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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

wow awesum!!! 👏 👏
they both have accepted da challenge lets see who wins
cnt wait continue soon 😳

yeah!!! lets😉😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: anjaneajnabi

an idea you shuld do singing and dancing stuff bwt adi n mets ... in the sangeet where they battle it out with songs that would be funni 😛

oh i'm deffinately doing that for sure!!! its gonna be dhamaal from AM in the next few parts...

i'm also building it up till they get forced to marry each other...which will be exciting!!!😉😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
Post soon cuz I am dying to see who wns.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvraz-Krishna

Post soon cuz I am dying to see who wns.

will post tonight!!!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
Chapter 26
Maithili was in a room getting mallishka ready.
M: di…your very lucky, that you got a husband like pranay…

Mall: and you're very lucky that you're gonna marry adi!
M: what??? As if!!!
T; ok! Now avoid that topic!
M; so tannu, tell me, kya tum ladke waale ke side se ho ya ladki waale ke side se?
T: di…today's mallishka's shaadi so I'm obviously gonna be on ladki waale side!
M: OMG!!!! That means you're going to go against ADI!!!! I'm sooo happy!!!
T; avoid it!!!
M: ok! Come lets go and steal the shoes!

Adi and Bharat are sitting and in between them is a sweets box.
Bharat slowly opens it…and Pranay's shoes are in it…
A: bharat!! Hide it!! I don't want tannu and maithili seeing them!!
B: ok ok!
But bharat was too late. Tannu had already seen the shoes.

Tannu came and stood in front of adi and bharat
T: sweets bo mein kya hai bharat???
She asked cunningly
B: ummm…sweets box mein toh sweet hoge!! Aur kya?
T: oh really!?!?
A: tannu!!! Darling!!! Adi hugs her and slowly slips a 500 rupees note in her hand..
T: bhaiya!!! You're bribing me???
A; something like that…
T: then I like it!!
Adi smirked and tannu did so too..
T: but you might want to take care of the box…you don't know who to trust….and who not to!
She said glancing at bharat.

Adi grew suspicious and glared at bharat..
A: bharat!!!! Who's side are you on!!!!
B: bhai…don't listen to tannu! I'm on you're side!!
Adi and bharat started fighting and tannu slowly grabbed the box and made a run for it.

She laughed as she reached her room. She hid it under the pillows and turned round only to find bharat grinning at her…
T; umm…bharat…you?? here??
Bharat advanced towards tannu
T: why are you here?
Tannu began moving backwards until she found herself trapped against the wall.

T: bharat…
Bharat, without saying a word caressed Tannu's neck. She closed her eyes and turned away. Bharat slowly took the box from under the pillows and was about to turn around when tannu tugged his sherwani.
He turned around and came close to her again.
T: bharat…
B: ssshhhh..!!
Bharat caressed Tannu's cheek and neck with his nose and tannu clasped his hand tightly…
T: I….main…woh…I….Love…the shoes!!!
Saying so, tannu pushed bharat off and ran away with the box in her hands.
Bharat smirked and ran after her…

Tannu hid behind ronit and bharat searched for her..
B: umm..ronit, have you seen tannu?
R: uh…she's…not behind me…??
Tannu hit her hand on her head…
T: hey bhagwaan!!! She came out from behind ronit and smiled sarcastically at bharat who cocked up his eyebrow and tugged at her hand.
B: shoes please!
T: he he…tannu laughed nervously…
And when tannu showed no signs of giving the shoes to Bharat, he grabbed her waist and kissed her cheek. She was shocked and let go of the shoes immediately. Bharat took the box and went off, leaving tannu numb and holding her cheek

Bharat gave the shoes to adi and smirked…
A: wah!! This is the first good thing you've done in you're whole life!!
B: shut-up adi!!!
A: batamees!! Call me bhaiya!!
B: huh! As if!!
Adi and bharat were about to start another argument when a girl came up to adi..
"excuse me….there's a call for you…"
a: me??
"yes…in that room.." the girl said pointing to a room.
Adi nodded
A: bharat…take care of the box…
He whispered… "you can never trust these girls!!"
Adi smiled at the girl and went into the room.

In the same corridor leading to the room, maithili and her friends sat under the table holding a mobile.
Adi picked up the cord phone in the room..

A: hello…
"jee..main Suman…" maithili spoke in a squeaky voice
A: Suman???
M: ha!!! You remember me???
A: umm…yes…umm..no…
M: you love me!!! Remember???
A: what!! I love you?? when??
M; you even said so!!!
A: when!!!!????
M: in Panchmeshwar
A: what??!!! Panchmeshwar!??? What rubbish!! When??
M: you even made me pregnant…
Maithili sniggered covering the phone…
A: what nonsense!!! I never even touched you!!! I don't even know who you are!
M: is this Vikram ji???
A: NO!!! I'm adi!! Vikram-Aditya Mehra!!!
M: sorry! Wrong number!!!
Maithili giggled and put the phone down.

Adi frowned and put the phone down. As he turned he saw bharat sitting on the chair…
A: why are you here?
B: you called me..
A; yes i…what??? I didn't call you!
B: but tannu said you did!!
A: THE BOX!!!!!!!
Adi and bharat for ran for the box and were relieved to find it still there.
A: phew!! Just check it once to make sure!
Bharat opened the box and looked shocked at adi…
A: what's in the box? Adi said smiling
B: sweets..
A: good…WHAT!!!
B: and a letter…
A: read it!!!

Only sweets should be kept in a sweets box!…

A: Maithili!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
good part.. isn't that just like salman-madhuri in Hum Apke Hain Kaun? 😊 😊 anywayz continue soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
hum aapke hain kaun... I still enjoy these scenes.. It would be fun if it happened between Adi and mets.. Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: laksh_ktfan

good part.. isn't that just like salman-madhuri in Hum Apke Hain Kaun? 😊 😊 anywayz continue soon 😃 😃

yeah..i know its from Hum aapke hai kaun...n i'll add th ejoote do paise lo bit as well...coz i can just picture adi as salmaan and maithili as madhuri...i really liked that bu=it from HAHK so i used it...hope you don't mind...😕😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shananubis

hum aapke hain kaun... I still enjoy these scenes.. It would be fun if it happened between Adi and mets.. Pls continue soon...

eactly..i thought you'd all enjoy it..coz i enjoyed writing it...lol...i hope i haven't annoyed anyone😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
lovely lovely
arghhhhhhhhhh so cuteeeeeeee naaaaa
sweeet sweet
love when adi say
batameez call me bhaya

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