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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: NShah28

I totally agree with you!! he sooooooo loves Paro more than OM!!! I am going to admit something....i have already fallen for Suyesh myself (his personality is amazing...i hope we all find someone who loves us as much as he loves Paro.😳 Update on its way!!


Well me too fallen now completely😳awwww...now we both are suyash's deewanis 😳 Well I have fallen for him since i saw him CIDSB as ACP Ajatshastru😳aww he's soo damn hot and cute in CIDSB😳😳😳Well I'm waiting for update now😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Well me too fallen now completely😳awwww...now we both are suyash's deewanis 😳 Well I have fallen for him since i saw him CIDSB as ACP Ajatshastru😳aww he's soo damn hot and cute in CIDSB😳😳😳Well I'm waiting for update now😃

😆 UPDATE ON ITS WAY!!! thankgod im not the only one who thinks he is hot!! yes i am a Suyesh deewani!!😳!! he always looks so well dressed! what is paro thinking...Suyesh loves her sooooo much more than OM! Suyesh all the way for me!!!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: NShah28

😆 UPDATE ON ITS WAY!!! thankgod im not the only one who thinks he is hot!! yes i am a Suyesh deewani!!😳!! he always looks so well dressed! what is paro thinking...Suyesh loves her sooooo much more than OM! Suyesh all the way for me!!!😳


Suyash is also all the way for me too😳i know hate paro for doing this with suyash. Haila kab update karogi? main toh wait kar kar ke sookh gayi hon😉Now Me to Suyash ki deewani 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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agree with day dreamer - 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi. 😃 Just went through this whole fan fic yaar... 😃 and what do I say??? 😳 😳 😳 It Absolutely Rocks... 👏 👏 👏 simply awesome yaar... 😳 simply awesome... 😳 😳 😳 aw, I'm so delighted to know that I'm not the only one totally insane about Parvati-Suyash... 😳 I love them 2gether... 🤗 their relationship is tooo special... 😳 and yes, I've always said this... 😃 glad to hear that many others feel this way too... 😃 Suyash loves Parvati far, far more 😳 😳 😳 than Om does... Keep rocking yaar... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you all soooooooooooooooooo much.....update will in the next two hours, so sorry 😭 😭 😭 it 😭 😭 t 😭 o 😭 o 😭 k 😭 😭 so long but i promise its sizzling!!! 😳

Next post by me will be update! Promise!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh man 2 hours? I'll be gone by then 😭 I've lesson then 😭 😭 😭 I've lesson in an hour and soo.. 😭 😭 anyways..see you 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: NShah28

Thank you all soooooooooooooooooo much.....update will in the next two hours, so sorry 😭 😭 😭 it 😭 😭 t 😭 o 😭 o 😭 k 😭 😭 so long but i promise its sizzling!!! 😳

Next post by me will be update! Promise!!!!

dts ok 😆 look 4ward 2 it 👍🏼

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Due for a long time and extremely sorry to you all 😭 !!!!!!!

Hope its worth the wait... here goes!!!

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"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! You stupid man, yeh kya karahe ho!! SECURITY!! SECURITY!!! Help me!!!" 😡 😡 😡

S shocked stumbles out of the cubicle realising he was walked into the wrong one. The lady is not his beautiful Paro but a very larger sized woman who is busy putting her tights back on!

He shuts his eyes to stop himself from going literally blind. His heart is racing with fear and he stutters "sorry" repeatedly.

"Tum kya kar rahe ho, itni umar mein tumko sharam nahi aati...mere pati bahaar hai, mein tumhara woh hashar kar doonghi ke tum zindagi bar kisi aurat ki taraf nahi dekhoge!!!"

Suyesh absoloutely petrified starts to walk away, all his feeling of passion and lust diminished, hoping that no-one comes in and creates a scene.

Just as he is about to walk away he sees P the next cubicle laughing, obviously she has witnessed the whole scene.

P: "Mr Mehra, aap bhi na, serves you right...aashiq ban kar kya karoonge, you cant do anything right."

Suyesh hearing this starts to fume, his anger and passion all come racing back. She is still laughing and sound of her voice enrages him even more.

