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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆😆haha.. same here..i am not even checking up the written updates... It became so boring.. 😭😭thanks for reading and appreciating my work(I know it's way too long.. so sorry for that.)😃.. I'll update as soon as possible... It's a promise..

No its not at all since its awesome...I always thought that if its ram Sita then they should have bhai Behan who could...
N I wish longer bcuz at the end I always wish more...n waiting kills! Keep writing...I luv the story n writin...quite alot realistic
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Your story is coming along very nicely. Love the the plot. Please update soon!😃
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hey guys...😊😊
Sorry in advance for all KaYu fans.. This chapter does not contain any KaYu scene..😕 I know I know.. I deserve all the rotten tomatoes.. but please don't be angry.. I am not much good when it comes to romance.😔. it's one of my many weak points.. But when it comes to family type stories... I can do fairly better. Maybe it's the Daddy's girl inside me... But the next chapter will have KaYu scene.. I promise..

and with that said here's the next update...
NOTE: I didn't know name of Tauji (neel's dad). so I used my writer's license, and Voila.. His name is Joginder (Jogi) also the university was also a figment of my imagination..

Chapter 6

Piyali Grover escaped death narrowly that night. Yash had scared her by a hug from behind while she was drinking. The result was she started to choke on her drink. "You..You idiot... You almost murdered me. You maniac!!" she said after she controlled herself. "That was nothing. Gauri almost killed me today morning. If it was not for my good luck you would not have been able see my good looks tonight." "You don't have any.." said piya. "Anyway Why the heck didn't you tell me that you returned? I had to know it from Vicky" She punched him. She then saw others. "Hi Yug.. You never come to these kinds of parties. Must be Gauri's influence..."She smiled at Gauri. "I'm so sorry I could attend the engagement only for few hours. I had to go Mumbai that night.. Anyway you looked gorgeous that day Gauri..." Gauri was on cloud nine. Piyali Grover was talking to her. They talked with each other while Yash started to have a bash with Vicky.

Yug and Neelu sat in a place. This party was not for them. The awkward silence still shadowed them. "Yug.." neelu tried to start but Yug stopped him. "Don't say anything.. I don't want to create a scene in front of Yash. He don't know anything yet." Neel said again, "Please listen to what I've got to say.. I really regret for what I did. I don't want Sharmila to live a life she would hate." "I know.. You are after all Kaali's brother. You both always don't want to hurt others but both of you scar others for your selfish desires. You both try to make things right by your ways but you never get a result. How can you solve Di's life? She loathes you. She will never accept you." Neel looked in Yug's eyes and said, "That's why I want Sharmila to reject me." Yug understood Neel's honesty but they all were helpless. There were many things which had to be changed in their lives. They should take their decisions not their adults. They both were thinking the same thing. It was time to take some action. *************

To distract herself from what yug told her she started studying. She wrote down the meanings of the slokas and checked with the material. She did many slokas until Mohan uncle called her for wall decorations. She went out of the hall to discuss. When she came back, Badke Papa, Tauji, and panditji were already in hall.

"Tauji.." Kaali smiled, "You returned back from Haridwar?". She took his blessings. "Jeete raho.. beta.. I've just arrived. Vishwa was near station so I came with him. You look so weak. I am sure you are overworking yourself again." "Yes, Bhaiya.. She is a real support. I really don't know how I would have managed if she was not here." Vishwa agreed. Kaali blushed. Badke Papa was praising her. "Badke Papa, this is nothing, Gauri is my sister and I would do anything for her. I'll bring some lemonade for you all." As Kaali went inside the kitchen, Vishwa's eyes fell on her notebook. He opened it and started to read. "Bhaiya.. Please look at this.. The meanings of the slokas are written perfectly.. Don't you think?" He showed it to his brother. "Yes, Vishwa, the meanings have been written beautifully and understandable. Isn't this Kaali's handwriting?" Kaali came with the drinks. "Kaali, did you write this?" Vishwa asked her. Kaali nodded. "Badke Papa, I wanted to say you this in the morning but you were busy. I don't want to study English. Actually I want to enter Bharatiya Sanskriti University and take up Sanskrit as my major."

