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Posted: 18 years ago
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Will be continuing today! in about one hour! xxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for the great comments everyone, they are very encouraging so please keep them coming!!

I have tried to put a new twist onto the FF, so hope you all like it!! Here goes:


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The next morning at breakfast Suyesh was sitting at the head of the table eating breakfast alone, still in deep thoughts and upset over last night sequences of events.

Kamal and Sameer were in the corridor discussing business, whilst Vendy Masi and the rest of the 'golden oldies' were busy in the kitchen.

Parvati joined Suyesh at the table and poured herself a cup of tea.

P: "Where is everyone?"
S: "You would know better than me!!!" sarcastically
P: "What do you mean by that?" she asks rather upset at his tone
S: "Nothing, what are your plans for today," trying to change the tpoic whilst calming his emotions realising he was hurting her.

The last thing he wanted was for her to be hurt but enough was enough and he could not put on a false pretence and pretend that he did not love her.

Whilst she was at the party last night he had decided that he would not stand back anymore and there was nothing/nobody going to stop him from being with her.

So now emerged a new Suyesh Mehra, full of passion, strength, lust and a powerful sense of poseesion for the woman who has had hold of his heart for the last 20yrs. He would make her fall in love with him as could not bear to live without her anymore.

S silently curses himself for not meeting P earlier in his life...he would never have married that evil witch Rajeswari!!

P: "Just some office work and then I need to go to the bazzar for some new saris."

S: "Great, il come along with you!"

P: "But what will you do there? se exclaimed amusingly.

S said: " help my darling choose something beautiful to wear" whilst putting his hand over hers on the table.

P shocked tries to pull her hand away but S tightens his grip and pulls her towards him...

S: "Mera style itna boora bhi nahin!!!" πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

P: "Choro mera haat!!!!!" 😑 😑

S: "Not anymore Parvati Ji, I won't let go of your hand now!! you have tested my patience long enough, i cant bear to even be away from you for a second!!"

Their eyes lock and P can feel his warm breath on her face, she looks like an angel (he thinks!!), tears well up in her eyes and she trembles with fear. Seeing his effect on her, Suyesh lets go of her hand and smoothes her hair from her face and cups her chin in his hands.

S: "I'll pick you up from the office at 1pm so be ready"

S got up from the table and was about to walk off....

P: "How dare you???? Tumhari joorat ke tum ne mujhe chooah Suyesh Mehra!!!!" 😑 😑 😑

S: "Why, why should I not? I'm your husband!!"

P raises her voice: "Nahin...OM mere pati te, pati hai aur hamesha rehenge!!!, did you hear that Suyesh Mehra, I will break your hands if you touch me again!!"

Suyesh moves forward and looks her right in the eyes, his temper flares as his passion takes over his body...

S: "What did you say? you will break my hands if i touch you? is that so, well lets see about that" he glared

He forcefully grabs her hand and pulls her up from the chair, whilst holding her by the waist violently pulls her behind a pillar so no-one can see them.

He pushes her against the pillar and forces both her hands up and grabs them tightly above her head whilst moving his face dangerously close to hers.

S: "come on then, break my hands...what are you waiting for..." he whipers into her ear.

P struggles to break free from his grip as his powerful body has created a strong barrier for her to escape from. She cannot believe what he is doing...this is totally out of character and she feels ballistic at the new way he is acting.

However she could not ignore the shivers down her spine everytime he whispered into her ear!!

P: "let go of me right now Suyesh Mehra...or i will scream..."

S amused: "go ahead Parvati Ji...sorry my darling!"

P enraged at his words pushes him away with great stength
and lifts her hand to slap him. her breathing is out of control and she feels as thou she is going to faint.

She lowers her hand to slap him but he grabs it and pulls it behind her back pushing her up against his body and with his other hand grabs her head and pulls her hair back, she winces in pain!! this hurts him more...but he cant control his passion anymore!!

S: "Bas, no more!!" he lowers his face towards her, so close he is practically touching his lips against her soft cheek.

S: " Main Suyesh Mehra KASAM KATHA HO, that I will make you mine, even if it kills me!! Your hands , lips, eyes, hair body will all be mine!!"

P is so angry at this stage, she can not see straight, her whole body was shaking and she could only think about killing him!!!!

P: "let go of me, right now, tum ek widwa ka atmaan kar rahe ho, tumko itni bhi sharam nahi, tum jjante ho ke meh tumhe barbaad kar doongi."

S with passion and lust in his eyes tightens his grip on her arm..." woh to tum pehle se kar diya hai, tumhare ilava main kuch sochta nahin, i don't feel hungry, i don't sleep, your dreams haunt me at night. I can't hold my love for you inside anymore. 20yrs I have fought with myself...i have endured all your insults, punishments, accusations...your hatred kept me alive and going...but not anymore!!!!"

(Imagine...song from Ab tumhare hawale watan saatiyoh!! mujhe pyar do in background !!)

P: "I don't have time for your Bakwaas..."

Suyesh pulls her hair

S: "Bakwaas...my love is Bakwaas...no-one will love you more than i do...no-one!!!"

He lets her go and pushes her against the pillar, " be ready for 1pm!!" he fumes

P smirks 'no way' but her eyes tell a different story, sorrowful and full of hurt tears stream down her face as she moves to the side of the pillar and runs off...up the stairs and into the car!!!

S not quite understanding what has just happened bakcs away from the pillar, in disbelief of what he has just done!! tears fill his eyes 😭 😭 and his heart aches!!

S loudly thinks, " Yeh maine kya kiya.." closes his eyes and her angelic face flashes in his mind...he understands now why!

"She is mine...i will make her mine..even if I have to go against all morals and beliefs and tradition... wo meri banegi, sirf mari...barso kiya hai maine intezaar...ab nahin!!!"

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In her car P's mind is racing, S words echoing in her ears, she can still feel the warmth of his hands on her body..."what is happening to me" she thinks, " nahin...nahin...meh aur kisike baare mein nahin soch sakti... OM mujhe bachalo, mere bhagwan tum ho, sirf tum!!"

She starts the car and slams her hands on the steering wheel and puts her foot on the accelerator, jerks and reverses the car fron the house abd drives away!!!

" BE READY FOR 1PM!!!! " Suyesh voice echoes......

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Phew!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

xxxxxxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Woowww brilliant job NShah πŸ‘ I really liked it. I'll def def def read it πŸ˜ƒ Totally loved the scenes btw paro-suyash😳😳WoowwwπŸ‘
Edited by Day_Dreamer - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome cant w8 for parvati n suyesh scenes 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳

Ur comments are superb guys!!! keep them coming!!! will draft an update tonight and try to post it tomorrow!! xxxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh man .. superb.. πŸ‘i really really liked it..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: chrisencia

oh man .. superb.. πŸ‘i really really liked it..

Thanks!!!😳😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh god that was absolutely brilliant,amazing,great,cool,superb,too good,excellent..... πŸ‘ Hey i am 100000000000 % sure u will get the Booker prizeif u start writing books.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey buddy when will u update next
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sherlock_holmes

oh god that was absolutely brilliant,amazing,great,cool,superb,too good,excellent..... πŸ‘ Hey i am 100000000000 % sure u will get the Booker prizeif u start writing books.

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U are 2 kind hun!!! i am drafting an update as we speak. have to admit i was very scared to start something like this but am so glad i went for it as I am lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggg gg it now!!!!!!!!πŸ˜†

I have work in the mornin, but promise to give a long update.....!!! keep the comments coming they push me along!!!

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