Ronakshi Oneshots| - Page 7

Oh dear...that was so well described..😀👏

Beautiful....love your choice of song to this piece.

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

That was nice and sweet. A very random thought amidst the current chaos. I think you can be a very very good screen play writer, pulling off a simple concept beautifully.

Haha yes, I like to keep my version Rohit and Sonakshi away from trauma, when I am feeling good that is. 😆I do have Raima centric plots in mind but none so dramatic and torturous 😋

Also, thank you so much! :D

Originally posted by: wasuthecrazy

Loved this. The part where she was reminiscing the good times at the set was truely touching my heart. Your writing made me visualize the whole thing. This carries a breath of fresh air while i patiently wait for monday😃 thank you and keep going. You are fabulous.

Thank you so much! I am glad you understood her, it was the show that gave her her 'big break' so it was extra special 🙈 Thank you again for reading :)

Originally posted by: roshni_az

Finally got to read smthng different frm the ongoing chaos.. That ws so sweet nd real.. It must be really painful for them to leave the sets nd chng their daily routine. .Nd thnx fr d song..it ws amazing.. Added in my playlist🙂😇

Thank you so much! And ikr? This version of Ajeeb Dastan is almost as good as the original, I hope the creator covers more retro songs, the lyrics are amazing of old songs!

Originally posted by: Doc.love

So beautifully written...as always! 👍🏼❤️ You have gained a huge fan in me of your writing... 👍🏼 You know how to put forward the best points in the most precise manner. Thats such a commendable trait! 👍🏼 I also write...but I always end up going overboard! 😭

Thank you so much Doc! @bold- the secret is to write on your mobile, I also always go overboard on laptop😆The second secret is to post it right away after some semblance of proof reading, if I don't, I always will tend to add stuff and it will never see the light of day😂 That being said, I always love a well detailed story, so going overboard is not always a bad thing 😉

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Beautiful....love your choice of song to this piece.

Thanks! The song was something I stumbled upon and inspired this piece, I am glad you loved it:)

9. Whipped

He swiped right and unlocked his phone. His notifications were empty, he had not received a single call or a message from her. Rohit was riddled with anxiety and something else he did not recognise, but his heart was heavy. He switched from his call logs to facebook, trying to remember the last name of that asshole just so that he could get some updates.

"Surgeon Sippy , bhai where is your mind at? It is your turn. Play." Said YK, sliding the striker to him.

"Yeah." He said absent mindedly as he flicked the striker across the board, missing every single coin.

"Yeh ho kya gaya hai tujhe?" Asked Rohan as he took the striker from him. "Warna tou bahut accha khelta hai."

"Arre that is because his lady is out with some other guy. Something about a scripted day out with costars" Teased Ajeeth as he took another sip of his rum and coke.

"Kaun, Sonakshi? " Asked YK, as his head whipped around to look at Rohit.

Rohit groaned. "First of all, she is not my lady, I am not sure I like her yet let alone asking her out." He said, giving Ajeeth a pointed look.

"Secondly, I don't care what she does, who she goes out with. She is allowed to date who ever she wants too."

The other three hid their smiles as they went back to their game, well aware that he has been switching between Facebook, Snapchat, Instagram and Twitter so that he could get an inkling of how Sonakshi's date was going.

Ajeeth made a sound that sounded suspiciously like a whip.

"I am not whipped!" Said Rohit indignantly as the other three kept laughing at his plight.

"Imma kick your asses."He said aggressively, taking the striker from Rohan, but not before he checked his phone for the millionth time.

Nice shot

Plz write more

Originally posted by: Alone111

Nice shot

Plz write more