'Haqeeqat': MADI ff,p.30(utd 10/05) END - Page 10

Originally posted by: Anisha7

Part 3- what can I say? You are the one of the best writers I know 😳 And I am not just saying that, seriously you are wicked and talented 😃 The words you used to express the situations and the expressions on the faces of Adi and Maithli was wicked 👏 😃 Sorry about the delay in reading, but I read it and wasn't disappointed 😳

Anshu, seriousness is not your forte meri behna😳 In any case, *bows humbly*

Part 4- Hailaa dard ka rishta.. 😆 Shouldn't be laughing..But its funny 😳 😆 Am sure Adi is glad he stayed there.. 😳 And am sure inside Maithli was also glad that she got to see Adi sleeping 😆 😆 I liked part 3 more, but still part 4 was good! 😃

I can see how its funny, as it sounds so dramatic na... But don't they always say that dard ka rishtaa is the deepest in all serials?😳😆 I told you its filmi😆 But I suppose, only one in pain can feel anothers'... And I love your honesty, I felt the same... 3 was an "under pressure" thing I guess😕

Keep it up..I only read three people's FF's and yours is one of the best! 😳 😃 It comes in the top 3 😉

Wow... I'm doing damn good!😃 Humme iss kabil samajhne ke liye shukriya mohtarma😆 Thanks Anshu.

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: sidsk

the best thing about ur story is that there are hardly any dialogues but still so much is said 😳 keep it up yaar 👏 👏 cant wait for the next one.....plzzzzz update soon 😳

You must be telepathic!😆 JK!!... That's a beautiful comment... Thank you!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: sisam

i luv you!!!!!!!!!!!! jkjk 😆 😆 *blushes*😆😆
that was AMAZING................. *bows humbly*
its so intense......... 😳 the way you explain everything..........

i liked the part where methili's dupatta is caught in adi's hand 😳 😳 i was hoping she would let adi keep the dupatta😆........... so he can remember her😆 but i guess it wuld be cheezy....😛😉😆 *lmao* amazing that didn't cross my mishmash (brains😆)... Yeah, it would have been cheezy, but still cute😳 But hey, she's got the clothes she's borrowed😃

u r awesome 😃 😆 thanku!😛 but really... I'm not!😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

haila.. aapne toh update bhi kardiya aur aapne mujhe bataana bhi nahin..!

Sorry sweetie... Tum ne bhi toh nahin bataya ke main tumhe bataoon... Oye, did that even make sense?😕

brilliant.. dii simply brilliant..!! *lmao* I love the word... especially when u use it... its so blatantly stated... and you leave me smiling like a langoor, thanks Aakriti😃

haila.. dard ka rhista.....😭 😭 😭 I know eh... so dramatic... like a hindi movie😳😆 Roh mat yaar... tujhe toh pata hai na... apun ki ff hai, toh rona dhona situations are there... but for the characters na!

beautiful update, jaldi si aap ko update karna padega..

hai meri amma... kya eshtyle hai. pehle sweet comments and then, the bomb...😆

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*bows humbly* thanks sweetie~

Cheers,

dc