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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Legilimens

6. Tum itna joh muskura rahe ho

Tum itna joh muskura rahe ho
Kya gham hai jisse chupa rahe ho
Kya haal hai, kya dikha rahe ho. - Jagjit Singh

He sighed as he walked slowly with her, the yellow street light casting their shadows onto the cobbled pavement. The sea was rough tonight, perhaps it sensed the turmoil within the two people walking along its shores. '' Let's sit here'' said Rohit as he climbed on the elevated structure and held out his hand to her. She smiled softly as he laid down his jacket on the concrete for then to sit.
''What an appropriate place to break up'' He chuckled softly as his sad eyes scanned the waters. ''You know some Mumbaikars might claim Marine Drive is overrated, and sometimes they are right, but it really is beautiful.'' Sonakshi closed her eyes as she leaned back on her hands. His attempt at small talk went unnoticed.
'' We can still be friends right? You can still talk to me and send me silly memes on the app you forced me to join. I can still call you late at night to complain about the lack of logic in your show. " She let out a short laugh " Right? " He asked, his voice earnest. Sonakshi chided herself because she thought she heard desperation in his words.
She wanted to tell him that it was okay to stay in touch, to tell him she wanted to hear his voice everyday, but she honestly did not know if she'd be okay.

He took her hands in his, her perfectly manicured nails against his cleanly cut short ones, he looked at her and said "Thanks Sonakshi, for playing along. For being my fake girlfriend and for putting up with me and my crazy, loud family. I am sorry for the discomfort you had to go through but I cannot express how grateful I am for you. You really helped me out."

Sonakshi gasped slightly, his sudden gratitude knocking her off her guard. It was like this every single time, the great surgeon, always stoic and logical and then he manages to tell some heartfelt words out of the blue, words that make her feel seen, make her feel important.

"I should probably leave." she said abruptly, checking her watch. "It's almost midnight, your family will also be waiting for you, they'll be worried." They had staged a huge, loud breakup in front of his family after which she had ran out with him following her. She wanted now to be alone so that she can finally break down; somehow amongst all that act, real feelings had crept in. There wasn't a single day she didn't curse her stupid little heart for falling for an emotionally unavailable man, she wondered how long it would take to get over him.

Rohit was reluctant to let her go. It somehow felt very final and he was not sure he liked that. He found a friend in her, it was rare for him with his busy schedule and academia. He could talk freely with her, be his judgemental self with her, laugh with her. He was not sure he made the right decision to risk all that with their fake relationship drama but he couldn't have predicted things would've ended this way. Technically, everything was according to plan. Their fifteen days were up but his heart did not agree to let her go. He wondered why.

He held her hand tighter "It's okay, they can wait. Just five more minutes." He whispered, not knowing how his words affected her.
"Just five more minutes" She whispered back, consoling her foolish heart.

Edit: should I continue this series?

Sanika , this is such a beautiful shot , I love it totally

It tugs a few heartstrings Sanika , when I read about this one sided love of Sonakshi . Every person who had their heart broken by being friendzoned or their love not being reciprocated can relate to this . It's so so beautiful .

Rohit sippy, jhankofy in your heart man !! You are sooo I love with the drama queen .

And about continuing this series , it's a humble request - please please continue . Keep these lovely shots coming 🙌

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Posted: 6 years ago
#42

Is it even a question to ask???

You should definitely continue this I mean I was so hooked it and my poor Rohit!

Confused kiddo😂 and sona broken😭

Atleast continue for those two!

And sorry for being bizarrely late comment! ❤

Catching up with what I missed! 😋

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Posted: 6 years ago
#43

dont wit too long rohit

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Posted: 6 years ago
#44

You should definitely continueeeeeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 6 years ago
#45

You all are such cuties, thank you so much for this amazing response❤️🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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7. The Prettiest

It was a lazy afternoon, the kind where everything was quiet except for the Jagjit Singh blaring out of the downstairs Sharma Ji's house. One could practically hear the sweltering Mumbai heat if they listened hard enough. After a heavy Sunday lunch, both had retired to her room.

''So, who's turn is it to choose the movie?'' Sonakshi asked him. They were lounging on her bed, the curtains were drawn and AC was on blast. "Mine" Rohit said wryly as he scrolled down Netflix's list. "You made me watch Manichitratatam last time remember? We could have just as easily watched Bhool Bhulaiya, it is the same movie."
Sonakshi rolled her eyes as she put on some lip balm. "For the last time, Bhool Bhulaiya is a remake and Manichitrataram is the OG. The original is always good, plus the movie was way funnier."
"Neither of us understands Malayalam Sona, we had to read subtitles anyway, jokes are lost in translation." He exclaimed as he finally clicked on a movie. "And don't roll your eyes again." He warned, looking at her. She rolled her eyes at him. "If I can sit through one of your pretentious French indie movies, you can sit through a Malayalam movie, regional language, unity in diversity and whatnot. What are we watching by the way?" Sonakshi asked as she made herself comfortable beside him.
"Spiderman-Into the Spiderverse." He beamed at her. "You should absolutely see this movie Sonakshi, the animations are amazing. You know, okay so the whole movie is done at 12 frames per second rather than the usual 24. It was how they used to animate back in the day, they had to write a whole new code and develop new soft-what? " He said, catching her looking at him with a mix of amusement and affection.
She looked at him for a while and then said" You know, you might be the prettiest guy I ever dated."
"Prettiest?" He raised and eyebrow at her.
"Prettiest." She said definitely, lacing her finger through his and resting her head on his shoulder, now watching the movie start.
"Even prettier than your new co-star what's his face?"
She snorted. "Jealous much? Now you were telling me about the movie."
"What? Oh yes. Where was I? Haan 12 frames per second! So when the wanted to show Peter B Parker and Miles Morales in one frame, which by the way, this movie is his debut into the cinematic universe-Miles I mean, not Peter-"
He was definitely prettier than her new co-star what's his face. And he was hers, for that she was glad.

****

Manichitrataram is superior than any of its remakes, you can't change my mind. Also, Spiderman-Into the Spiderverse is such a good movie. Sony finally made a good Spiderman movie, I just regret not watching it in the theatres. 😔

Sonakshi lives alone in this fic🙈 Her apartment, her bills, her responsibilities, no interfering fam. She also has a cat❤️

Edited by Legilimens - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47

Don’t know how I missed these..wunnerful! Going to go and read them all

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Posted: 6 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: columbia

Don’t know how I missed these..wunnerful! Going to go and read them all

Hehe, thank you. Hope you like them🤭

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Posted: 6 years ago
#49

Oh God!!! What amazing pieces of writing!!! 👍🏼 Short...crisp...lovely! Each word is full of depth... Dude, I am in awe by your sheer brilliance!⭐️ What an intelligent writer you are!! MashaAllah.. ❤️ Please please please dont stop writing these snippets...❤️😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
#50

You write sooooo well 🤗

All the shots were just so beautiful that I was imagining the scene in my head

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