KaYu FF - Jab we met!! Part 20 page 19 - And it pains! - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Sutapasima

Thanks for PM Darshana

Will read your thread on Sunday


Thank you Suta!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👏
Yug-Manjhiri😭
Iss gauri ka pardaafash jaldi karo😡


Thanks Shibu... dont worry about Gauri being there...
there will be no impact on KaYu atleast in my FF...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6
A nightclub on streets of Mumbai


Main tenu samjavan ki

Nai tere bina lagta ji

Main tenu samzavan ki

Na tere bina lagta ji
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karun intezaar tera
Yun dil tu yun jaan meri
... Jaan meri...

She started singing song in her sooth melodicuous voice and surrounding around her was dazed deep in that.

Mere dil ne chun liyya ni
Tere dil ki ya raaha
Tu jo mere naal jude ta
turpe meri ya saaha
Jinaa mera... hayeee...
Hun hain tera ki main kara
Tu kar aitbaar mera
Main karun intejaar tera..
Tu dil tu yun jaan meri...
Jaan meri...

Her fingers moving on guitar adding to the magic.. White midi, open hair, blue eyeshadow, platinum earings, a range of modern bagles in one hand and tatoo of her name on her other hand everything sparkled. She opened her eyes and as expected heard huge round of applause. A known smile spread on her face. She got up from chair carrying her rockstar attitude. She threw some flying kisses around and returned to backstage with same attitude...

(I no need to say she is just look like of Kali..)

"Tina puttar... Tina puttar... "A lady came running behind her... "Mom, please no puttar wuttar... call me Tina baby... Yeh Puttar wuttar kafi old fashion hain... and mujhe bilkul suit nahi karta" She said...
"Thik hain.. Thik hain.. meri Tina baby... aaj to kamaal hi kar diya tune... kya gaaya hain... dil khush kar ditta tune... Aise hi gaate rahna.. aise hi tarraki karate rahna..." Her mom said. "Mom tum dekhana ek din main top ki singer banungi.. aise ki ye saari duniya dekhati rahegi... whole world will just cheer just one name Tina... Tina.. Tina.." She said carrying still her bubbly attitude.

"Enough... now come down to earth.." A strong, rough guy entered. "Balraj, you are here. You got the money" Her mom asked. He kept his share in his pocket and rest he put in Tina's hand. But her mom was cunning enough to snatch money from her hand and kept in her purse. "Balraj because of you i dont have any reason to worry. You are perfect as our business partner and my would be son in law" Her mother was happy. "Yes you should thank god that because me you both mother and daughter are surviving. Else you both would have been wondering on Mumbai's street" Balraj said. "Oyeee, Dont praise yourself too much. Its not me surviving because of you. Its you who is surviving because I am singing. Else you would have been wondering on Mumbai's street as begger" Tina replied him back with similar attitude. He was all upset on her but her mother stopped him. She asked him if next event is fixed. "Yes, we have to go to Mithila" he said. "Mithila????" Tina looked at him sacrastically. "Please book event in some city as per my standard... not city like Mithila" Tina said throwing all her attitude. "Dont think you are Madona. Its important event for us. Mithila's biggest politician's son is getting married and i have managed to get you as singer there in his bachelor's party. Once this event is done we will be all showered with money only" his eyes sparkled thinking about amount they were supposed to get. Her mom was also happy hearing about money. "If you want to go then go. I am not coming to any Mithila Vithila" she said. Balraj had enough and tried to strangle her hand. But her mom stopped him. "Dont you dare to show your rights on me. You are not my husband yet. And if I am saying I will not come to Mithila. I will not come" She said angrily and turned to get into her changing room.

"What are you doing Balraj" her mom said. "You know this is not way to handle her. You know she is like hen which laid golden eggs. We need to handle her very carefully. Our one mistake and our game will be over. So far we have managed her very tactfully. We have made sure that no other man enters her life and snatch our source of income from us." She tried to cool him down. "What should i do? I cant tolerate her non-sense attitude all the time" Balraj said. "Let me handle this. Do as I am saying. I will convince her to come to Mithila" they both agreed on plan.

