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Posted: 9 years ago
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A well thought Part 2. I loved Kali anger when she met Yug. Very realistic.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: JazzyM

A well thought Part 2. I loved Kali anger when she met Yug. Very realistic.



Thank you so much 😛 Kali should be a little angry at Yug atleast even in the show
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you 😳 Glad you liked it!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heyy Guys! Haven't updated this story in a while but I had the third part written. So here's part three.
It was Yug's last day in Mumbai and he was devastated. He sat on his bed in his hotel room, thinking about Kali. He might never get a chance to come back to Mumbai. But he had absolutely no idea where she lived or how he could contact her. His phone rang so he got up to pick it up. "Hello?" He said. "Hi Yug this is Rohit. Its our last day in Mumbai yaar! Let's go somewhere. My friend invited us over for a party. Stay ready this evening." Replied Rohit, Yug's close friend and coworker. "No Rohit I don't feel like it. You go''. "Don't be boring. We're going okay? Stay ready by 7:00." Before Yug could say anything else, Rohit hung up. Yug sat back on the bed, his head in his hands.
Back in Mithila, Gauri sat outside her house on the bench. She thought back to the worst day of her life. "Eh larki, ab toh kuch khayal karlo. Kali toh khud sheher chod kar chali gayi. Ab Yug ko tumhi ne sambalna hai!" Dadi said, a big smile on her face. Yug walked through the door. Gauri ran up to him. "Arey Yug, ap kahan chaley gaye they. Hum apka kabse intezar kar rahe hain." Gauri said. She held Yug's arm. Yug looked at her with a sinister feel in his eyes. She let go of his arm instantly, knowing something was wrong. "Kya hua Yug..." Yug slapped Gauri across her face and she dropped to the floor. "Yug!" Dadi yelled. She ran to Gauri who sat on the floor ,her hand on her cheek, and tears rolling down her face. "Bas karo ap dono. Boht hoge apke jhoot. Ab mein isey chodo ga nahi" Yug grabbed Gauri's hand. "Get up." When she didn't move he yelled louder. "GET UP!" Gauri instantly stood up, tears strolling down her cheeks. Yug opened the door and pushed her outside. Gauri lost her balance and fell to the floor. "Now get out and don't ever come back!" Yug screamed and shut the door on her face. "Yug please wait. Please Yug." That day had been the worst day of Gauri's life. After that she had become completely depressed. She had lost Yug forever but she knew he was never hers. What she regretted more was losing the sister who loved her more than she loved herself. Gauri put her head in her hands and cried loudly. She wanted to fix this so badly but she couldn't and that was slowly killing her inside.
Yug arrived at the party with Rohit, completely distracted. His eyes searched for Kali everywhere he went. Yug's phone rang. He took it out of his pocket. It was dadi. He didn't answer and cut her call just like he had been avoiding her for the last months. "I think we're a little late. Koi baat nahi let's still enjoy. Come on Yug" Rohit said. Yug walked over and sat down on the stage. "Yug there's going to be a performance. Get off the stage" Rohit whispered. Yug got off the stage but stood still when he saw Kali approaching the stage. He froze. Kali got on a stage and gave a mind blowing performance as she always had. Her eyes were closed and so she didn't see Yug. The whole time he was just staring at her, smiling. Seeing her peaceful made him happy. After she was done, the crowd cheered and clapped for her. So did Yug. Kali smiled and walked off the stage. She wasn't in much of a party mood. But she still came to give the performance. She spotted Ranveer and walked over to him. Yug looked at Kali standing near Ranveer and he got furious. The lights dimmed and music started playing. Everyone chose a partner and started slow dancing. "Wanna dance?" Ranveer asked Kali. "You know I don't like dancing Ranveer. And I'm not in a party mood anyways." She replied. Slow dancing only bought back memories of Yug. "Please one dance. Come on." Ranveer took Kali's hand and pulled her to the dance floor. They started slow dancing and Kali felt very uncomfortable. She hasn't danced with anyone but Yug. Seeing this Yug lost it. He asked one of Rohit's friends to dance with him and she instantly agreed. They walked over right where Kali and Ranveer were and started dancing. Kali saw Yug and got shocked. She didn't even know he was at the party. And he was dancing with another girl. Kali got mad. She started dancing with Ranveer just to make Yug jealous. The music changed and everyone switched partners. Yug took Kali's hand and pulled her close to him. The lights dimmed again. Kali was surprised but she had wished for this moment for so long. She wanted to be in Yug's arms, dancing away. She was a little scared at what he would do since he seemed mad. He spun her and pulled her so close again. Their faces were almost touching. "Let go Yug" Kali said.although she didn't want him to. "Not again Kali. Not ever again. I will never let you go away from me."

Hope you likeddd! Let me know of you would like to read another part. I haven't updated in a while because I completely forgot about this story!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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yes yes a big yes, i wnt another part a bit long one,,,
this one is amazing dear,
plz updte it fast...
I wished to c like this oly , kali-yug together nd gauri regretting in the show,
but cv's hs spoiled it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.Bholi_Bhaali

yes yes a big yes, i wnt another part a bit long one,,,

this one is amazing dear,
plz updte it fast...
I wished to c like this oly , kali-yug together nd gauri regretting in the show,
but cv's hs spoiled it...


Thank you so so much! 😛
I will try to update today because Iove writing something like this.
No hope from CVs at all so... 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

ur dp is heaven Mithi



Thank you!
👏
I love my dp too 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome part... i m realizing everyone in this forum has great writting skill except CVs...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: darshana23

awesome part... i m realizing everyone in this forum has great writting skill except CVs...

Thank you so much Darshana! Haha CVs should learn from us :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mithi373

Thank you so much Darshana! Haha CVs should learn from us :D


Definately KaYu romantic scene should be learnt from us..😆

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