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Originally posted by: maplez13
*Sighs*
Well....I don't know what to say tbh. What do you do for a living? You should totally be a writer dude. I actually felt my face light up when i saw 'Marriage by Consent' on the first page lol. You didn't disappoint. Too good man! Adi was so funny. š
The way you describe everything, is just so.....descriptive. š Keep it up! š
Hello...! Yaar life toh tab hogi na, when I'm passed the "student" phase, currently I have no lifeš I'm deeply humbled, but seriously... you're too kind! Thank you for the lovely comments... Yeah, he's quite something eh?š As for the descriptions... Blessed imagination (yours)... Thank you once again!
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dc
WooHoo!!!!!!u updated š š š
I nearly fell of my chair when i saw u had updated š š š
Even after this long wait u have me completely intrigued š š š
As always beautifully written and i wanna read Adi's side of story š³ š³ & Manthan???hmmm...I'll wait for u to fill in the gaps š
Keep on writing or typin...LOL
Just love ur storytelling style darlš
Cheers
Preetz
Pretz!! Yaar... you're seriously one of my rocks in the forum... Thank you so much for the encouragement... Yaar, don't blame me for your clutzy behaviourš jk!!š³... Hai, you're too sweet... š Adi's side will come very soon, pakka.š As for the gaps, rest assured... they'll fill... Thanks.
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dc
Originally posted by: anjaneajnabi
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itz realli gud i think itz funni how did they get married ?? cant wait to find out
ššš³ Glad you're enjoying... You'll get some answers soon... Thanks!
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dc
neetu that was gr8!!!! do con asap!!!!
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Thank you so much hun! I will in a few more minz...
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dc
Originally posted by: angelic shaz
omg awesum!!!! š š š
im so glad dat u finally updated š i loved it!!! how mets was feelin with all her emotions dat was fab!! and u luv keepin us in suspense lol š
cnt wait 4 more
continue soon š³
Hey you!š Yeah, finally. Erm... kya karein... addat ho chuki haiš Thanks for the comments and yep, gotta leave something to look forward to na?š
Cheers,
dc
Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes
hii dii..
mmm.. awesome part... i loved it..
please do continue!
Aakriti!! My lil bud... š¤ How are ya doing?? Long time... You found this one too eh?š Thanks for the wonderful words sweetie... next part will be up shortly.
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dc
wow! what a differenet ff!!! its really great, thanks for updating. haha i cant imagine being in her situation! gosh poor girl! so she packed her things and moved into a hotel now, or went back to the room she woke up in? well its pointless for me to say im hooked, cuz i knew i would be when you first posted this ff! anything by you is gonna be great! hope you can continue soon!
Robin... yeah, its different from my usual and I was kinda iffy about it... but the response has been great, much humbled.š³ She went to a gym... that's how she vents... dancing... and then when she calmed a bit, she went back to the hotel where she woke up but couldn't remember the room number nor her new last nameš... *hand on heart* you're too kind...
Cheers,
dc
"Marriage By Consent"
Part 2
Keeping my right hand on my heaving chest, I attempted to calm the irregular heartbeatā¦ Yeah sureā¦ Suddenly realizing my position, I opened my eyes to see the sluggish smile on vaguely familiar lipsā¦ slowly, the entirety of the strong features came into focusā¦ His arms were crossed over his chest (thankfully bearing the brown I had earlier discarded), as he stood leisurely against the support of the bedā¦ Goshā¦ maine kabhi nahin socha tah ke main aise kahoongiā¦ aur wohe bhi itni jaldiā¦ But boy! Am I ever glad to see youā¦ Of course, baaki ki baad mein dekhi jaayegi! (Goshā¦ I never thought I'd be saying thisā¦ and that too, this soonā¦ But boy! Am I ever glad to see youā¦ Of course, we'll see to the rest later!). With that thought in mind, I allowed a momentary rush of relief swipe my sensesā¦ and it certainly didā¦ as I felt my feet stride urgently towards himā¦ and I took hold of his armā¦ mumbling somethingā¦ incoherentlyā¦ I guess it's the reliefā¦ or more likeā¦ the panicā¦ If anything, I knew that duffer would soon be at my doorā¦ No matter where I go, wahin pe aake tapak padta haiā¦ulu ka patah! (No matter where I go, he comes waging his tailā¦ idiot!) I thought frustrated. Suddenly, my panic-stricken thoughts were penetrated through as his hazel eyes melted into meā¦ I meanā¦ He stared