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Posted: 17 years ago
Are yaar ppppppppplllllllllllllllzzzzzzz continue we r waiting 4 ur update eagerly
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: NShah28

fantastic, plz continue soon!!! 👏

thanks! i'll continue on the weekend promise!!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Inshira

Are yaar ppppppppplllllllllllllllzzzzzzz continue we r waiting 4 ur update eagerly

ok yaar....will continue on da weekend! he he😆😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: May1902

Nice story!!!
pls continue 😃 😛

thanks!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Robin_M

lol that was great! you added the scene from my all time fav movie HAHK!!!!!!!! love it! hope adi chases mets around and end up fallin on each other just like salu and madhuri! cant wait for more, continue soon!

😆😆😆oh they're deffo gonna do that!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss English

😊 Hi itz great story! kep it up!!!!

thanks!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: luv asin

Its really nice 😳 .Loved the part. 😳
plsssss update soon 😳

thanks!😛 will update on da weekend!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

sorry for such a big delay...but i'll be updating a lot quicker from now on...hope you all like this part...forgive me if its boring and rushed...

Chapter 27

Adi ran up to maithili's room to see where she had hidden the box…he hid in her cupboard when he heard her come in…

M: tannu..i hid the box under the bed..

T: why did you do that for??? It's the easiest place!!

M: exactly!! Adi will think of all the hard places and completely forget the easiest one of all!!!

A: smart!

Adi whispered..

M: I know!

T; what???

M: you just said something right?

T: no…

M: oh! Well lets go now…before anyone gets suspicious!

Maithili and tannu leave. Adi comes out of the cupboard and takes the bo from under the bed…

Downstairs..

M: 10 000!!!

T: 10 000!!!

WE SHALL, WE SHALL NOT GIVE SHOES!!!

The girls chanted while bharat and Pranay hit their heads to the wall..

P: tanu! 10 000's too much!

T: no it isn't bhaiya!!! Give it or else….

P: uff! OK…

Pranay took out the 10 000 rupees and was about to hand it to tannu when Adi spoke…

A: array bhai!! Pehele joote toh dene do! Phir paise!

P: that's right!

M: ok then! Tannu…chalo!

Maithili and tannu go upstairs to take the shoes but find out they aren't there…

Maithili gets annoyed as she knows only adi could have done such a thing…

She comes down the stairs quite annoyed and angry..

Adi is standing at the bottom of the stairs with his arms folded..

Dulhe Ki Saaliyon O Hare Dupatte Vaaliyon Joote De Do Paise Lelo Joote De Do Paise Lelo Maithili gets annoyed Dulhan Ke Devar Tum Dikhalaao Na Yoon Tevar Paise Dedo Joote Lelo Paise Dedo Joote Lelo Maithili set out to find the shoes…she looked under the tables, in the cupboards but couldn't find them anywhere She smiled sarcastically at Adi..Ajee Note Gino Ji, AdiJoote Laao Metz – getting annoyedZid Chhodho Ji, Adi - nonchallentlyJoote Laao Metz- angryFraud Hain Kya Hum, Adi - sarcasticallyTum Hi Jaano Metz - angryAkadu Ho Tum, AdiJo Bhi Maano Jo Bhii Maano, Jo Bhii Maano MetzAjee Baat Badhegi, AdiBadh Jaane Do MetzMaang Chadhegi, AdiChadh Jaane Do MetzAdho Na Aise, AdiPehle Joote Pehle joote Pehle joote MetzJoote Liye Hain Nahin Churaayaa Koi Zevar Dulhan Ke Devar Tum Dikhlaao Naa Yoon Tevar Paise Dedo Joote Lelo Joote Dedo Paise Lelo Mets keeps looking for the shoes but is tired…she has mischievous glint in her eyes.. MetzKuchh Thandaa Pi Lo, AdiMood Nahin Hai MetzDahi Bade Lo, AdiMood Nahin Hai MetzKulfi Kha Lo, AdiBahut Kha Chuke MetzPaan Khaa Lo, AdiBahut Kha Chuke Bahut Kha Chuke Bahut Kha Chuke MetzAjee Rasmalaai, AdiAapke Liye MetzItni Mithaai, AdiAapke Liye Pehle Joote, MetzKhaaenge Kya AdiAapki Marzi, MetzNaaji Taubaa Naaji Taubaa Naaji Taubaa AdiKisi Betuke Shaayar Ki Besuri Qawaaliyon Dulhe Ki Saaliyon O Hare Dupatte Vaaliyon Joote Dedo Paise LeloJoote de do paise lelo

Mets finally finds the shoes in a flower basket. She grabs them and adi holds her hand. She pushes him away and starts running up the stairs..

Adi runs after her.

Maithili enters her room and runs round the bed with adi chasing her. She stops to take a breath. Adi jumps up on the bed and pulls maithili down.

She falls onto him and both lay on the bed.

She stares at him and he stares back. Both are lost in each others eyes.

Maithili's face increases in red…

She slowly turns around but can still feel adi's gaze on her. She tries to get up but adi's hands are firmly wrapped round her waist..

"adi…" she whispers…

A: hmm…

M: mujhe chodo…

A: hmmm….

M; adi!

Adi wakes up from his daze and leaves her. She slowly gets up and turns round to leave the room, but adi grasps her hand. She closes her eyes as his touch sends shivers down her spine. He tugs her back so her back thuds his chest.

Her eyes are still closed but the pace of her breath quickens. Adi's cheek brushes against maithili's cheek making her squint her shut eyelids. Adi smirks and lets go of her hand..

"go.." he whispers.

She opens her eyes and stares at him...she shyly smiles and runs downstairs..

Adi smirks as she retrieves the money from pranay and shikhar.

Pranay wears his shoes and sits in the mandap. the marriage rites begin.
After the marriage is over, malishka hugs prem and Shruti as per bidai rasms, she would have to live in Mehra mansion now.
Maithili stands in a corner weeping as mallishka's doli is lifted from their house. Mallishka comes in front of maithili and they tightly hug each other.
Ma: i'll miss you di..
Mall: me too metz..
both share an emotional moment and mallishka moves on with pranay.
Maitili ran upstairs to her room crying..
she sat on the bed and weeped. She ran through the memories Mallishka and herself shared. She heard a knock on the door..
"come in.." she meekly said..
The door creaked open to reveal Adi..
M; tum...? shouldn't you be at your house...
A: yes..but i thought i'd come see you..
M; why..
A: woh..acctually..i just wanted to tell you not to cry...because i'm there na! i'm there to take care of mallishka...sorry..mallishka bhabi..and pranay bhai's there and bharat too...

maihtili smiled as he rambled on. She looked at him warmly and hugged him. Adi was quite surprised at this,..and didn't respond. Maihtili realised sunddnenly what she was doing and parted from him..
M: sorry..i just..needed..
A:...needed a hug..??
maihtili smiled and nodded.
A: well..umm you can visit bhabi any time...you know she is your sister afterall..
maithili laughed again..
both adi and maihtili were quite for some time...they didn't know what to say or what to do..
A; umm...i..bye..
Maithili smiled..bye...

Thoughts of adi came to her mind...she thought of all the times Adi suported her..in Goa...in Panchmeshwar, and how she hugged him today, and a while back...
a faint smile came to her face and she drifted off to sleep

Edited by tsamhita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
yey first to comment thnxs 4 da update loved every word 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
sammie.. you continued this too 👏 👏 👏 .. HAHK is an all time favourite and can never be tired off. I imagined Adi and Maithili while reading the episode 😳 .. Loved the ending.. Please continue soon..

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