"What does he think of himself. Am i his slave who will behave all time the way he wants. I am not liable to anyone" She was all angry in changing room. Her mother came and tried to calm her down. "Mom why have you fixed my marriage with this mad man. I dont like his owl like face anytime" she said angrily. "Look Tina, he is the one who helped us out when we were in trouble. Otherwise you know surviving in city like Mumbai is very difficult. If any other person enters your life he will seperate me and you..But Balraj is not like that.. He knows our bond very well.. He has agreed that even after marriage you will stay with me... Do you really want to get seperated from your mother anytime" Her mom said dropping her crocodile tears. "Ok mom dont cry. Its ok now". Tina said trying to convince herself. Balraj entered in room. Her mom hinted him to appologies and he did same. "I forgiving you this time, but if u repeat same i wont spare you" She warned him. He agreed. "Chalo if everything is fine now we need to pack our bags for Mithila". Her mom said. She was really not interested. She tried to convince her mom but nothing worked out. Finally she gave up and got ready to come to Mithila.

Early in the morning, Yug was getting ready in his room to go out. Daadi came to his room. He noticed but ignored her presence. "Are you going somewhere?" she asked and as expected Yug didnt break his silence. "I have kept pooja at home today. I hope you will be there" Daadi said. "I am sure you would have kept this pooja for Gauri and upcoming child. Whats my need in that? You can do this pooja with people you want. I have work" Yug replied harshly. "Today its been month we lost Kaali. I have kept pooja for her. Being her husband you have to do all rituals" Daadi put up the real purpose. "Whats the use of doing this pooja and praying for her. When you cant even speak truth to give justice to her?" Yug said sacrastically. Daadi had no words. "Dont worry. I will be there since its for Kali. Else i dont care" again harsh reply came for Yug. Daadi left room with heavy heart. Yug's eyes turned moist. He looked at Kali's photograph in his room. "I really dont know Kali how many days I am staying without you. A month!! I feel like ages... Why do you left me Kali??" he thought in his mind.

His mind was all speaking "Come back Kali.. come back!!" and her steps were moving fast on airport to catch flight for Mithila...

Edited by darshana23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Awesome👍🏼
But Tina is being used by Balraj😡
Yug😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Again a good one 😊
Kali or Tina enters Mithila ..😊
Update soon. How kayu meet this time.. 😳
New villains !😈
Edited by Beautiful... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👍🏼

But Tina is being used by Balraj😡
Yug😭


Thanks Shibu...keep reading...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Beautiful...

Again a good one 😊

Kali or Tina enters Mithila ..😊
Update soon. How kayu meet this time.. 😳
New villains !😈


Thanks Rupa... even though new villians are there..nothing can move positivity around KaYu... so dont worry...

My this FF is just try to show Cvs that story can be taken in good way as well...if they at all r reading this..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Part 7

In Jha house Sharmila was trying to feed soup to Manjiri. She felt bad looking Manjiri in such situation. Neelu came there. "I never knew Neelkanth things will turn to such worst level. I cant see Pishi maa like this. And there Yug is also broken. Maa was telling me he stays aloof from all of them. I really wish Kali would have not left." Sharmila started crying. Neelu tried to console Sharmila. Vishwa was experiencing all this. He never knew that Sharmila will turn good to them in such tragic situation. After Manjiri was in state of shock, it was Sharmila only who look after Jha family.

Vishwa came there and told Neelu that they have to go to Chaudhary house for pooja arranged for Kali. Vishwa asked Sharmila to get ready as well. Sharmila said she wont come as there is no one to look after Manjiri. She told them that she will go tomorrow as there is Rakshabandhan. Vishwa agreed. Sharmila asked Neelu to inform Yug to stay at home tomorrow as she will be coming to tie Rakhi. Neelu agreed.In Chaudhary mansion, Vishwa and Neelu arrived. Looking at Vishwa, Gauri came forward to take his blessing. But Vishwa stopped her. He prefered to be seated in Pooja rather. Yug arrived and pandit started rituals. Everyone was missing Kali today.

After pooja got over, Leela told Vishwa that she wants to talk to him on some urgent matter. "I know Jha babu its not right time to talk but being elder of house I have to do this. You know that Gauri is pregnant and soon she will deliver heir of this family. So far it is not known to anyone but soon it will be hard for them to hide about Gauri's pregnancy. Society will ask so many questions to them and they dont have answers for it. If Kali would have been there; she still would have manage to control situation. But now she is also not there."Vishwa understood that Leela is expecting something from him. "What do you want to me to do?" he asked straightforward."I want you to convince Yug for his marriage with Gauri. This is question of reputation of both families" Leela tried to convince Vishwa. Vishwa was thoughtful as he knew it would be hard to conviince Yug.

