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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: JazzyM

A very interesting start...so, Kali has become successful...this is superb. Please continue



Thank you so much 😃 I've always wanted Kali to make use of her talent. Will continue for sure 😳
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Part 2 below. Please read and give me your feedback. Oh and imagine the song Ya Rabba with the KaYu scene I wrote... It suits it :)


3 days after Yug had seen Kali, he lay awake on the hotel bed. His restlessness had increased after that encounter with her. Being in the same city, being so close to her, he had to stay away. What kind of a love was this? He couldn't stay away but he couldn't face her either. And he promised himself he wouldn't. For her happiness. He closed his eyes and thought back to that moment. The wind in her hair, the passion in her eyes, the smile on her face... He would never want to take that away from her again. I didn't deserve her anyways, he thought. He flipped and tossed in bed until he drifted off to sleep.
Kali woke up at 5:00 am as usual. After she was done praying, she eat breakfast and got dressed for a meeting with a new record company. She walked over to the window and looked outside. The view from her small apartment was gorgeous. She smiled. She got her files and headed outside, locking the door behind her. Ranveer would be here any second to pick her up. Ranveer. The guy who helped her take every step in her career. He was the reason she was where she was today, the reason she is who she is today. Ranveer was the son of Manji maa's good friend. Manji maa wanted Kali to live her life but she didn't want her alone. So she insisted on Ranveer helping her out. When she first came to Mumbai alone, Ranveer offered her a job. Seeing her talent, he encouraged her to start a singing career. He was a great friend to Kali, helping her every step of the way... He knew everything that she had been through and shared her happiness and sorrow. Kali heard the honk of Ranveer's car and walked outside. He stepped out of the car with a smile on his face. Kali smiled back. She thought back to every moment she spent with Yug in his car. The time they kidnapped Gauri, every time he dropped her home, every time the car broke down... She smiled at the memories. Ranveer walked around and opened the door for Kali. Just like Yug always did, she thought. But no one could replace Yug in her life, no matter how much she tired she couldn't see herself with anyone but him. She walked over to his car and climbed in the passenger seat. Ranveer walked back and sat in the car. He closed the door and turned to Kali. "Hey Kali. How's it going?" he said, with a smile. " Everything's great.." Kali replied. "Let's get going. I'm going to be late" She put on her seatbelt.
"Alright then Miss. Goody two shoes" Ranveer replied, laughing. He started the car and they drove off.
Yug rushed outside to his car. He got in and started driving fast. He would be late... Again. He was only on a one week trip and had so much to still get done. He had spent too much time distracting himself over Kali... When he arrived at the building, he stopped the car and got out. He gathered all his files and headed to the meeting.