"Sanskrit? But then why didn't you tell about this before?" Vishwa asked. "I took up English for Gauri, Badke papa.. But I always wanted to study and teach Sanskrit. Will you give me permission?" Kaali asked. Her eyes never left her Badke Papa's eyes. Vishwa smiled. "Bhaiya.. Did you hear that? I was so sad when Gauri showed disinterest in Sanskrit.. but see Kaali has such a talent. She even has interest towards this pure language.." Jogi nodded. Vishwa turned towards Kaali. "Yes Kaali.. Yes. I give you permission. You can study Sanskrit." Kaali couldn't contain her joy. "Sach? Badke Papa?" She hugged him. Emotions were overcoming her. "Thank you Badke Papa.. Thank you so much." Vishwa felt touched. He hugged her back. A new emotion was surfacing in his heart, Vishwa did not understand it. Kaali left. "There is an entrance test after one week, Badke Papa.. The last date to apply is day after tomorrow." She informed. "Test? After one week? Kaali you have to prepare really hard for it." Vishwa said with much concern. "You are already exhausting yourself with this wedding. Where would you get time for it?" Kaali assured him. "I can do it Badke Papa. Please don't worry about me. But I have to go to BSU to submit my application. Can I go?" Vishwa felt proud. "No Kaali.. You can't waste time. I'll go tomorrow myself and submit your form. You have to only concentrate only on studies. No need to worry wedding preparations. I and your Tauji will do it." Kaali took Vishwa and Jogi's blessing. Before going to her room, she informed her Badke Papa. "I'll help with the wedding preparations because it is both my sister's and my brother's wedding. But I promise you, that it would not affect my studies." Vishwa smiled. Really Kaali was a special girl.

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Neel and Yug talked about other topics. There was no use in bickering about the same thing. They had to find a way out. "Neel, I understand you are not a bad person inside. But it would take time for Di to realise it. You must deal with patience. You must give time for your relationship." Neel nodded. "Yug, You should also give time for your relationship. Gauri is not a bad girl, she is just a little childish." He added. Yug took a sip and said, "no matter how much I try, I would not be able to accept Gauri as long as I am in love with some other girl.." Neel looked shocked. "Yes, I love Kaali. But see my misfortune; the girl whom I love is forcing me to marry her sister. And I can't back off from this wedding because of my sister's happiness. And we both know that she won't be happy with you.." Neel listened to it with shock. His sister? "And kaali? Does she love you?" he asked. Yug nodded. "But she would not accept it. She is willing to sacrifice me for her sister, her father, my sister, my Dadi and you.." The silence loomed over them. Neel couldn't believe it. The weight of his sin was just increasing more and more. His one shameless act caused this much impact. Yash and Gauri came back. Yug already had enough of this noise and party. "Let's go.." Yash took a drink and said, "Bhai You guys go.. I'll come with Vicky. We are going base'. I'll be late." Yug shrugged and tured to leave, "Do whatever you want.. I've got the info that dad's coming today." And the Drama began. "What? Dad's coming? Wait bhai.." Yash followed his brother out of the hall. Gauri said bye to piya and left with them. Yash asked as he got into the car, "How did you know?" He and Gauri sat in the back seat. Yug simply said, "My private spy" Gauri asked, "Who?" Yash explained, "Mukta Maa.. Hey Gauri, Do you have mouthwash or peppermints? Mine's finished." Yug teased, "Which lady friend caused it to finish, my younger brother?"

Yash retorted, "I did not count, There were too many. Just give me the mouthwash in the glove compartment. Last thing I want is Dad to realise that I drink." Neel took the mouthwash and passed it to Yash. Gauri looked at Yash while he was busy cleaning his breath. Yug and Yash were so different from each other. Yug is always so quiet and serious while Yash is so much fun. Yash laughs a lot, dances, jumps and is always so energetic. He does what he wants and does not bother about what other thinks. He even likes the things which she likes. It feels so natural when she is talking to him. He can make her angry and happy. He always has different expressions. He is so funny. Gauri wished Yug would also be like that

Yash spotted Gauri looking at him. He asked, "What? What are you looking at? Do you want some?" He said extending the mouthwash. Gauri shook her head. She turned her head away from Yash. Her thoughts just shocked her. What the heck was she thinking? Yug was her true love. Why did she wish for Yug to be like Yash? Yug was perfect and Yash was not.. No.. she was going to marry Yug.. She loved Yug.. She should not think about Yash..

