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Yug was pacing up and down the hall room
'yug..kaali mili?'' asked manjhari ma
yug shook his head in despair
he was so worried for his love..so worried.
he looked at the clock it was 2o'clock at night...he kept staring at it and the clock went backwards to 10o'clock when it all started.
kaali was busy cleaning the house after the pooja when gauri suddenly came and grabbed her by hand
'tum samajhti kya hou apne apko?''
'matlaab?'' kaali frowned
'aaj yeh pooja-bhog yeh saab karke daadi ke samne acchi banna chahti ho? Dunia ko dikhana chahti ho ki iss ghar ki liye adarsh bahoo tum ho?''
'dikhana kya hain hum tou hain hi iss ghar ki adarsh bahu''
gauri got more furious and said in a louder voice 'baas bohut ho geya kaali humse aur bardaasht nah iota hain''
everyone gathered
'phir se shuru hogeyi dono'' murmured chulbuli
'agar bardasht nahi hota tou apni haar maan kyun nahi leti bol kyun nahi deti ki saach ki kya ki uss raat mandap mein agnee ke samne yug ke saath phere kisne liye thei''
'humne...gauri jha nei liye the''
'phir se jhoot gauri'' smirked kali 'saach ka raha kathin hota hain gauri likin jhoot ki raha use bhi khatin tou agar apni saach maan nahi sakti tou jhoot ki raha par chalti raho aur yeh sab beizaati aur apmaan sehti raho...issi ki layak ho tum''
kaali was returning to her work when gauri again grabbed her by hand 'hum?? Hum isiki layak hain??bachpaan se humari baap ki tukro paar paali ho tum aur humein kehrahi ho hum isiki layak hain??pata nahi kiska ganda khoon ho tum jissei mere papa nei uthake laya tha aur meera kaala teeka bana diye likin saach yeh hai kit um jaisi ladki kisika kaala teeka nahi balke sirf abhishaap baan sakti ho''
someone grabs gauri by hand and gives her a tight slap
gauri is holding her cheek when she looks up to see who it is she is tunned to see it is none other than her 'husband'' YUG
'ek lavz aur nahi'' he warns her pointing his finger at her
'yug'' gauri was trembling
'tumhari himmat kaisi huyi use aisei baat karne ki''
'yug vo daadi ke samne''
'daadi ki samne kya?? Kay dadi ki samne bolo!!'' snapped yug
gauri remained silent
'dekho mujhe nahi pata kya sach hain aur kya jhoot likin aaj tumne jo kaha iske baad se tumhe apnea paatni kehne mein mujhe sharam ayegi manna tou dur ki baat hain''
kaali gasped..her eyes full of tears...slowly she looked down and turned away.
few seconds later yug looked away from gauri to find her but he couldn't.
it was 2o'clock
'baas mein ab aur intezaar nahi kaar sakta''
'phir se jaoge yug?'' asked manjhari maa
'ussei dhondne? Ha bar bar jaunga''
let me know guys how it is and if i should continue
'yug..kaali mili?'' asked manjhari ma
yug shook his head in despair
he was so worried for his love..so worried.
he looked at the clock it was 2o'clock at night...he kept staring at it and the clock went backwards to 10o'clock when it all started.
kaali was busy cleaning the house after the pooja when gauri suddenly came and grabbed her by hand
'tum samajhti kya hou apne apko?''
'matlaab?'' kaali frowned
'aaj yeh pooja-bhog yeh saab karke daadi ke samne acchi banna chahti ho? Dunia ko dikhana chahti ho ki iss ghar ki liye adarsh bahoo tum ho?''
'dikhana kya hain hum tou hain hi iss ghar ki adarsh bahu''
gauri got more furious and said in a louder voice 'baas bohut ho geya kaali humse aur bardaasht nah iota hain''
everyone gathered
'phir se shuru hogeyi dono'' murmured chulbuli
'agar bardasht nahi hota tou apni haar maan kyun nahi leti bol kyun nahi deti ki saach ki kya ki uss raat mandap mein agnee ke samne yug ke saath phere kisne liye thei''
'humne...gauri jha nei liye the''
'phir se jhoot gauri'' smirked kali 'saach ka raha kathin hota hain gauri likin jhoot ki raha use bhi khatin tou agar apni saach maan nahi sakti tou jhoot ki raha par chalti raho aur yeh sab beizaati aur apmaan sehti raho...issi ki layak ho tum''
kaali was returning to her work when gauri again grabbed her by hand 'hum?? Hum isiki layak hain??bachpaan se humari baap ki tukro paar paali ho tum aur humein kehrahi ho hum isiki layak hain??pata nahi kiska ganda khoon ho tum jissei mere papa nei uthake laya tha aur meera kaala teeka bana diye likin saach yeh hai kit um jaisi ladki kisika kaala teeka nahi balke sirf abhishaap baan sakti ho''
someone grabs gauri by hand and gives her a tight slap
gauri is holding her cheek when she looks up to see who it is she is tunned to see it is none other than her 'husband'' YUG
'ek lavz aur nahi'' he warns her pointing his finger at her
'yug'' gauri was trembling
'tumhari himmat kaisi huyi use aisei baat karne ki''
'yug vo daadi ke samne''
'daadi ki samne kya?? Kay dadi ki samne bolo!!'' snapped yug
gauri remained silent
'dekho mujhe nahi pata kya sach hain aur kya jhoot likin aaj tumne jo kaha iske baad se tumhe apnea paatni kehne mein mujhe sharam ayegi manna tou dur ki baat hain''
kaali gasped..her eyes full of tears...slowly she looked down and turned away.
few seconds later yug looked away from gauri to find her but he couldn't.
it was 2o'clock
'baas mein ab aur intezaar nahi kaar sakta''
'phir se jaoge yug?'' asked manjhari maa
'ussei dhondne? Ha bar bar jaunga''
let me know guys how it is and if i should continue
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