Kali and Ranveer stopped near the recording studio. They stepped out of the car. Kali was nervous and noticing this, Ranveer walked over to her. "Don't worry Kali. Everything will be fine." Kali nodded her head. Ranveer's phone rang. "I have to take this. Go inside, I'll be right there." He picked up his phone and walked away. Kali looked across the street and started walking. She started searching through her purse for her phone. Yug was going over his files and Kali was busy looking for her phone. Both were not paying attention and thus bumped into each other. Yug dropped his files and without looking up at Kali, he sat down to pick them up. "I'm sorry." He said. Kali looked down and was shocked to see who she had bumped into. Kali dropped her purse from her hand. Her mouth opened and her eyes widened. Yug was startled by the purse dropping. He looked up to see Kali. He froze. For a few moments they simply stared at each other, both shocked to see the other. "Kali..." Yug whispered lightly, standing up. Kali could not believe her eyes. That other day when I thought I had heard Yug, it was him... She thought. She had trouble controlling her happiness. But she was also angry at him. He hadnt trusted her ."Kali... I know the truth now. I don't know what to say I..." Yug started to talk but Kali cut him off. "You don't need to say anything Yug. So You finally found out the truth. This was bound to happen so there's no surprise in that. That doesn't matter to me anyways. What matters is that you didn't trust me. You said you loved me right? So where did your love go when I needed it the most? Why didn't you trust me? You had told me you fell in love with my honesty and simplicity. So why would you think I would lie about something so big?" A single tear dropped down Kali's cheek. She couldn't tell if she was happy or sad. She looked down and wiped it away " Anyways, what's the point in saying all this now? What difference will it make anyways... I knew you would come Yug. But i now I'm not so sure if I want to forgive you so fast."" Kali, I'm sorry. I was confused. There was too much evidence against you. Forgive me please. You don't even need to come back. I have seen how happy you are here. I don't want to ruin your happiness... Just please forgive me. I will get you your justice and punish your criminals." Yug and Kali looked at each other. " No Yug. I have moved on. You don't need to do that. I get your situation. You were tricked into all this. But what I regret is that you didn't have faith in me. I have to go," Kali said. "Wait Kali..." Ranveer walked over to Kali. "Sorry that took me so long... It was my mom. You know how she can be..." Ranveer looked over at Kali and then at Yug. "Ranveer, this is Yug... My..." She didn't know what to say. Her husband? Their wedding was nothing for anyone but her. So she just stopped. "Nice to meet you Yug..." Ranveer said, trying to figure out what was going on. Kali hadnt told him her husband's name so he didnt know who Yug was." Come, I'm getting late.." Kali started to walk away, Yug looking after her. He had so many things he wanted to say to her. Who was this Ranveer first of all, he thought. Kali didn't ever mention any Ranveer. Seeing him with her boiled his blood. But that wasn't important, he thought. He had vowed not to face her but now that he had, he had to make things right... He watched her walk away. Kali had so much on her mind. She didn't know how to react. Be happy Yug knows the truth or be angry at him for not trusting her.. She wanted him to come and she knew he would. She will never stop lovinghim but she ccouldn't forgive him so easily. The media gathered around Kali... "Miss Kali, please answer our questions" "Miss Kali how do feel being the next big star?'' Kali tried to smile. " No questions right now please," Ranveer said. "Miss Kali, your hairline always seems to be filled with sindoor. Does this mean you're married?" At that question, Kali stopped. Sadness took over her. She looked over at Yug. He looked back at her so close to crying. They had an instense eyelock. "Let's go Kali" Ranveer took Kali's hand ,which shocked her, and started to walk away. Walking slowly Kali turned her head and looked back at Yug, who stood still, mixed emotions raging inside of him. ❤️
Edited by Mithi373 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thankss 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice,my dear Mitthi.I want the story in the serial.
Your story is more sense than the serial.
If you don't mind,can i put the some ideas?
Maybe you can add the friendship story between Ranveer and Kali.
The friendship that can makes Yug feels more jealous and claim his right toward Kali.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mumtaz82

<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Very nice,my dear Mitthi.I want the story in the serial.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Your story is more sense than the serial.</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">If you don't mind,can i put the some ideas?</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Maybe you can add the friendship story between Ranveer and Kali.</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">The friendship that can makes Yug feels more jealous and claim his right toward Kali.
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Thank you so much again! You're welcome to give me ideas 😳 If I write more, I will surely put in more jealousy from Yug 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai😊
Mithi. Nice story dear.
You made Kali strong. 😊Very nice. And sensible.
Finally yug is regretting nice to read about Ranveer who is there to help Kali and make yug more and more jealous 😊. Deserves it and please try to write about dadi and Gauri Also...and how yug punishes them😊
Thanks. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bdaygirl

Hai😊

Mithi. Nice story dear.
You made Kali strong. 😊Very nice. And sensible.
Finally yug is regretting nice to read about Ranveer who is there to help Kali and make yug more and more jealous 😊. Deserves it and please try to write about dadi and Gauri Also...and how yug punishes them😊
Thanks. 😊


Thank you so much👏
I wanna see Kali strong in the show so badly😭

Yes lol Yug is regretting a lot in the story! And a character like Ranveer is needed and even wanted in the show😆

Will try my best to write about Gauri and Dadi...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.Bholi_Bhaali

amazing :)

loved it,,,,,,,,,,,,



Thank you ❤️
So glad you liked it 😳

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