko yaqeen hee nahin ho rehaa thaa,,,woh kamray main idhar se udhar chakkar
kaat rehaa thaa!
SUjal: doctor! main kashish se mill sakta hoon!
Doc: unhain abhi ICU main rakha gaya hay,for observation..48 hrs baad aap unhain mill saktay hain!
Sujal hee jaanta thaa keh woh yeh do din kaisay guzaray gaa!woh ICU keh paas gaya aur sheeshay keh paar usse apni kashish pattiyon main nazar aayi,,,machines
uss keh aas paas laggi huee the jo keh uss kee saans keh aanay janay kee gawahi
day rahi theen!,,Sujal ne woh do din ICU keh baahir hee guzaray,,,do din tak
uss kee jaan kisi sooli per attki huee thee,,usse na khanay peenay ka hosh thaa
aur naa hee sonay jaagnay kaa..usse tau itna hosh nahin thaa keh woh fone ker keh
kashish keh ghar walon ko hee inform ker day!
After two days:
Doc: ab aap kee Mrs khatray se bahir hain magar un kee paralysis kee haalat waisee kee waisee hay!iss keh liye aap ko un ka bohat dhayan rakhna hogaa!
Sujal: ji doctor!,main poora khayal rakhoon gaa,kiya ab main kashish ko ghar lay
jaa sakta hoon?
Doc: ji haan kiyon nahin! main aik nurse bhee saath bhaij daita hoon!
Sujal: ji nahin doctor! nurse kee koi zaroorat nahin!,,
Doc: as u wish! aap plz reception per jaa ker bill clear ker dijiye!
Sujal: ji bohat behter!,,,
Sujal soch rehaa thaa keh ab usse kiya kerna chahiye!,,,woh kashish keh purse se
uss keh ghar walon ka number lay aaya magar fone kernay kee himmat nahin jutta
paa rehaa,,,aakhir kaar himmat ker keh uss ne fone kiya!
Sujal: Hello! Mr.Mehra?
Mehra: ji haan! bol rehaa hoon!
Sujal: main Sujal Khanna bol rehaa hoon,,kashish ne mere baray main aap ko
bataya hay naa?
Mehra: oh ACP sahab aap?kahiye kaisay yaad kiya aap ne?
Sujal: ji actually! mujhe aap keh ghar ka address chahiye thaa,,aap kee
aik amanat mere paas hay,wohi lotani hay!
Mehra: amanat?kaisee amanat?...acha khayr,,main address likhwa daita hoon!
Mr.Mehra SUjal ko address likhwatay hain..Sujal kashish ko discharge kerwa ker
gaari main bithata hay..uss kee drip ko darwazay keh handle keh saath lattkata hay aur kashish ke ghar kee taraf chal parrta hay!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wwooooow amazing stroy, mehraal you're a genious!
keep it up 👏
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wow!! mehraal its cool!! lov it! yaar 😃

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