Chaahat: A RoNakshi Story- Chapter seven updated 23/03 - Page 12

Originally posted by: hiraj

This is amazing

Thank you so much!!!! Means a lot. Seriously.🤗

Originally posted by: Blackwind

Hi....reading Ur story since beginning n it's amazing👍🏼...yesterday I finished watching a Pak drama called "Humsafar" n while watching it I remembered this particular story of yours n felt it loosely similar to it(only the kid part). Don't know if u have watched or not but it's really amazing n resembles Ur story a bit so thought of mentioning it to u....no offence to u...Ur story is amazing...keep going🤗

Hi there🤗

Thank you so so so so much for loving my work and appreciating it. It truely is a huge motivation. Means alot

I actually have watched Gul khan’s humsafars starred harshad chopda- the first few episodes of it here and there but i doubt if its the same pak drama you are mentioning.

And oh no no please don’t think that you offended me, i know its just a simple question😃 feel free to say or ask anything because i look forward to know genuine thoughts. However this kinda of seperation tracks have come up in ITV i admit but this particular story is not associated/ based on any drama its purely from my thoughts i started it.

Will be back with next update soonish. Hugs an tc.

Originally posted by: wasuthecrazy

Hi there🤗

Thank you so so so so much for loving my work and appreciating it. It truely is a huge motivation. Means alot

I actually have watched Gul khan’s humsafars starred harshad chopda- the first few episodes of it here and there but i doubt if its the same pak drama you are mentioning.

And oh no no please don’t think that you offended me, i know its just a simple question😃 feel free to say or ask anything because i look forward to know genuine thoughts. However this kinda of seperation tracks have come up in ITV i admit but this particular story is not associated/ based on any drama its purely from my thoughts i started it.

Will be back with next update soonish. Hugs an tc.

This is soo amazing😍🙈

Can't wait for next part plz update soon

Originally posted by: Blackwind

u r most welcome😊....it's not d itv or sony TV drama it's a ptv drama...it's really amazing n coincidentally a bit similar to Ur story...search it on utube n u will find it...if time permits give it a try...tc🤗

I shall search on this and try to watch. Thank you for the clue 🤗

Tc and see you around😳

Originally posted by: Aashi110

This is soo amazing😍🙈

Can't wait for next part plz update soon

Thank you so so so much aashi😍

Will try to back soonish.

Originally posted by: wasuthecrazy

I shall search on this and try to watch. Thank you for the clue 🤗

Tc and see you around😳

@bold2 thnx for d Lovely gesture...you would see me sometimes....tc😊 🤗

Disclaimer - *Long post ahead alert* 🙈🙈🙈

Hey Vasu 🤗🤗❤️

First things first, I'm so so sorry for not commenting on the earlier chapter and now you've updated even 🤦🏻‍♀️😐

Chapter 3 -

Loved to see how Ajit and Pooji were constantly by Rohit's side since they got to know about his accident, I don't know if we'll get to see the same precious bonding in the show, so I'm glad you've put it here ❤️

Some say, promises are meant to be broken but promises made in love are meant to be kept for eternity..sounds cliched, but yeah..loved it ❤️❤️❤️

The moment he figured out that it's none other than his Sona, his feelings..you described it so beautifully.. I was feeling the adrenaline rush while reading it 😍😍

I legit knew it.. Chahat is Ronakshi's child, their blood and flesh..the living symbol of their love...❤️❤️❤️❤️...it seemed like the world stopped when their eyes met.. I could see all in front of my eyes! Rohit's feeling of hatred is justified, he has suffered all these 5 years, not just because she left him with no proper explanations but also hidden about their child that had an existence in this world! I actually felt sorry for both here as Sona won't be able to tell him anything, she'll definitely hide her reasons and Rohit won't be able to figure it out!

Moving on to next chapter,

Chapter 4 -

I cried and cried and cried while reading the whole chapter, specially the last part😭😭💔💔

You nailed in creating a satanic Rohit 👏🏻👌🏻..yes I did felt extremely bad for the way he treated Sona but still couldn't hate him because right now he's broken and betrayed to the core by the person he had loved the most 💔💔.. Sona's plight is understood but yeah, I wish she would've talked to Rohit for once! By accepting Naren's orders she thought she'd saved the family from breaking but what happened at the end..the truth came out and it wrecked the foundation of the family breaking it apart and nothing had remained the same! I wish she'd got to know about this! Yeah, Rohit is angry and heartbroken..yet he gave her a chance to speak and tell about her reasons, that was commendable! I won't blame him for taking Chahat away from Sona as he thinks in this way he'll take revenge for what she'd done, the day he'll get a slight inkling of what blunder he'd committed, he'll repent with guilt!

