'Haqeeqat': MADI ff,p.30(utd 10/05) END - Page 12

Oh my god! DC provide some water as well when you post the next part 👏 👏 👏 It is so beautifully written.. You actually inspire me to write though I haven't written in years so I really don't know if i should start it or not 😳

oh my gosh 😳 this is fantastic! they are sooooo cute and i really love the way you are showing their feelings! the confusion and excitment, simply great! i bet adis at the door 😳 lol well its soooo good so far and i hope you can continue soon!

Originally posted by: jenny1000

Oh my god! DC provide some water as well when you post the next part 👏 👏 👏 It is so beautifully written.. You actually inspire me to write though I haven't written in years so I really don't know if i should start it or not 😳

Jenny... yaar, your words are an inspiration in themselves... And if I inspire you in that direction, then bless me... Would love to read your magic, I'm sure you'll be amazing. Thank you so much for the kind words, you humble me. Please, do shower us with your lines... Actually, its not a request anymore...😉

Cheers,

dc

P.S., paani ki kya zaroorat... take a look at some Adi pics... bhook pyaas sab gayab!😃

Originally posted by: Robin_M

oh my gosh 😳 this is fantastic! they are sooooo cute and i really love the way you are showing their feelings! the confusion and excitment, simply great! i bet adis at the door 😳 lol well its soooo good so far and i hope you can continue soon!

They are electrifying onscreen aren't they? I try, and you guys are too kind... As for the door-dude, your guess is as good as mine😉😆 Will try and continue soon for sure. Thanks yaar.

Cheers,

dc

as per request.

that was the most disgusting piece of writing.

atrocious. the way he saves her -pathetic.
the way he cares for her after saving her-horrible.

how can you write such ghastly stuff. im totally horrified by it.

adi is such a pig.i dont like him one bit.

babes...pathetic update.

*u kno wht i mean*

i agree with Jenny...............reading ur fanfic really makes me wanna start writing too 😳 though im not good at all 😆
great update! and again i will say no dialogues yet so much is being said 😳 i hope its Adi at the door 😳 plz continue soon

stunning...absolutley spectacular! Each update is better than the one before and that is remarkable penmanship!
Thank you for the lovely visual.

👍🏼

omg how do u do dis
is just brilliant 👏
all i wanna do is jus read on and on 😆
continue soon

hello desi chic 😃
its me again, though i doubt you remember me..... 😃

so, great update again!!! i luved it.... 👏 👏
the way adi talks and feels is just so awesome!!! 😍 😍
but u make maitheli look so vulnerable...

but thats good in a way, i guess, cuz that means, adi will always come to rescue her, 😳 😳 everytime shes in trouble.....adi is like prince charming and maitheli the princess, i wonder who the evil witch is 😆 😆

but i LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE!!!!!!
i can see visualize in yr fan-fic than see ekta's daily soap 😆

dont have any more words to describe yr work... good is an insulting word for you😆 😆 i salute you.......... ⭐️

Originally posted by: apapap

as per request.

that was the most disgusting piece of writing.

atrocious. the way he saves her -pathetic.
the way he cares for her after saving her-horrible.

how can you write such ghastly stuff. im totally horrified by it.

adi is such a pig.i dont like him one bit.

babes...pathetic update.

*u kno wht i mean*

🤣

loved the way u described it Priya 🤣 😳