Yash made many jokes in the car. Gauri felt guilty whenever she laughed but she did not know what else to do. After sometime they reached Jha house. It was already ten. Gauri thanked Yash and Yug. They left. Gauri was still thinking about Yash without realising it.

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Manjiri was so happy when Kaali informed her about Vishwa's decision. "Sach? Kali.. I was happy when you told me this morning, about you decision for your future. You were thinking for your happiness but now when I heard Aacharyaji is supporting you in your struggle to get a identity. I am more than happy. I am proud of my husband. I am proud of my daughter... I..I.. I really want to give you a tight hug" Kali face in the screen glowed even more. "Manji maa.. Badke Papa even hugged me. I felt so happy. I wanted you to see that. Badke Papa was coming close to accept me."

"Aacharyaji hugged you? Kali.. my bachchi.. Yes.. You will be accepted soon. I know that. But now just concentrate on your studies. All the best. " Manjiri cut the video call. Kali looked so happy. What else does a mother need?

"MAA!!"

A loud roar filled the Choudary house. Everyone ran towards the hall. Raghunath Choudary was standing in the hall looking angry. Yug and Yash just reached the main door. "Eeep.. Dad" Yash squeaked. Yug shushed him. "Shh.. Dad looks really mad.." Leela came out of her room. "Raghu? Why are you shouting? Are you a child.. arre! you have got two sons and still you still don't know how to behave? " "Maa don't teach me how to behave... I have heard what you have done when I was in Patna.. Agnipareeksha? Maa? Have stooped that low?" Raghu said angrily. Leela looked at Manjiri. Yash asked in a whisper, "What Agnipareeksha?" Yug again shushed him. Dad was informed about the agnipareeksha and he is way too angry. He better not see Yug and Yash in this state or else he would eat them up.

"Mukta did not say anything to me.." Raghu said sternly as he saw his mother. "Although I would have expected her to do so." His voice was filled with disappointment. Manjiri did not have the courage to look into his eyes. Leela angrily said, "So what? The kundali was of someone else. That was necessary to find out the truth. Our Yug's life would have been in danger." Raghu asked, "Our Yug's life would have been in danger? What about the girl, Maa? What if she would have burned? What if she had lost her life? Just because her kundali has a problem in it, it doesn't mean you can do anything you want." Leela shouted. "Aree! I did not do it for my personal vengeance. I am not cruel. I did this because I love my family. I love my Yug and Sharmila"

Raghu scoffed at this. "Please Maa.. Don't cover up yopur superstitions in the name of love. If you had actually loved your grandkids you would have understood that this wedding was not a right choice for them." His eyes fell on Sharmila. "They are not happy with it." He said slowly. Sharmila eyes watered up. She went inside her room. Leela screamed at top of her voice, "What do you mean by that? I don't love my kids? I don't care for them?" Raghu answered looking straight into her eyes. "No maa.. You have never loved. You have given your beliefs more importance than your family's happiness. You have never loved yug or sharmila or me or anyone in this family." Leela fell on the couch. Her son? Her Raghu? He used to always sit beside her and play with her, he was her Ladla. Now he is poising her as his biggest enemy. He does not love her anymore.

Raghu saw his mother become weak. He has hurt her. But he should his duty first. He announced, "Everyone! If I hear any other work of superstition done in this house, I will disown that person from this house. That person will no longer have any relation with this house or me." He looked at the main door. Yug and Yash froze. "What are you doing there? Is this a time to come back home? Get to your rooms." Tears welled up in Leela's eyes. Everyone went to their rooms. Raghu glanced at his mother. "Maa.." "Don't call me that. I am not you mother anymore.. I am your biggest enemy for you.. " Raghu replied without looking at his mother, "Think whatever you want Maa... But I am doing all this to prevent you from committing a crime." The mother and son went to their respective rooms. Each knew that they have hurt the other. But they had separate conflicting views on the life and they would not leave their stand on it. Yash saw his father and grandmother. He understood that some things are kept secret from him. He wanted answers. He wanted to know what's happening in his house.

