Maana Ke Hum Yaar Nahin- A Ronakshi SS (Last Part Pg 7) Completed - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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wonderful start to an amazing story... can't wait to read more of this... ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful. Period!



The emotions so well explained and Rohit deserves it! Huh! I wish CVs take a cue from this and work upon it. Thanks a lot. Update soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sonakshi didn’t realize when her eyes closed until the title track of her show reached her ears. Her eyes felt puffy and she could feel the trail her tears left on her cheeks. She sat up and grabbed her phone. The name that flashed made her heart leap and then sink. She hit the green button and held the phone to her ears. Silence. That’s all that could be heard but she knew he was there. She could sense his unsteady breathing on the other end.

Rohit let the silent tears spill down his cheeks as he held the phone to his ear. He could feel her presence but didn’t know what to say. They both sat still for what felt like hours. All Rohit wanted to do was to hold Sonakshi in his arms but he knew that was impossible.

“I’m so sorry. For everything,” he couldn’t say anything else. He wanted to say so much but his voice cracked and he couldn’t stop the tears that followed.

“Rohit... Please,” Sonakshi couldn’t hold back her tears. She knew he was sorry and that he truly felt bad. But she didn’t know if she had it in her to be friends with someone she was in love with. Yes! She was in love with Rohit Sippy and now her heart was broken.

“I hate how we left things at the restaurant Sonakshi. That’s not us. There is never any awkwardness between us.” He took a deep breath to steady his voice. “I know you don’t believe me but I meant every word I said. This has nothing to do with my family or anyone else. I love you! I don’t know when or how it happened but I really love and care for you! You make me feel alive! Sonakshi, I thought you felt the same way. Whenever I am around you, everything seems alright. But I don’t just love you! I respect you and care for you! I would never want you to be unhappy. If you don’t feel the same way, just tell me now. I will never bring it up! But don’t stop talking to me! I can’t bear the silence between us.” He closed his eyes as a pained expression crossed his features.

“Rohit, I need some time to process everything. I don’t want to lose you either. But I need to think about myself.“ Sonakshi tried to keep her voice steady.

After a few minutes of silence, Sonakshi sighed. “Rohit, please say something.”

“Take all the time you need Sonakshi. I’m always here for you. I hope you get all the happiness you deserve,” Rohit smiled slightly.

They both hung up with heavy hearts and neither slept peacefully that night.


Sonakshi arrived on set exhausted the next morning. She was wide awake all night. “Garma garam chai for Shrimati Parvatiji.”

“Stop calling me that! I’ll start calling you Shriman Kunalji.” Sonakshi smiled and took the tea from Arjun. She sipped it and sighed, it really hit the spot. Her eyes met those of her costar whose striking blue eyes were twinkling with mirth.

He wrapped his arms around her neck from the side as they walked to her makeup room. Arjun was a blessing in her life. After years of working with Sumit, she deserved a costar like Arjun.

“So what’s bothering you?” Sonakshi looked up surprised.

“Nothing. I’m just tired.”

“Okay, but if you need to talk, I’m here.”

“Aww thank you! Now any news here?”

“Nothing much. Netraji called us to her office in 15 mins.”

“Okay let’s start heading there. I’m sure it’s important.”


Rohit woke up and he felt like he had been hit by a truck. His head was pounding and he could barely keep his eyes open. He quickly got dressed and planned to make a dash to the hospital. He was in no mood to socialize or joke around with anyone. As he headed down the stairs, he heard Tanya and Rohan.

“Be dressed by 6. I’m taking you to your favorite restaurant, followed by a movie.”

“Ohhh which one?”

“It’s a surprise but you are going to love it.”

Rohit tried to tune away the conversation as Tanya giggled and Rohan whispered sweet nothings to her. He was happy for his little brother but hearing the romantic conversation between the two did nothing to soothe the raw pain in his heart. He was about to walk away when his mother called him.