at meā¦ amusedā¦ The smile still on his lipsā¦ Langoor!! Soorā¦ uffā¦ Yahan meri jaan pe ban ayi hai, and this idiot is smiling like no tomorrowā¦Menā¦ I tell you! (Fool!! Pigā¦ Its come to my deathbed and this idiot is smiling like no tomorrowā¦ Menā¦ I tell you!). Removing my fingers which had by now left some sort of imprints on his armā¦ I took a step back and whispered hurriedly, "Dekhoā¦ uhā¦" (Lookā¦ uhā¦) I looked on franticallyā¦ my eyes darted around the roomā¦ Ab itney bade Bandar ko mein kahan chupaoon?! (Now where do I hide such a tall monkey?!). I thought irritatedā¦ Finally, I saw the door to the far endā¦ slightly ajar from my exit stillā¦ or I so presumeā¦ Quickly, I tried turning him towards the door, whilst instructing him to keep his mouth zipped and not to make any noiseā¦
"Knock knock"ā¦ Both of us stopped mid-step and turned our heads to look at the source of the noiseā¦ and then at each otherā¦ Frenzied, I virtually pushed him into the bathroom and shut the door on his slightly confused face. Deep breathā¦ Running a quick hand through my hair, I took another reassuring breath, relishing the oxygen, and smiled to myself before heading towards the doorā¦ With my best-composed look (considering the situation) I tilted my head slightly as the door openedā¦ and gave a phoney smile at the promising intruder. "Nihaalā¦ tum yahan?" (Nihaalā¦ you here?) I asked in an almost too-sugary voiceā¦ Quickly, I allowed him the pleasure of coming inā¦ much to my discontentā¦ but that's a whole different issue now isn't itā¦ Deep smileā¦ I could feel my heart flutter anxiously as my eyes shifted nervously towards the closed doorā¦ the soft patter of water ringing in my headā¦ "Maithaliā¦ Main toh yahan kaam ke silsiley mein aya hoonā¦ Dad ne bhejaā¦ lekin tum?" (Maithaliā¦ I came here for workā¦ Dad sent meā¦ but you?). Tum se matlab (And what's that to youā¦)ā¦ I thought irritatedā¦ but of course my loyal voice betrayed my thoughtsā¦ "Main yahan doston ke saath ayi teehā¦ Woheā¦ Bas aise hiā¦ Kaam bhi taah aurā¦" (I came here with friendsā¦ Umā¦ Just becauseā¦ I had work to andā¦)ā¦ I ended it with a smile and my innards churned seeing his features twist in contemplation of my explanation. It's true of courseā¦ I amā¦ or wasā¦ I should say, here with friends and I did have workā¦
I could feel the dupatta slide slowly off the top of my head, where I had unknowingly placed it againā¦ At the same time, the small beads of perspiration prickled at my foreheadā¦ Mujhe itni bechaini kyun ho rahi hai? (Why am I so anxious?) I wondered stupidlyā¦ An awkward silence ensued in the spacious interiorā¦ I felt my entwined fingers hold each other more tightlyā¦ Surely, they were as pale as a sheet of paperā¦ Unable to take it anymore, I opened my mouthā¦ when the duffer beat me to it, "Maithaliā¦ ye awaz kaisi?" (Maithaliā¦ what is that noise?). The colour slowly retreated from my faceā¦ Hai rabbaā¦ I lifted my hand in a gesture of explainingā¦ but could only manage an inaudible mumbleā¦ Kya museebat hai! (What a nuisance!) Coughing, I opened my mouth once moreā¦ just as the door to the bathroom flipped openā¦ demanding immediate attention. I felt as though the world suddenly came crashing downā¦ for the second time that dayā¦ My limbs went into an immobility phase as I looked at my so-called husband stride towards the direction of the armoireā¦ his hands lost amidst the white and black of the towel and his hairā¦ A single towel covered his lower half, while his torso remained perilously unconcealedā¦ Somehow, my gaze managed to find Nihaal'sā¦ Nihaal, is a very expressive guyā¦ and right now, his eyesā¦ were tellingā¦ or rather askingā¦ me the obviousā¦ I wanted to say something, but the words just wouldn't conformā¦ Suddenly, he looked upā¦ as though "sensing" another presence in the room. Pulling out a black top, he came casually forthā¦ I pushed deeper into the dead end of the sofa seat, as he sat on it's armā¦ smilingā¦ Is it possible to go into deeper stages of paralysis? As his lips left a light peck on the side of my head, my eyes went wide in a mixture of horror and disbeliefā¦ The place his lips barely touchedā¦ now tingled with a reminiscing glintā¦ Extending a hand towards the other man, he spoke with such easeā¦ "Hiā¦You must be Nihaalā¦ My wife said something of youā¦" HAI RABBAā¦ Yeā¦ I looked at Nihaalā¦ a small smile slowly formed on my lipsā¦ "Woheā¦ uhā¦ Nihaalā¦ yeā¦ haiā¦ Viā¦ Vikramā¦" Where did that come from?ā¦ and what was the rest?ā¦ As if reading my mind he finished, "Adityaā¦ Vikram-Aditya Mehraā¦" completing with a wink of the eye. I looked at him disgustedā¦