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Manjiri went to Raghu's room. "I don't want to talk to you right now, Mukta.. I am ashamed.. I always thought you stood up against superstitions. But now? Whaty happened to you? Why didn't you inform me?" Raghu asked as she entered the room. Manjiri looked teary eyed, "Raghu Bhaiya.. From the moment I regained my memories I wanted to say you many things... I wanted you to guide me.. I wanted you to help me... I really missed you.." Raghu looked shocked. "What? You regained your memories? But how? When?" Manjiri wiped her tears and said, "It's a long story... Many things happened."

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Yug explained whatever happened in the house to yash. But he avoided mentioning Neel. Yash smiled after he heard everything. "So one superstitious family meets another.. How sweet.." "Yash, it's not a matter to joke upon." "I understand Bhai.. but Neel is a good guy, he will keep our Di happy. And Gauri is a good girl.. a little childish but still good at heart. You will like her even though you both have nothing in common. And about superstition, I am damn sure that Kali will save Di.. and you will save Gauri.." Yug did not want hear anymore. Suddenly an idea struck him. "Yash! Do you want to help me?" he asked excitedly. "With what?" Yash asked. "I'll explain everything later.. But you have to do what I say without any questions." Yash groaned. "That doesn't sound fun.. but i'll do it.."

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When manjiri finished saying everything, Raghu had no words to describe his feelings. "When I heard my husband's voice over the phone i was helpless, when my one daughter was being forced into a wedlock I was helpless, when my other daughter was asked to walk on hot coals I was helpless.. I don't know what to do Bhaiya.. I don't know..." She fell onto his feet. Raghu made her stand up. "Mukta..No..Manjiri... I always prayed for your memories to get back but now... I am proud of your decision to not go back to that mad house. You are doing a duty of a mother. I want to meet Kali.. I'll explain her.. I'll make her leave the house."

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It was 2 in the morning, Vishwa walked towards the outhouse. He smiled as he saw light in the room. Kaali was still studying. "Badke Papa? Aap?" Kaali asked as he took the book from her. "I knew you would do this, that's why I kept an alarm to ask you to sleep." Kaali tried to protest but she was immediately silenced. "Kaali, I know you want to get into BSU but you should also take care of your health." "Badke Papa only two more pages and I'll stop." Kaali pleaded. But vishwa shook his head, "No means no. Go to sleep. Now let's just see what you have written." He read through the translations she has written down. He felt a strange happy emotion covering him. "Kaali.. These are very accurate but if you want extra marks you can write deeper meanings. Like in this stanza, you can also write... " Vishwa started explaining more and kaali listened to it. Afterwards Vishwa stopped abruptly. "Just look at this, I came to make you sleep but I got into this and forgot all about your sleep. I'll explain more tomorrow morning. But for now, you'll sleep." And he made kaali sleep. It was when he was spreading the blanket over her, he understood the what the strange happy feeling was. It was exactly what he felt towards Gauri.


thanks for reading..😊
Edited by umawanderer - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashika_29

No its not at all since its awesome...I always thought that if its ram Sita then they should have bhai Behan who could...
N I wish longer bcuz at the end I always wish more...n waiting kills! Keep writing...I luv the story n writin...quite alot realistic



I know that feel😊.. As i promised I updated another one.. Thanks for liking my story..😊
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome update dear👍🏼
Please make an index of d chapters😊



I am sorry but I don't know how to create an index... can you please teach me..i am kinda stupid in these kind of things.. But thanks for liking my story.. and also suggesting new things.. I feel happy when someone helps me to improve myself.
thank you again..
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Originally posted by: umawanderer



I am sorry but I don't know how to create an index... can you please teach me..i am kinda stupid in these kind of things.. But thanks for liking my story.. and also suggesting new things.. I feel happy when someone helps me to improve myself.
thank you again..


