Chaahat: A RoNakshi Story- Chapter seven updated 23/03 - Page 10

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Posted: 5 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: wasuthecrazy

Hi there🤗

Thank you so much. and this means alot to me. Yes i am trying my best to build up an Alternate universe but this track associated RoNakshi story and i am glad it had gone well among you.

Krpkab ki matlab kya hein☺️ i am sorry zyaada serials nahi dekhi mein ne. My bad😭

But i am glad glad glad and more glad as i hear this love and appreciation. It means sooo much for me!!!😳

Much love to you dearie. Mwah❤️


Dev dixit and sonakshi bose...


https://youtu.be/2okUce8TJgk

Reminded me of this episode

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Posted: 5 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: YoursDearly

Wasu!😭😭

Ye kya kar rahi ho tum! I have no words to describe my feeling right now. This was beautiful! Pata tha mujhe ki Sonakshi itni heartless nahi ho sakti thi... Naren asked her to do this? Makes a lot of sense. I'm looking forward to understand the circumstances involving this.😭


So far I only felt bad for Rohit but ab my heart beats for Sona too. Bechari! How did she live for so long like this?😭


And the way you ended things... It's still unclear to me if Rohit was there or if she was just imagining him.😭


So glad you updated today! Today being my birthday and all. I just hope you update soon!


Love always❤️,

Naina

Hi nainu🤗

First of all,happy birthday sweetu.i hope for the best for you and may you have a happy,healthy and a long life. Many more happy returns of the day.🥳 Birthday waala huggie.

Thank you so so so so much.for loving this, this story and my work as always.it means quite a lot to me. And definitely as I always say,it pushes me for better always.

Yes,today I revealed why sona had to do this though rohit might not know it yet. However as much as I love rohit,I love sonakshi too and I cannot bear them in the pain that I myself has created. Dekho meri haalat ab😆

I am sorry that I delayed this update,I will try to be more punctual next. However,meri taraf se ye tumari birthday gift hi samjo please

Kisses and much love.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#93

Thank you so much!!!!🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

Oh God!!! GOD!!!GOD!!! THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!!! I thought it might be Naren who did this....poor Rohit! But somehow for all the mystery built around the truth of why Sona did what she did....i still somehow feel she shouldn't have done this!!! It is Rohit's right to choose which separation he can bear....or more correctly which pain he can survive...living without Sona and his daughter or seeing his mom heart broken...

Still you have captured their emotions beautifully and my heart is breaking for Sona. But i can't understand how can Rohit be so insensitive. He went away even after learning Sona tried to commit suicide...or did he????

Anuuu🤗

Yes takla culprit hi nikhla. 😆 However I can tell you that he alone did this and there won’t be any villains more than that in this story.

Yes you may be right dearie. Sonakshi shouldn’t have decided alone,nor should have rohit. But the gravity of the situation made sonakshi decide such and the gravity of the anger made rohit decide his ways. However for now,everything is messed up and wait till next part to see the fate of the couple would be ugly or not.

All in all,thank you so so so so much for this immense love and appreciation. I am so lucky and it makes me push myself for better.

Hugs and tc.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: sohit-mishbir

Wasuuu🤗🤗

Jaane se pehle rula diya na pagli...

I was in tears.... 😭😭😭

Both of them are in pain... Nd that's all because of that idiot Naren.. For 5 bloody years.. Both cried for each other ... Like how hard can destiny play💔😭😭.. Staying apart from someone that too by loving the person sooo dearly.. Well yeah.. It requires greattt strength.. 💕❤

I understand sona.. And so do I understand Rohit for his behavior.. Again both are right in their own places.. But put together both are wrong.. She taking a decision for both of them was wrong.. Nd he doing the same is also wrong... But they are two flawed individuals.. So they will make mistakes.. Nd woh pyaar hi kya jismein maafi na ho.. 💕❤

The emotions captured the best... I absolutely loved it.. Addressing the condition of suicide is also necessary... And I love the fact that you brought it up here.. And I know Rohit.. Howmuchever he may hurt her.. I know it was him.. He returned... Sona was not delusional.. She actually has now confessed everything to him... 💞💕

But she is broken, weak and fragile... If Rohit doesn't return.. She will lose hope for life... 😭😭😭

Amidst all the tantrums Rohit was throwing ... I could literally see him like that.. Maybe coz even in episodes he is shown like that... But all of that here, came cooling down when he saw chahat.. When all of them saw chahat... I could literally imagine everything playing out in front of me.. And I am just a silent spectator to all this...💕💕


Yes chahat.. My girl.. You will get your parents together.. Because these two are crazy in love... Hadh se zyaada pyaar hai inka.. Nd tum unke iss pyaar ki chahat... ❤


This was a fantastic update wasu.. I am running out if words to describe it's beauty... ❤❤

So I am stopping it here... 😄


Duniya mein kitni hai nafretein, phir bhi dilon mein hai chahetein, zinda rehti hai unki mohabbatein..