Silent curses escaped my lips as I prepared myselfā¦ When it hit meā¦ The smallness of my smile gently flowed into a deeper endā¦ Taking hold of his arm, I looked at him with a devilish smile and then at Nihaalā¦ "Nihaalā¦ Joh tum soch rahe hoā¦ wohe sach haiā¦" (Nihaalā¦ what you are thinkingā¦ is trueā¦)ā¦ I paused, savouring the taste of his choking expressionsā¦ I felt guilty, reallyā¦ But what do you do when someone is unrelentingly after you (literally!) and your mother wholly approves but only you know how much of a geekā¦ ahemā¦ I mean, he's a nice guy and allā¦ butā¦ "Maine shaadi kar liā¦" (I have gotten marriedā¦)ā¦ The words resounded in the airā¦ reverberating against the wallsā¦ as my heart beat against the chamber of my rib cageā¦ Maine shaadi kar liā¦ Suddenly, the little girl's dream flashed quickly before my eyesā¦ and then my familyā¦ Manthanā¦ "Maithaliā¦" startled, I looked up at Nihaal with misty eyesā¦ Shaking away the thoughts, I came back to my presentā¦ "Hum donoā¦ mera matlab haiā¦ Humney bhaag kar shaadi kar liā¦ Main jaanti hoonā¦ Mammaā¦ Papaā¦ sab kya sochengeā¦ Lekinā¦ wohe chahte tehe ke mainā¦ kahin aur shaadi karoonā¦ aurā¦" (We bothā¦ I meanā¦ We elopedā¦ I knowā¦ Mammaā¦ Papaā¦ what they'll all thinkā¦ Butā¦ they wantedā¦ that I marry elsewhereā¦ andā¦)ā¦ I'm sorry Nihaalā¦ I thought enjoying the bewildered expression on his face, the guilt overridden by the sense of finally overcoming the constant feeling of being under surveillance. I sighed inwardly at the thought of freedom from my mother's I-want-him-as-my-son-in-law. Sure, I have this pigā¦ but meh, that I'll deal withā¦ somehowā¦ Hai rabbaā¦ kahan phas gayi main! (Oh Godā¦ where have I gotten stuck!) I thought suddenly realizing the implication of thisā¦ Almost immediately, my hands fell from his armā¦ and I threw him an apprehensive glance. He smiled. My stomach was ready to turn overā¦ butā¦ he smiled. And strange as it may seemā¦ I smiled backā¦ not a strained smileā¦ but genuinelyā¦ I suppose it was the authenticity of hisā¦ and maybeā¦ this would work after allā¦ The distinct ring of Nihaal's cell broke my unsure thoughts and I looked at the poor manā¦ He looked so disturbed, crestfallenā¦ I felt so badā¦ but it was unbearable either wayā¦ Interrupting his phone conversation, he quickly mumbled, "Maithaliā¦ mujhe kaam haiā¦ I uhā¦ willā¦ meet you in Mumbai?" (Maithaliā¦ I have some workā¦ I uhā¦ willā¦ meet you in Mumbai?). His lips quivered ever so slightly, and I felt the guilt impinge my sense of comfort again as he got up, and I followed suit with my "husband". Saying something to the caller, Nihaal closed the cell and turned towards meā¦ usā¦ again. A wry smile came on my lips, sympathizing with the fellowā¦ when I felt an arm slip around the base of my waistlineā¦ Startled, I looked at the hand now comfortably resting on my hipā¦ and shifted my gaze towards himā¦ He didn't return my lookā¦ nor looked affected by his behaviourā¦ or anyone's for that matterā¦ It seemed as though nothing was wrongā¦ A flicker of irritancy once again arose within me, but I suppressed it as my eyes once again fell upon a gauche Nihaal. I looked unwillingly at his handsā¦ the gadget barely stable in between trembling fingersā¦ ultimately giving wayā¦ the clear thud of plastic against the rug rang in the otherwise restless silence, filled the air. Picking it up quickly, he gave a nervous chuckle before muttering a good bye and saying some words of courtesy to "my husband", before disappearing out the door.
I stood still for a lurking momentā¦ staring at the closed doorā¦ allowing it all to sink inā¦ An unexpected emotional turmoil began to well up within me once more and I found myself clingingā¦ Hai Rabba! Immediately I let go of himā¦ and pulled myself out of his graspā¦ My heart racedā¦ "Over-acting zaroori hai kya?!" (Is over-acting necessary?!) I demanded with arms crossedā¦ An impish grin played on his lipsā¦ as he moved back onto the bed, lazily stretching himselfā¦ I watched him lay thereā¦ his upper body casually falling over the comforter, while his barely covered legs hung loosely at the endā¦ Besharamā¦ (Shamelessā¦) I thought disgustedlyā¦ Moving my head, I turned to another directionā¦ unaware of my destinationā¦ but it wasn't meant to be anyways. Feeling a tug at my arm, I felt myself unwillingly land on his lapā¦ my arms entangled around his neckā¦ his arms enveloping my beingā¦ Stunnedā¦ I sat motionlessā¦ Slowly, his face crept closer to mineā¦ As his forehead met my own, I swear my heart would leap out at any secondā¦ "Sweetheart, aren't you gladā¦ you're no longerā¦ singleā¦" his warm breath tingled my skin as I closed my eyes momentarilyā¦
Promo: "Pleaseā¦" I looked at her devilish beautyā¦ her razor eyes pleading for a revelationā¦ "Kal raatā¦" I began amusedā¦
Adi's side of the storyā¦
Cheers,
dc
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