No much deal abt it,a ctually😆
In the first post of teh FF, all u have to type is Chapter no and the Page no.
eg.
Chapter 1- Page 1
Chapter 2-Page 2
Chapte 3-Page 4
this is just an example, idk exact page no of the chapters of thsi story😆
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@ ...Shibu...

I am already doing that as a note on the start of this thread. (chapter 2). But sure, I'll write it more clearly for everyone to understand... Thank you for pointing that out and helping me..😊😊
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@ ...Shibu...

I am already doing that as a note on the start of this thread. (chapter 2). But sure, I'll write it more clearly for everyone to understand... Thank you for pointing that out and helping me..😊😊


My name is Shibani😊
u cn call be Shibu😉
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Hey guys.😊.
Thanks for reading so far.. My FF is becoming longer than the drama.. 🤡😛.. I guess I tried my best to make KaYu in this chapter more relatable... I mean it may not be as bad as the previous chapters.. I want to Make Vishwa's Change more Slow than the Drama series.. And Dadi is not evil in this FF.
QUICK NOTE: No info about Yug's Mom so I assumed she's dead and her name is Urmila..

That said. here's the next one..

Chapter 7

Kaali had expected to meet Manji maa in the temple. But what she had not expected was that she would meet Yug's father too. Manji maa had told him everything. Raghu just hugged Kaali as she bent to take blessings. "My dear.. Even though we are not related by blood, Manjiri is still my sister. And that makes me your Mama.." Kaali smiled and said, "Thank you for sheltering my mother when she needed a support the most. If it wasn't for you and your family, I would never have met my Manji Maa.. Thanks alot for giving her happiness." Raghu looked, "If you really wanted Manjiri's happiness, you would have left the house already. You are not giving her anything else but worries and tensions. She can't sleep when you are getting hurt there. Leave that house, Kali." "If I leave the house now where will we live?" kali asked. Raghu replied, "I can arrange a house in Patna for your people. You can live there as long as you..." "But will my Manji maa be happy there?"Kali interrupted "No Mamaji.. Even if she pretend to be happy, she will not be truly happy. You know that your sister loves her husband very much. Even if their ideologies are different she would be more than happy to spend her life with my Badke Papa. My Manji maa does not hate him. It's only his superstitions that she hates. She, like every lady in the world, considers her loved one's company as her greatest happiness." Raghu was about to say something when Kali folded her hands in front of him. Mamaji.. I know you are worried about me. But just like Manji maa gave me happiness, I also want to give her happiness. I ready to suffer to any lengths for my mother. And besides Manji maa Has given me one month time, please give me at least that much time. If I fail, then I'll listen to whatever you both say."

Raghu shook his head, "Kali beta.. People like my mother or your father cannot be changed even after month. And you are talking about a month. It is impossible. Don't hurt your mother anymore.. Just go to Patna with her." Kali smiled again, "It's only her body that would be in Patna but my Manji Maa's soul would be still here longing to meet Badke Papa.. And about Badke Papa... Change is inevitable. People, things, places change with time. It is the only law in our universe. Badke Papa will also change. Ramji will help me with it. I will change him through knowledge, determination and love. Please give me a chance. Badke Papa also loves Manji maa very much. Their relationship is as pure as Ram sita." Manji was touched. Raghu hugged her again. "I can't help but be jealous of your Badke Papa.. Even after everything the love you have for your father hasn't decreased. I wish everyone has a daughter like you." Kali eyes welled up. Manji wiped her tears and they both left. Kali looked at ramji and thanked him. Things were really brightening up. Her determination to study Sanskrit increased even more. She then collided with Yash, who seemed to be running for his life, on the way. "Kali save me." He said as he hid behind her. Yug came running after him. "Idiot.. get away from there.. Stop using Kali for your protection."