He can't take it anymore, her taunts force him to quickly move forward and pull the curtain back. She gasps and tries to push him back, but he is stronger and closes the curtain with one hand whilst pushing her against the wall with the other.

He holds her by the shoulders against the wall, his eyes wander down her body as he realises that she is only partially dressed. He cant take his eyes off her.

S: "Can't do anything right? Mein aashiq ban kar kya karoonga? aashiq mein tumhara aaj se nahi, bhees sal se bana ta!! Waht do you know about love? I have watched you for so long, not being able to come close to you, living in rejection, how dare you laugh at me? Yes I have not been able to do anything right when it comes to my love for you. I was to scared to show you my true feelings as I did not want to lose you."

Her gently starts to caress her bare shoulders sending shivers down her spine and moves his face closer to her ear, pushing his body against hers.

S whispers: "Not anymore Paro, maine kasam kai hai that I will make you mine, make you feel the same passion and lust that I feel!! and the day you do I swear you will come running to me!!"

P stuggles to get away but S holds onto her body tighter.

S: "look into my eyes and tell methat you cant see how much i love you, you are my life. I only think about you, you are the reason for my existence...and you say that I cant be an aashiq. I don't know why I bother trying to make you understand... you only care about yourself and your family!!"

P feeling a bit guilty: "You are my friend, of course I care about you..."

S puts his hand on her mouth...

S: "Chup!!! Dosti... I dont want your dosti, I want you!! I want your body, mind and soul!! I want to wake up every morning and see your beautiful face next to me! I want to watch you get dressed for me every morning.. I want to spend every second of every minute of every hour in every day with you!!"

S comes even closer and murmurs into her ear:
" I want to spend my night with you, hold you in my arms and kiss you! 😳 I want to sleep holding you tightly knowing that it is not a dream and that you are really there with me."

With his eyes full of lust and body full of passion he realises that he has finally said what he feels after all these years.

S: "I love you so much Paro, more than anything in this world...zinda hoon main tumhare liye and I will only die for you."

He lifts her face up and stares deeply into her eyes and take a deep breath...

" I love you Paro...KHUD SE ZAYAADA, RAB SE ZAYAADA!!!"

His eyes well up and he can feel his heart burning, a lump forms in his throat and he desparetly wants her to hold him tight.

P is staring at him in a daze. she looks like she has been told something terrible and cannot believe what she has heard...she slowly closes her eyes and with all her strength pushes him away. His back smashes off the wall and she violently pulls a sari over her body while he watches her, his eyes roam over her whole body and his fingers itch to touch her again. 😳 😳 😳

She looks up and glares at him with pure hatred 😡 and moves towards him...her heart beating fast and points afinger at him.

P: "You have just crossed the barrier Mr Suyesh Mehra, by doing this you have brought back the hatred which I had felt for you for so long."

She continues to shout and wave her hand in front of him, " you will pay for this Mehra! you will pay for this!"

S grabs her hand and pulls her towards him and puts her hand on his heart.

"Don't make such promises Paro, you konw as well as I do that you cant do anything to me anymore...stop trying to hide behind a wall and show me your true feelings."

P pulls away and Suyesh leans back against the wall and sighs...he looks at her and gives her the most sweet smile and asks: "what are you doing to me, how much more will you make me wait? "

She picks up her bag and is about to leave when he grabsher from behind the waist and whispers in her ear.

S: "Ja rahi ho, maat jaoon...abhi abhi to bateein shuro hoin hai."

P silently pulls his hands off her waist and walks out of the room.

S is shocked that she has not said anything back and thinks, " this time maybe I have took it too far!!"

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P is slowly walking away in a complete daze...all she can think about is his hands on her bare shoulders...hos warm whispers in her ears...flashbacks in her mind of all their moents together,,, "hai rabba,mujhe kya horaha hai.."

(Song Meri duniya mein aakar maat ja, from Tum Bin)

S is leaning with his back against the wall with his eyes closed and P walking in a daze with with immense confusion in her eyes....

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Phew guys!! Again sorry its late... 😭 😭
Please let me know what you all think...again taking it slow as dont want to rush the FF!! P.S. Suyesh is Hot!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg that was beautiful update soon 😃 😉 that was so cute! (p.s. Suyash IS hot i agree! atleast im not the only one who thinks this!)

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