And I strongly believe the above line.. Coz love prevails,no matter what! And so will RoNakshi💞💞💕💕💘💞


Loveee you loads wasuu🤗.. Nd don't thank me.. We are friends... ❤️

Update soonish.. I won't promise of reading and commenting on them as you upload.. I may get real late.. And I hope you won't mind that.. knowing about my schedule... I hope you will understand.. 😭


Love, hugs and tc ❤🤗

Your Aluu.. 😘😘❤❤

Aluuuuuuu 🤗

Arey😭 eisa mat kaho, I will missh you so much yaar.🥺💔 Seriously.

Haan taklu uncle ke wajeise in dono ka seperation hua hein. Damn I really don’t like him and chose him to be the villain.😆though now I feel thoda sa sorry remembering that in serial ussne eisa chilla kar giri hein aur life support mein hein.kher wo sab chodo. In meri kahaani,wo hein the ek villain. But the one and only villain,so no worries about any other turning negative.

Rohit and Sonakshi.you always pick up the fact that they are two flawed individuals. I love that idea of you. Yes they are and they have met in order to resurrect each other in their flaws and console each other when times get rough. Basically they have arrived to complete each other.Yahaan tak baat serial ka hein I mean.❤️ In my story,let see ki aage aage mein hota hein kya😛

I appreciate your guess on rohit’s return btw.but if he doesn’t? Yes she will loose every hope that I can admit. Always expect the unexpected, but then remember that those unexpecteds do also become expected.🤡

I am glad you felt like a spectator as you read this alu. I wanted to make you feel that.i am glad ki eisa hi hua hein and I feel meri kaam is done. Nd rohit’s recent tantrumic mood helped me a lot to write his side down I must say. Hail the KVG!!! 😆However,i feel Innocently proud☺️

Chaahat is love. That is all I can say. And I love that line you wrote. actually I love both the lines in italics.

Thank you nahi kahungi toh mein.kyun ki hum toh besties hein.lekin teri comments padna bohot miss karungi sach much. Know that I love you always and do your studies well. I am sure time will pass soon and we will be meeting here very soon back again.

Aur tumari dehr hone waali comments ke baaremein mat soch,I totally understand you and the situation.usske baaremein toh thoda bhi worry mat ho teek hein. I know I always have your appreciation and love for my work.

Tc meri aluuuu baby. Chaahat waali kisshes.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: docalan

Wow.. So emotional zabardast plz continue soon

Thank you so so so so much.🤗 Will be as quick as I can.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: freakybat


Dev dixit and sonakshi bose...


https://youtu.be/2okUce8TJgk

Reminded me of this episode

Oh I have heard about this a lot on discussions over here.kuch rang pyaar.....DevAkshi. Right. Have never watched but i shall check this link out. Thank you so muchhhh.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#98

Dear Wasu,


First of all, thank you very much for this long update. I took around 40 minutes to read it & I am teary-eyed now.


You have a remarkable flair in writing & this story is yet another proof of it.


Now, coming back to the story, I loved the way Rohit executed his wrath. I can totally understand the situation from his POV. 5 years is a very long time for someone to suffer for a mistake he has no part in. He is innocent & his life was shattered by someone he loved with all his heart. I understood his misery & that is why I am not going to be judgemental over what he did to Sona.


On the other hand, I feel very sorry for Sona. As much as she tried to protect Rohit & his mom, she should have tried to protect her life too. This saint character of hers is not doing her any good as she has lost her everything now. She could have told him the truth when he asked but she reacted as if accepting his anger as a punishment for her. Naren does not deserve this much of sacrifice & RoNakshi don't deserve this much sufferings. That being said, I believe it wasn't Rohit's image but it was Rohit himself in her house during the last scene (I could be guessing it wrongly but my heart felt it that way). He was really there, wasn't he????


And after an hour the three sippys boarded their flight to leave goa,thinking that this is the last time they get to come there ever again.

⤴⤴⤴⤴⤴

This is why I had that thought. Three or four or it's just a typo or was it intentional?


Pooja & Ajit did well trying to mediate between their bhai & bhabi & I liked how they tried their best to get them both back together.


Chahat is such a sweetheart. She is innocent just as Rohit & she deserves love from both her parents, which I hope she'll get soon. She will definitely bring her parents together as I know Rohit will not be able to stay put knowing that his Sona is alive. The Rohit we all know will get back to his Sona, by hook or by crook.


Sharanya is a good friend but I really hoped she could have stayed with Sona despite the latter asked her to leave.


I am so eager to see the next update, Wasu. My instincts telling me Sona will be saved by none other than Doctor Surgeon but I could be wrong too, since you have better ideas than I do.