Kali was confused "What is happening?" Yash started to explain as he dodged from Yug's attacks. "Yesterday it was Gauri and today, bhai.. Everyone wants to kill me. I think everyone is jealous of my good looks. Heck I wouldn't be surprised if Brad Pitt tries to kill me tomorrow. Good looks have become a curse for me, Kali..." at last Yug caught him by his collar, "stop blabbering nonsense... He purposefully destroyed my new shoes so that I don't wake him up in the morning.. But bad luck for him that I took these old shoes and woke him up." "Bhai..don't punch me.. we live in India where ahimsa dwells in every heart." Yash said with a great dramatisation of words. Kali had enough of everything. "Yug, Yash stop this.. Are you both kids?." Yash jumped at the opportunity and ran almost pushing Kali. She lost balance and was about to fall but Yug held her. "That idiot can do something right... Make you come closer to me." Yug bent towards her. She looked at the eyes which did not leave hers. Her heart started to beat faster. He was about do something similar to what he did yesterday. Kali felt it in his eyes. She closed her eyes, "Yug please leave me.. people will see." Yug smiled but he did not leave. There was no one there anyway. He decided to tease her."I'll leave you at one condition. You should open your eyes and see me." He whispered. Kaali opened her eyes, she did not look at his eyes but at his chin. Yug still did not leave her. "No kali... You have look at my eyes or else.. or else.. I'll kiss you." Yug whispered. Kali was shocked. She looked at his eyes. "What?" Yug laughed. He left her. She was totally shaken. Her heart was beating painfully fast. Why was Yug doing this? She ran from the place. Yug ran behind her. "Relax.. I would not do that unless everyone agrees for our marriage." Kali stopped right at her tracks. She turned to face Yug. "How long will you stay stubborn? Why are you waging a war against your grandmother? Please understand, your Dadi will not accept me..You should forget about me..you.." Yug put his finger her lips and shushed her. "Kali I have made my decision and I will never change, call me stubborn but I don't care. I want to live my life by my terms and spend it with you. And about Dadi... Change is inevitable, kali. People change with time. It is the only law in our universe. Dadi will also change. And I know your Ramji will help us. I will change our destiny. Please give me a chance. I love you very much" This was the first time he told her that. Kali backed away from him. Even thiough she knew it before, the impact of these words were huge on her heart..It felt the truth had caged her. There was no way of escaping. She started crying. She ran as fast as she can away from him. If she had stayed there a little more she would not have been able to control her emotions. She too wanted to say him that she loved him. When she reached her room she took a pillow and covered her face with it. She didn't want anyone to hear her cries.

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Kishen Kaka was the head cook of the Choudhary house. He was proud to announce that everything in the kitchen was under his control. Except today. Yash Baba was infront of him and the words came out of his mouth left Kishen Kaka horrified. "You understand the deal Kaka... You listen to what I say or I'll tell Dadi that it was you who told Dad about the Agnipareeksha..." "No.. No.. Yash Baba... Do whatever you want but do not inform Choudhrainji." Yash gave him a toothy smile. Kaka gulped. When asked about what he wanted to do, Yash eyed the grater with an evil smile.

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It took some time for kali to control her tears. She washed her face and went to carry out as usual. She was preparing breakfast when Vishwa entered the kitchen. "Kaali.. There's no need for you to do this. Servants will take care of it. You should just concentrate on your studies." Kali showed him the tablets. "Ah! The tablets. Seriously you should stop worrying about other things. I can take care of these things myself. I would not have skipped it." His answer received questioning look from kali. "Really.." said Vishwa as he had his tablets. "I would never skip it but who knows? Maybe I would forget about it." Kaali laughed. Badke papa smiled. "Kaali... Did anything happen? Your smile is not having that spark anymore.." Kaali shook her head, "nothing, Badke papa.. nothing happened." She lied. Just then her mobile rang. "Kali.. help me!" That was hello from Yash. Vishwa asked, "Who is it?" "It's Yug's brother, Yash." Kali replied over the melodrama recitation by Yash on the other end. Vishwa nodded and went out. It took some time for kaali to understand Yash. Apparently mamaji and dadi fought and Yash wanted them to reconcile. So he decided to make Gajar halwa and bring them both together with his new found awesome talent. "But why are you asking my help. There would be many people in the house to help you"

Yash could not answer that question. He had promised Bhai..

"First thing you have to do is bring dadi and dad together..."

"Bhai, even if you hadn't asked that i would have still done it. "

"With the help of kali.." Yash was confused. "Kali? But how can she help?"