My heart went out for Sona when she prepared Chahat to go with her dad..she literally gave her life as a payback for all the sufferings she had given him in these 5 years..😭😭😭

Sona tried to attempt suicide.. the girl who was so strong and lively, who believed in second chances, who lived life to the fullest and inspired others to do the same had gone to such an extent of trying to commit suicide 😲😲..if Rohit would've came to know this he would've ripped Naren apart! I'm sorry to sound like a sadist, but I'm glad Karma hit Naren!

I cried loads while reading the last scene of Sona.. her struggle to get water, her imagining him at her place (I'm feeling he is there for real and it's not just her imagination; I fail to believe that Rohit hadn't gave any thought to what Pooji told them what happened 5 years ago), her confession everything was penned out so beautifully 💔💔👏🏻😭😭

Please let it be Rohit present there when she confessed why she left him..please not let it be just her imaginations 🤞🏻💔

Waiting for next chapter, do update soon 😘🤗❤️

Originally posted by: vaidehi1306

Disclaimer - *Long post ahead alert* 🙈🙈🙈

Hey Vasu 🤗🤗❤️

First things first, I'm so so sorry for not commenting on the earlier chapter and now you've updated even 🤦🏻‍♀️😐

Chapter 3 -

Loved to see how Ajit and Pooji were constantly by Rohit's side since they got to know about his accident, I don't know if we'll get to see the same precious bonding in the show, so I'm glad you've put it here ❤️

Some say, promises are meant to be broken but promises made in love are meant to be kept for eternity..sounds cliched, but yeah..loved it ❤️❤️❤️

The moment he figured out that it's none other than his Sona, his feelings..you described it so beautifully.. I was feeling the adrenaline rush while reading it 😍😍

I legit knew it.. Chahat is Ronakshi's child, their blood and flesh..the living symbol of their love...❤️❤️❤️❤️...it seemed like the world stopped when their eyes met.. I could see all in front of my eyes! Rohit's feeling of hatred is justified, he has suffered all these 5 years, not just because she left him with no proper explanations but also hidden about their child that had an existence in this world! I actually felt sorry for both here as Sona won't be able to tell him anything, she'll definitely hide her reasons and Rohit won't be able to figure it out!

Moving on to next chapter,

Chapter 4 -

I cried and cried and cried while reading the whole chapter, specially the last part😭😭💔💔

You nailed in creating a satanic Rohit 👏🏻👌🏻..yes I did felt extremely bad for the way he treated Sona but still couldn't hate him because right now he's broken and betrayed to the core by the person he had loved the most 💔💔.. Sona's plight is understood but yeah, I wish she would've talked to Rohit for once! By accepting Naren's orders she thought she'd saved the family from breaking but what happened at the end..the truth came out and it wrecked the foundation of the family breaking it apart and nothing had remained the same! I wish she'd got to know about this! Yeah, Rohit is angry and heartbroken..yet he gave her a chance to speak and tell about her reasons, that was commendable! I won't blame him for taking Chahat away from Sona as he thinks in this way he'll take revenge for what she'd done, the day he'll get a slight inkling of what blunder he'd committed, he'll repent with guilt!

My heart went out for Sona when she prepared Chahat to go with her dad..she literally gave her life as a payback for all the sufferings she had given him in these 5 years..😭😭😭

Sona tried to attempt suicide.. the girl who was so strong and lively, who believed in second chances, who lived life to the fullest and inspired others to do the same had gone to such an extent of trying to commit suicide 😲😲..if Rohit would've came to know this he would've ripped Naren apart! I'm sorry to sound like a sadist, but I'm glad Karma hit Naren!

I cried loads while reading the last scene of Sona.. her struggle to get water, her imagining him at her place (I'm feeling he is there for real and it's not just her imagination; I fail to believe that Rohit hadn't gave any thought to what Pooji told them what happened 5 years ago), her confession everything was penned out so beautifully 💔💔👏🏻😭😭

Please let it be Rohit present there when she confessed why she left him..please not let it be just her imaginations 🤞🏻💔

Waiting for next chapter, do update soon 😘🤗❤️

update me too ...di

Pla do continue