“Rohit, where are you going? You didn’t have dinner yesterday. I won’t let you step out without breakfast.” He couldn’t meet his mother’s eyes so he sat down and picked at his food.

As he was about to head out the door, his mother’s voice stopped him. “Rohit, ek minute. Is everything okay? Don’t make an excuse.”

“Everything is fine, Mom. I just have a few important appointments and a major surgery so I’m a little nervous. Plus, I came home late night so I’m a little tired.” Rohit gave her a smile but when her hands touched his cheeks he almost dropped the act. “I’ll send some lunch for you. Don’t overwork yourself.” His mom gave him a bright smile and Rohit couldn’t help but give her a tight hug. She rubbed his back, almost as if she could sense the storm wreaking havoc inside his entire being. Rohit quickly left and decided to focus on the one thing that gave him peace, his duty as a heart surgeon.


That night, Sonakshi and Arjun left the studio exhausted. Netraji had informed them that despite the initial hate from some Sumit fans, they were rocking the charts and slowly everyone was accepting the new pair. How could they not? Arjun was brilliant as Kunal and such a lovable human being. However, the channel wanted to promote the pair more. They just finished a fun interview and had a dance performance scheduled for the upcoming award function. They were tired but very satisfied with the result of all their hard work.

“I can’t wait to hit the bed!” Arjun groaned.

“Aha, is Shonali coming by tonight? Then I doubt you will get any sleep.”

Arjun let out a dramatic gasp as they walked to his car. “Parvatiji, aap ke muh se aise naughty baatein!” Sonakshi laughed. Arjun made it a habit to drop her home every once in a whole. She was one of the few people who knew about his secret girlfriend.

“You know I don’t say this often Sona, but I’m so lucky to have you as my costar!”

“Aww Arjun! I know I’m just too awesome! Jokes apart, I’m lucky to have you in my life! You bring me joy!”

“Aww love you loads girl! You better stay this awesome all your life.”

They both laughed and got into their car, not noticing the man walking past them with a device in his hand.


Rohit left the hospital much later than expected. He was exhausted and was about to fall asleep when Ravi turned on the radio softly. Usually, he would tell him to turn it off but as he heard the lyrics of the song, he closed his eyes, letting the tears spill on their own accord. He loved Sonakshi Rastogi and now his heart was broken.


Maana ke hum yaar nahin

Lo tay hain ke pyaar nahin

Phir bhi nazrein na tum milana

Dil ka aetbaar nahin

Maana ke hum yaar nahin


To be continued...


I guess this will now be a three-shot 😆 Please let me know what you guys think 🤗😳

Edited by Raingoddess - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Precap:

“Television actress Sonakshi Rastogi announces her engagement to a mystery man! Who is he! Any guesses?” As Rohit walked pass the living room he heard those words he covered his entire being in dread and anger. Sonakshi was getting married?

I just pulled the same stunt as StarPlus by repeating my precap 😆😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I would suggest you make it into a ff itself..... Its so so so wonderful... Beautifully penned....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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OML THIS IS SO GOOD. I'M ABSOLUTELY LOVING THIS. SRSLY. SO SO SO MUCH. The angst. OOOF. So amaze!

Ronakshi's characterization is so good here. I really like it. Sonakshi's hesitance is a given, and yet I feel bad for Rohit because of what is happening. I feel worse for Sona because she loves him so much but after everything it'll obviously be difficult for her to take that step.

Arjun, tho. He seems like a nice guy. I hope we see more of him in the future! :D

Amazing chapter! Keep writing! :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very nice..update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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That phone call had my heart❤️


Thanks a lot for this beautiful one. Eagerly waiting for the next. I'm sure some media person made the friendly banter in sensational news. Rohit will be so hurt. Low key, I'll be happy seeing him suffer a bit but he's (read Karan) makes is difficult to hate him. 😆 Update soon!😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
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wowwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

By doing star plus stunt you gave us a pain to waiitttttttttt
for next update


Please do update soon ...........
can't wait..............

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome story

Can't wait to read next part

Plz update soon

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