"I don't know just find a way to do that.. I'll explain you everything clearly later.. But don't tell anyone about it.. Not even Kali..."

Yash did not understand it but Bhai always had a plan in his head. He would not do anything without thinking it through. "Oh Oh Kali.. Try to understand.. It's a surprise.. Now don't ask any questions and just say me the process." Yash did not let kali ask any more questions. Kali obliged. She made him do a video call and slowly explained him. He followed the instructions obediently.. "Now keep stirring..Stir properly or else it would get stuck on Kadai.." Yash groaned. "Kali.. stirring is so boring. And not to mention tiring." Kali encouraged him, "Well.. don't stop it.. I have an idea. You can talk about something to remove the boredom." Yash looked at her. "You know what.. If this Halwa turns out good then maybe I can ask my Jeep back..." Kali asked, "What happened to it?"

"Just a few complaints against me..(The police got involved..) and dad locked it up. It was really not fair. That accident was not my fault anyway." "You had an accident?" "No.. Vicky was driving it.. We all escaped death just because my Jeep would always be in top condition... Unlike Bhai's Khatara car.." Kaali laughed. "Yes, it always has some or the other problem but he wouldn't hear a word against it.. He becomes all touchy when you.." And she started. She talked and talked all about Yug. Both of them didn't know that Yug was standing outside the kitchen listening to all of it. It was the first time he heard Kali talk about him. He hadn't realised that she saw many things in him. Anyone who would listen to it will understand the depth of her love towards him. He smiled as she started mentioning his little habits (which he haven't noticed himself!! )in an order. "Kali.. No matter how much you deny it, this is the proof you love me.. Maybe even more than me." He told in a low voice. With his determination increased even more he called aman, to start his next part.

Meanwhile Yash interrupted. "Miss Yug Trivia.. I don't want to hear any more praises of my brother. I have completed stirring and the Halwa smell good. Will you stop thinking about my brother and see whether it's cooked properly or not?" Kali blushed while Yash pointed the camera towards the Halwa. "It looks good. I think you have made it... Acha.. I better start studying now.. " Yash smiled, "Thank you kali.. You have stopped the Mahabharat yudh of this house.. say hi to Gauri and Neel from me.."

Yash called everyone out of their rooms and made everyone sit in the hall. "Ladies and gentlemen.. I, The great Yash, Have found a new talent which was inside me.. I have learned to cook and to share my humble delight I have made some special Gajar Halwa for everyone.. " everyone were surprised. Their Yash cooked that too without destroying the kitchen.. "Miracles do happen.. " said Chachi. Everyone including Leela and Raghu smiled. As the servant distributed everyone, sharmila came closer to Yug. "What's this Nautanki's plan?" Yug ate the Halwa and said, "Maybe he want's his Jeep back.." sharmila smiled. "No way.. He is not that stupid to ask that.. I'll bet a 1000 on it.." Yug shrugged. "Let's see then. Keep your 1000 ready coz I'm winning it." Leela ate the halwa with pleasure. "Chulbuli.. He will surpass you in cooking soon.. Arre mere lalla.. Who taught you?" "Kali.. Dadi..She's really great. She was really patient and taught me step by step." Dadi was shocked. "Kali.. you mean that Kaali... the one who wears black dress every day?" Yash shrugged. "Her name is Kali, dadi.. Kaali is her nick name. She became my friend yesterday itself.. She is a good girl.. You know what Dadi.. Most of the time she reminds me of Maa.." Yug smiled. His plan was going smooth until now. Dadi couldn't bear to hear anymore. That lowlife girl was being compared with her Urmila... No never..

"Actually Dadi, Dad,.. can I ask you both something?" Raghu nodded. "Please stop fighting. The house feels less homely when you both fight. I can't bear you both hurting each other." Yash said innocently. "Nautanki" both sharmila and Yug muttered under their breaths as they understood their younger brother properly. But Dadi was easily melted. She hugged him. "Aree mere lalla.. You have become so mature.." raghu did a fake cough. "Yash..My dear son.. What did you really want to ask?" "My Jeep." The words slipped out of yash's mouth. Sharmila groaned. "Yash!! You just lost me a 1000." Yug and everyone smiled. Yash started pleading non-stop to the elders. (Please... Please... Please...)Sharmila accepted her defeat but she looked at yug and "Fine.. But he won't get it." Yug said with confidence, "He will get it.. Wanna bet another 1000.." "With pleasure. I'm gonna get my 1000 back." Sharmila said. After much pleading and promisings, Raghu smiled, "Achcha Baba, You can have it back. But if I get any complaint, it won't be the jeep I'll be locking this time." Sharmila sighed. Both Yug and Yash celebrated their joy.

