KaYu FF - Jab we met!! Part 20 page 19 - And it pains! - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Beautiful...

Hai Darshana.

Just awesome.
Yug fiery attitude to Gauri. Keep going.
So how will Tina and yug encounter is interesting to read.
Good work dear. Waiting for next one.


Thanks Rupa... I really wish if we get to see something like this in KT.. but our bad luck... 😭

For me Yug is always hero.. and he can never do anything wrong when it comes to Kali... and not even tolerate if anything wrong happening to her...

whatever yug they r showing currently is dumb one.. and i hate that
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: darshana23


Thanks Rupa... I really wish if we get to see something like this in KT.. but our bad luck... 😭

For me Yug is always hero.. and he can never do anything wrong when it comes to Kali... and not even tolerate if anything wrong happening to her...

whatever yug they r showing currently is dumb one.. and i hate that


Agree Darshana.
The way yug behaves with Kali is very stupid😲. Kuch bhi Ho Sab Kali ko blame deta hai. And Gauri .she always escape even after every thing and even knowing about her Khands everyone never doubts her . And believes in her drama.
Yug character is being assassinated 😭

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nahi to kya.. Leela slapping kali and he watching like dumb..then blaming her... totally hate this yug...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woowww Darshana! This FF is beautifully written... Wayyy better than what's going on in the show
I love how Kali is much stronger here and how Yug is actually punishing Gauri!
Please update soon <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mithi373

Woowww Darshana! This FF is beautifully written... Wayyy better than what's going on in the show
I love how Kali is much stronger here and how Yug is actually punishing Gauri!
Please update soon <3


Thank you Mithi... writting this FF always gives me peace of mind... as I also cant tolerate things shown in KT right now...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks Shibu...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks all for reading commenting and liking the FF.. I am coming up with next part.. As its rakshabandhan this month just wrote small part considering neelu kali gauri, yug and sharmila relation... i hope you will like it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 8
Down in hall, everyone was there. Leela asked pandit to fix auspicious date for marriage. Pandit started to check panchang. "Wait panditji" Yug arrived there. "Why there is so much rush? Its important decision.. Question of two lives.. and how can we overlook things?" Yug continued more. "Means?" Leela asked. Everyone was equally confused at Yug's word. "Means Gauri and my marriage is getting fixed and no one bothered to check if our horoscope matches or not" Yug said with winning smile. This was great shock for Leela and Gauri. They never thought Yug will come up with such excuse. "Daadi everytime you follow all religious activity and this time you are forgetting such important activity" Yug said trying to poke Leela. "He is right Chaudharainji. We should check horoscope first" Pandit said and Yug readily handed over his and Gauri's horoscope. Vishwa was seating in disbelief as he knew Gauri and Yug's horoscope will never match. Pandit checked horoscope and said "These two horoscope do not match in any sense. This marriage is not possible" Pandit said and Leela and Gauri felt everything is finished. "How come its not possible? There must be some way" Gauri shouted. "Looking at these horoscope i m not able to find any solution. But more than me Jha babu has more knowledge about it. He would be best person to give you solution for this problem" Pandit said and left. Gauri looked at Vishwa with much hope. But Vishwa also decided not to help out in this matter. He and Neelu too left. First time ever Yug felt satisfied. Gauri was really upset with Yug. "Since when you have started beliving in all these superstitions Yug? I know you are doing this just to avoid this marriage" she said angrily. "If you know why are you asking me? Still i will make it clear again.. till the time our horoscope matches I wont marry you" Yug said firmly and left. Leela and Gauri stood there in state of shock.

Fuming with anger Gauri messed up her room. Yug playing game with her was never she expected. "Yug you wont be able to run away from me for long. After all i m Gauri Jha" she thought to herself.

In the night, at hotel room Tina was sleeping. Balraj came and handed over money from advance amount to her mother. "This is your share". Her mom was happy looking at bunch of notes. "Keep this. We will have more once shr performs tomorrow. You truely said she is like hen who laid golden eggs for us. We need to keep her manipulated same way. Her truth should not come across her anytime" Balraj said and her mom agreed.