Yug was in his room sitting on bed, looking at their marriage album. Vishwa came and knocked at door. "Can I come in Yug?" Vishwa asked. "Badke papa, you dont need to ask permission. Please come in. Vishwa came in and sat on bed next to Yug. His attention was caught by marriage album in Yug's hand. "Are you missing her?" Vishwa asked. "When i have forgotten her?" Yug replied. Vishwa understood his pain. "This is all I have in my life now. Her memories!" Yug replied. "But Yug you cant pass your all life with just memories" Vishwa said and Yug looked at him confusingly. "Look Yug I know you still love her. But the fact is she is no more. You are still young Yug and you have your all life." Vishwa said. Yug asked him "What are you trying to say?" Yug asked straightforward. "Get married with Gauri, Yug" Vishwa said and Yug screamed "No way!!!".

Vishwa tried to explain him "I know Yug its not easy for you. But think practically. Gauri is pregnant with your kid. Society will ask so many questions about who are father and mother of kid. What you will answer?" Yug was prepared with reply "Gauri can handover kid to me and leave. Thats what we have agreed." Vishwa had next argument. "Do you want kid to grow without love of his mother? If Kali would have been here; she would have surely give more love to kid than Gauri. But its not the case Yug. Think about it" But yug was in no mood to listen "If all of you are so much caring about motherly love for kid, then Gauri can take kid and leave anywhere she wants. Kali was the only reason I agreed to keep Gauri and kid both in house. Else I really dont care about it. Gauri has used this kid just as pawn to seperate me and Kali. And I will make sure none of her move gets successful she is trying to play with support of this kid" Yug's reply was firm. "You are making same mistake Yug which I did couple of years back. Not giving correct right to Kali which she deserved. Just think once, what is the mistake of that unborn kid in all this. Yug think properly about entire situation and then come to any conclusion. There are many lives dependant on your single decision" Vishwa tapped Yug's shoulder and set to leave. Yug sat on bed in thinking mode and suddenly stopped Vishwa "Who asked you to discuss with me regarding marriage. Was it Daadi?" Yug asked question. Vishwa fumbled for a momemt as Leela askes Vishwa not to reveal her name. "No Yug. I just felt same so came here to discuss with you" Vishwa bluffed this time. But Yug understood those words were not Vishwa's.

Vishwa came down. Daadi and Gauri looked at him with great hope. "What did Yug said Jha Babu? Did he agree for marriage?" Leela asked. "Frankly Chaudharainji, Its hard to convince Yug. I dont think he will be ever ready for this marriage. Vishwa said .

"I am ready for this marriage" Yug came and announced. Vishwa and Neelu looked at him in disbelief. Chulbuli and Raghu was also shocked. Leela was surprised. Gauri's heart jumped with joy. "Call the pandit to fix marriage date" Yug said further and left.

Gauri was overjoyed this time. "Finally Yug... my love has melted you. Now you will be all mine! No one could ever come between us!" Gauri was thinking in her mind. At other end, car stopped near hotel and Tina put her foot down in the city of Mithila.

Yug was in his room when Gauri came there prepared like bride, wearing saree, mangtika, heavy necklace and dozen of bangles. "Yug shall we go down. Pandit ji is here to fix our marriage date." She said to Yug and held him from behind. "I am happy Yug that you finally realized my love for you." Yug let go her hold slowly and turned. He held her hand at her wrist. "Yes you must be very happy Gauri. Finally you got what you wanted." he made his hold more tighter on her wrist. "You must be feeling that you are on cloud nine" he said making his hold more tighter. This time Gauri started feeling pain due to his hold. "Yug!" Gauri said to stopped him but he made his hold even more tighter. "Yug leave my hand, its paining" Gauri screamed this time. She kept begging him but that did not distracted Yug. he kept making his hold even more tighter to the extend bangles on her hand broke and made cut on her wrist.

"Now you understand how does it feel when it pains. You cant tolerate it for a while. Think how much pain you have given to my Kali. How many tears she had shedded because of you" Yug was going mad and Gauri was pleading him continuouslly. "You have to pay for that every tear Miss Gauri Jha. You think you have won? But this is just start. I will make your life hell and get ready for it" Yug said leaving her hand finally. First time ever Gauri was afraid of Yug. His eyes were reflecting his madness for kali. She looked at her wrist which was bleeding badly. But even more scared looking at Yug whose hand was bleeding more than hers and he was less bothered about that.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7 updated...thanks all who are reading and commenting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai Darshana. 😊
Just awesome. 😛
Yug fiery attitude to Gauri. Keep going. 👏👏👏
So how will Tina and yug encounter is interesting to read.
Good work dear. Waiting for next one. 😊
Edited by Beautiful... - 9 years ago

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