"Yipee.. 2000.. that too first thing in the morning" yug teased his sister by mockingly raising both his hands in a victory pose.

"Yeah.. Thanks a lot dad.." He hugged his dad. "You are the best dad ever.." And he stormed off outside. Sharmila just looked on. "I can't believe you won two bets.." Yash went off with his Jeep. "What do you think Di.. I think today is my lucky day" Yug said as he looked at his Dadi. Sharmila smiled . it was after a long time everything felt normal. It's the magic of Yash.

The phone rang. Dadi picked it up. "Hello.. Yes it is Choudhrain.. Panditji?.. But this number.. huh? you got a new phone.. achcha.. hmmm..hmmm... But I thought we completed that ritual yesterday.. what do you mean it was incomplete? Ok.. ok.. I'll come to temple now..now itself.." Dadi left. Yug smiled. Everything went smoothly till now. After some time Aman called him. "Yug.. Everything is ready here.. Is dadi and kali coming?" Yug smiled. "Dadi has alredy left.. and I'm sure Kali would also reach there. After all if the fake Pandit has fooled my Dadi, then he can easily bring Kali there.. She believes in everyone.. she is such an innocent girl.." Aman sounded worried, "Yug, are you sure you want to do this to your Dadi.. Don't you think It'll be too much for Dadi.." Yug replied. "I know..I might hurt Dadi more than anyone in her life. But to get my message across her, I should do this. If i want the wheel of change to move...I should be the one to push hard. You guys just get ready and do as planned. And Aman, Kali knows you, so don't go in front of her. Alll the best." He turned back to face Pishimaa. She looked shocked.

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"Kaali.. give me that application form I'll go and submit it today." Vishwa came near Kali. Kali nodded and handed over the form. Just then, Purohitji entered the room. "Vishwa? Are you planning to submit the form today? Arre today is the most inauspicious day for it." Kaali looked troubled. Vishwa looked indecisive. Purohit understood and added, "Hamari Kali bitiya has a nice future.. Don't destroy it by submitting the form today... and besides.. Kali bitiya only told us that last date is tomorrow. You can submit it tomorrow." Kali was about to say something but then Vishwa nodded. "But badke papa.." "Kaali I know you are worried but I'll surely submit it tomorrow." Kali looked disheartened but still agreed. Just then a call came. It was Panditji. He had some list he wanted to give for the pooja. Vishwa looked at Kali. She smiled, "I'll go Badke Papa. You don't worry."

When Vishwa saw her leave, He said to Jogi. "Bhaiya.. Just look at how she understands me even when I won't utter a word. Sometimes I can't help but feel proud of her." Just then Neel entered the room. "You can say that you are proud of your daughter, she is just so pure. But see my misfortune, I can't even call him my son, let alone asay a good word about him" Neel glowered at him.

Outside the house, Gauri took her car and left for parlour. Purohit smiled. He called Kalyani, "I have only good news for you. Kaali's application will not reach the college. And Gauri just took that Manhoos car and drove off to her death. And as an extra bonus Kaali went to temple. Now there will be no one to save Gauri."

Aman saw Dadi talk to Panditji. Yug called him, "Arree.. Your Kali didn't arrive yet..Wait.. She came" Kaali stepped out of the auto. Yug's Plan was going smoothly till now.

Gauri had the greatest shock as she found out that the brakes were not working. She didn't know what to do.. Kalyani's plan was also going smoothly. Soon Gauri would be dead...

Thank you for reading😊
Edited by umawanderer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loving how your story is progressing.
Woah! You just simply killed off Gauri?!
Thats insane!
Update soon ❤️

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