Next morning, Sharmila and Neelu arrived at Chaudhary house. Chulbuli and Leela welcome them. Yug came down from his room. "Thanks Yug for staying at home on my request" Sharmila said. Leela asked Sharmila to do aarti and tie rakhi to yug. Yug sat on sofa and Gauri came sat next to Yug. "This is my right Yug." Gauri said. "You show all your rights once marriage is fixed. So far this is not urs" Yug said and sat on single sofa. Gauri was upset again. Sharmila did aarti and tie rakhi to Yug. Yug handed over gift to Sharmila. "I dont want this gift Yug..If you want to give me something promise me you will be always smiling" Sharmila asked. "You know Sharmila di thats not possible" Yug said and it broke Sharmila's heart. But she realized his state and didnt force him anymore. "Sharmila di, give aarti to me. After all I have to also tie Rakhi to my brother." Gauri said and took it from Sharmila. She went and stood in front of Neelu. "I had only one sister and she is more." Neelu announced and turned to left. "Neelu Bhaiyya, on occasion of raksha bandhan no rakhi on your hand. It will look odd" Gauri tried to explain. "You dont worry about it. If Ramji wish he will make sure my sister rakhi reaches to me" Neelu replied to Gauri. "Sharmila I am going to ramji temple. You can directly go home" Neelu said and was set to leave. "Neelkanth, I am going in same direction. I will drop you" Yug said and left with Neelu. Gauri was getting every insult in her life and she was all furious that kali is not making her life peaceful after death as well.

Tina, her mom and Balraj were going in car when driver stopped the car. "What happened?" Balraj asked. "Sir tyre is punctured. It will take some time to change" driver replied. "You can wait outside till the time i will call mechanic and get this fixed" driver continued. They all came outside and realized its temple area. "Cant you arrange some another car? We cant wait here" Tina said. "Madam, this is Mithila. Arranging another car will take more time than repairing existing one. You wait for some time". driver replied and Tina was all cursing city Mithila. They sat at tea stall near by. Yug arrived there with Neelu but failed to notice Tina who was seating at another end of the road at tea stall. "Yug, lets go inside temple" Neelu asked. Yug looked at temple and said "I dont believe them anymore. You carry on. I will wait here for you". Yug said and got busy on phone.

At other end of the road, Tina was having tea when a little girl came near her "Didi, please buy this rakhi for your brother" and looked at Balraj. "Hey move away, do i look like her brother?" Balraj scolds little girl. Tina laughed "Its difficult for people to guess you from your face" she said sarcastically and turned to girl "I dont have any brother. Then what shall I do with this rakhi?" Tina asked her innocently. "No problem. Keep this rakhi near ramji's foot. He will make sure it reaches to your brother" little girl replied innocently. Tina was surprised by her answer but decided to buy rakhi. Her mom tried to protest not to waste money but Tina was firm. "I will keep this rakhi at temple and come back" Tina said and left.

Tina was all approaching near temple passing much near from Yug. But he missed to noticed her. But he felt her presence there. He was surprised why he is feeling like his Kali is here only.

Tina arrived at temple where Neelu was praying to Ramji closing his eyes. She passed by Neelu and asked Pandit to keep Rakhi at Ramji's foot. Doing this she left from there and Neelu opened his eyes. He came near pandit to take prasad and pandit noticed his empty hand. "Didnt your sister tie rakhi to you?" pandit asked. "My sister is no more. She is near her ramji only" neelu said. "Wait a moment" pandit said and picked up same rakhi which Tina left. "Consider ramji had made your sister's rakhi reached to you" Pandit said and handed over rakhi to neelu. Neelu took blessing and returned as well.

When Tina came back tyre of car was fixed and she left the place along with Balraj and her mom. "Rohit please i cant handle this" Yug was talking on phone. "Look Yug its important event for us. He is son of Mithila's biggest politician and you can understand his bachelor's party event is important for us. I know you are the only one who can handle it best" Rohit forced him. Yug had no choice but to agree. "Ok..I will look after it." Yug agreed. Neelu came there and both guys left from the place as well.

"Who could be best person to help me out in this situation?" Gauri was thinking and name strike to her mind.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hai Darshana
Again a nice one. So all r giving their share of treatment to Gauri.
Thanks for the daily updates. And kayu r going to meet in the bachelors party.
Waiting for the next one.
Thanks again .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Beautiful...

Hai Darshana

Again a nice one. So all r giving their share of treatment to Gauri.
Thanks for the daily updates. And kayu r going to meet in the bachelors party.
Waiting for the next one.
Thanks again .


Thank u Rupa.. keep reading...

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