Khud se Zayada-Rab se Zayada Pg 48

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Hey All,

After the great response from you all regarding a FF on Suyesh/Paro, here goes!!!!!

I have never done anything lik this before (EVER) so plz plz bear with me!!Let me know what you all think and if I should continue or just give up!! 😆

Agarawal House

Kamal: "Bhabi, ab jaldi se tayaar ho jao na"

Paro: " Aare Kamal, mein bas paanch minute mei aayee, tum driver se kahoo ke woh gaadi tayaar kare!"

Paro quickly climbs the stairs to get dressed, as she is walking her foot trips on her sari and she falls forward, her mind races and she fears she will hurt herself she screams..but shocked she realises that she has her head resting on a strong chest and she is being held by the waist with equally strong hands.

Thinking that it is Bharat she starts thanking him

Paro: "Bharat, mein bhi na, itni jaldi mein...dekh kar bhi nahi chal sak..." her eyes wonder up and she stops mid sentence.

Paro: stutters "Aare Mr Mehra aap..."

Suyesh: " Haa Parvati Ji...."

Parvati quickly realises that she is in a very arkward position and that if anyone saw them like this they would start gossiping. She tries to back away and clmb the stairs but Suyesh wont let her go.

Suyesh: "Are you going out somewhere?"

Paro: "Yes, there is a fundraiser ball tonight and Kamal is waiting for me in the car, I need to get ready we are already very late..I look a mess..."

Suyesh tightens his grip on her waist slightly..." Mujhe to app baahut sundar lag rahi ho.." his voice trails off as Paro's face angers. Suyesh silently thinks "what have I have done that for, I should not have said anything.. why cant i just shut up...we are doing so well as friends."

Paro pushes Suyesh away and shouts: " Mr Mehra, Aaj aisi baat kaahi hai, magar phir kabhi maat karna...aap jaante hai ke mai..."

Suyesh: " Sorry Parvati Ji, aap ab jaye, tum ko dher ho raahi hai..." and moves out of her way.

Paro rushes upstairs as Suyesh's eyes follow her every move and slams the door shut. The noise of the door peirces a hole into his heart. He turns around and slowly walks down the stairs, flashbacks of him holding her and looking into her eyes cloud his memory and he cant think straight, he can still smell her sweet fragrance which blocks his senses.

" Zindagi main koi khabhi aaye na rabba, aaye na koi khabhi jaaye no rabba" races through his mind

Suyesh says to himself: " Mein kyo bhar bhar uske kareeb aana chata ho, is dill ko kitni bhar samjaoh ke jo hai usse khosh ro, aur kuch hone ki umeed mat karo..uske dil mein OM hi OM hai"

"dene ho agar baadmein aassooon toh pehle kabhi hasaye na rabba"

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(5 mins later - suyesh still in deep thoughts with flashbacks of all the times he spent with Paro)

Suyesh: " Yeh payal ki awaaz..." turns around and sees Paro walking down the stairs, his heart stops....

Their eyes meet as Paro walks down the stairs till she is standing in front of him...suyesh knees go weak and his vision blurs...he cant beathe as he is in shock at how beautiful she looks...

Paro: "Mr Mehra mein..."

Suyesh with extreme hurt in his eyes breaks his gaze from her and thinks, "mein yeh dard bardhaasht nahi kar sakta ho, im so jealous if anyone even looks at her, itni khoobsurat to aaj tak....mind blowing!"

Paro: "....Mujhe maaf..."

Suyesh raises his voice filled with emotion and visible hurt: " Parvati Ji, BAS CHUP... ap ab jaye yaaha se..are't you late (sarcastically!)" and walks off leaving Paro staring in shock!!!

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Oh my God!! that was fun!!😊 😊 😊 what do you all think?? should i continue or not?? 😉

Edited by NShah28 - 17 years ago

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Ashi91 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 4 a start ..... do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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loved it =) plzz continue its the only paro suyesh ff and its a good one!=) 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oohh goody.... while we wait in agony for junior mehra and methli to get together(they seem to have put adi in jail and then forgotten about him...sheesh... soo much money...sooo much power and the guy cant b bailed out.... wheres's rajo...taking beauty naps or wat? 😡 ).....
we can make do with suyash and paro.... once again such a lovely uncle aunty jodi... even though om's coming bac.. i always felt really bad for suyash's unrequited love...
cant wait to read on 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great.. please continue...(such mein nahin tho sapne mein kumse kum un dono ko sath mein dekhenge..)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh my god its simply fabulous 👏 👏 👏 please please do continue. Now that om is back u r my only hope o seeing suyash nd paro together.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey buddy please do continue, nd plz plz dont ever leave this fan-fic inbetween,i mean please complete it na
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey all, thanks for your great comments!! will def def def continue with the FF!!

Spend all day thinking bout new scenarios for the perfect jodi!! it is really fun and would recommend everyone to write a FF!!

Will update soon with very romantic scenes for them both! thinking its about time that paro started showing some feelings towards Suyesh!! xxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cant wait 😃 when will you be continuing? ???😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey buddy thanks a lot for promising to continue this FF but now update soon coz we r dying here waiting 😊

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