Please please please update soon. Do not keep us waiting for long. Thank you. 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: malarmia

Dear Wasu,


First of all, thank you very much for this long update. I took around 40 minutes to read it & I am teary-eyed now.


You have a remarkable flair in writing & this story is yet another proof of it.


Now, coming back to the story, I loved the way Rohit executed his wrath. I can totally understand the situation from his POV. 5 years is a very long time for someone to suffer for a mistake he has no part in. He is innocent & his life was shattered by someone he loved with all his heart. I understood his misery & that is why I am not going to be judgemental over what he did to Sona.


On the other hand, I feel very sorry for Sona. As much as she tried to protect Rohit & his mom, she should have tried to protect her life too. This saint character of hers is not doing her any good as she has lost her everything now. She could have told him the truth when he asked but she reacted as if accepting his anger as a punishment for her. Naren does not deserve this much of sacrifice & RoNakshi don't deserve this much sufferings. That being said, I believe it wasn't Rohit's image but it was Rohit himself in her house during the last scene (I could be guessing it wrongly but my heart felt it that way). He was really there, wasn't he????


And after an hour the three sippys boarded their flight to leave goa,thinking that this is the last time they get to come there ever again.

⤴⤴⤴⤴⤴

This is why I had that thought. Three or four or it's just a typo or was it intentional?


Pooja & Ajit did well trying to mediate between their bhai & bhabi & I liked how they tried their best to get them both back together.


Chahat is such a sweetheart. She is innocent just as Rohit & she deserves love from both her parents, which I hope she'll get soon. She will definitely bring her parents together as I know Rohit will not be able to stay put knowing that his Sona is alive. The Rohit we all know will get back to his Sona, by hook or by crook.


Sharanya is a good friend but I really hoped she could have stayed with Sona despite the latter asked her to leave.


I am so eager to see the next update, Wasu. My instincts telling me Sona will be saved by none other than Doctor Surgeon but I could be wrong too, since you have better ideas than I do.


Please please please update soon. Do not keep us waiting for long. Thank you. 🤗

Hi darling malar🤗

Thank you for waiting, reading and appreciating my work as usual, i have been pretty much loved and i am lucky to have such a great support system through you guys. Love you for being such a motivation. Means alot.

I am glad that you have picked up both the situations of rohit and sonakshi in this story. Yes sonkashi’s decision has made a huge impact on their lives and rohit was rendered helpless as a result but however, she had no option left than loving her rohit even by going far from him. Like in today’s episode she told YK that she can stop breathing, but cannot stop loving rohit. But as YK said, she loved him too much that she ended up loosing herself here in my story too.😭

Lets wait as i prepare for my next chapter gets slowly prepared. Lets see if you like how i make their fate decide what is next for them.

Your question has an answer as well by the way and that is that there was no typos there. Everything had been penned down intentionally 😃 the three sippys have boarded the flight and the flight has been taken off too. By next update, they will be about to land in mumbai as well.😛 And sharanya had to go, for sonakshi’s inner turmoil to be spoken into words and i did it purposely.😆

Chaahat is a character i love. I am glad you picked up her innocence. Babies should never be suffered for their parents’ matters and they deserve much better for being the purest at heart. Chaahat is no less. Lets see if she gets her fair portion of fate.😊

Will try to be back soonish. Hugs and take care till then.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: wasuthecrazy

Hi darling malar🤗

Thank you for waiting, reading and appreciating my work as usual, i have been pretty much loved and i am lucky to have such a great support system through you guys. Love you for being such a motivation. Means alot.

I am glad that you have picked up both the situations of rohit and sonakshi in this story. Yes sonkashi’s decision has made a huge impact on their lives and rohit was rendered helpless as a result but however, she had no option left than loving her rohit even by going far from him. Like in today’s episode she told YK that she can stop breathing, but cannot stop loving rohit. But as YK said, she loved him too much that she ended up loosing herself here in my story too.😭

Lets wait as i prepare for my next chapter gets slowly prepared. Lets see if you like how i make their fate decide what is next for them.

Your question has an answer as well by the way and that is that there was no typos there. Everything had been penned down intentionally 😃 the three sippys have boarded the flight and the flight has been taken off too. By next update, they will be about to land in mumbai as well.😛 And sharanya had to go, for sonakshi’s inner turmoil to be spoken into words and i did it purposely.😆

Chaahat is a character i love. I am glad you picked up her innocence. Babies should never be suffered for their parents’ matters and they deserve much better for being the purest at heart. Chaahat is no less. Lets see if she gets her fair portion of fate.😊

Will try to be back soonish. Hugs and take care till then.


So, it was intentional!!!!


I am super excited!!!!


Will wait for the next one, Wasuuu🤗

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