ff DK’s New Life part 20 pg39 5th Jan - Page 28

Anu!!😡😕😆 Before even I came here...Mala told me what you mentioned in your FF abt my results!!😡 Why Anu Why?😭😆 I wanted to give a surprise in the Cafe but you leaked my news😭😆😆 I will shout later!!😛 Now let me comment on your FF!!😛

Awww...That dinner was so romantic😳😳😳...Seems like Dev is all in a mood to be naughty tonight!😉😳😛 Looks like Dev is not letting Kaajjal off tonight at A-L-L!😛😳 Lovely dinner planned Anu😳👏....

Wonderful Part and a lovely Romantic Dinner👏

Ok Now I can shout!!😃
God Girl...Why Why Why???😆 I wanted it to be a surprise but you...!😡😆 Nvm jee...! Let you off this time😛...Again...!😛

Anu...that was another wonderful Part too...Btw I have a qns to ask you and Mala...Apu has faced Mona Singh, gonna face Mona Vasu😛....When's he gonna face this Mona?😆
Find an ans for me ji!!!😛😆

~Mona😛

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Anu I guess today Monu will b in seventh heaven after reading both these wonderful parts 😉 😛 ..This is simply fabulous 👏

Aww the Dinner was soo romantic 😳 😳 ,Dev as usual getting a bit naughty 😉 and then btho of them dancing together with Dev's hands going everywhere around Kaajjal's body 😉 😆 😛 ...Simply electrifying stuff 😳 ...And also loved their passionate conversation during the dinner 😳 😳

The next part is also superb 👏 👏 ..Poor Kaajjal confused between our Monu and Jassi wali Mona 😉 😆 😆 ...Aww DPS and Kaajjal attending the party of Mona 😭 ..Don't worry guys..Khushi ke aansoo 😳 ...

Outstanding treat Anu 👏

Thanks so much Jyoti!!! I was also crying after reading your response, I am just so overwhelmed by your praise. 😳 So pleased that you enjoyed DK's romantic dinner and their dance afterwards. 😳 I was hoping to capture some of the magic of their romance and to show how their love never diminishes even though they have their babies now. 😳

I am also thrilled you liked the post I made for Mona's b'day. I couldn't resist. 😆 And thanks for liking my Mona Singh joke...it just popped into my head and I thought, well why not?? 😆

Thanks again Jyoti! 😃

Anu

Originally posted by: hmala

nimmo nimmo nimmo 😆 , first of all I'm missing my two babies Arjun and naina 😭 , dono kaa ek scene bhi nahin hein, I am sure both are troubling tejwani couple a lot 😆 ,
and here our romantic couple in a romantic night, wow nimmo, the terrace, the moonlight, our dk and dinner, I am remembering kashish's ff,
so the full restuarant booked by dev, what a sweet hubby, Waiter saying "Kya jodi hein", after seeing this awesome couple, uske tho hosh udgaye honge, 😳

and what a perfect song for this couple"mein agar kahu", after having dinner, they are walking on the street in that beautiful night, I really enjoyed imagining dk going on a night walk, and kaju's game for kiss, that was too good, finally dev is ready to cheat her to win a kiss, why he shouldnt be, he has everyright on her, and kaju enjoys it anyway, and the way dev stops her, that was too romantic,

and Bonus part also too good nimmo, kaju is scared of mona singh, let me tell kaajjal, there is one more mona coming to scare you dear, this time its mona vasu 😳

and as jyothi said, our monu will be on the seventh heaven by seeing romantic night of our sweet couple
nimmo, this was excellent and we are glad to have you and this sweet ff with us...Great job nimmoo 👏

Awww Mala, thank you so much for all your sweet words! 😳 I am sorry that there was no Arjun and Naina scenes today 😭 I am delighted that you have taken to them so much that you missed them....and I promise, next time they will surely be there, creating havoc again. 😉😊 I so happy that you liked the romance though. 😳 I was worried it would be too similar to Kashish's ff 😕 but she is so much better at the romance nah? 😃 I am glad you liked my choice of song for them....I was thinking Ajab Si, but when I listened to Main Agar Kahoon again it just seemed to fit DK in that moment so well. 😳 Thanks too for liking my last part with the moonlit walk so much. 😳 I wanted to add some masti in there between them because when I think of DK's love, I always think of them teasing one another. 😳

Yep our Kaajjal is going to have a hard time fighting off all the Monas in this world, nah? 😉😆 Glad you liked that part, and thanks so much for your lovely words. 😳

Anu/Nimmo

Originally posted by: mona18

Anu!!😡😕😆 Before even I came here...Mala told me what you mentioned in your FF abt my results!!😡 Why Anu Why?😭😆 I wanted to give a surprise in the Cafe but you leaked my news😭😆😆 I will shout later!!😛 Now let me comment on your FF!!😛

Awww...That dinner was so romantic😳😳😳...Seems like Dev is all in a mood to be naughty tonight!😉😳😛 Looks like Dev is not letting Kaajjal off tonight at A-L-L!😛😳 Lovely dinner planned Anu😳👏....

Wonderful Part and a lovely Romantic Dinner👏

Ok Now I can shout!!😃
God Girl...Why Why Why???😆 I wanted it to be a surprise but you...!😡😆 Nvm jee...! Let you off this time😛...Again...!😛

Anu...that was another wonderful Part too...Btw I have a qns to ask you and Mala...Apu has faced Mona Singh, gonna face Mona Vasu😛....When's he gonna face this Mona?😆
Find an ans for me ji!!!😛😆

~Mona😛

I'm sorry Mona yaar, but I didn't actually tell them what you got nah? That would have been worse. I was just so excited and happy for you I couldn't resist posting a message about your results. I never meant to ruin your surprise. 😭😕

V. glad you liked my post fr you though. 😃 I just had the idea for it when I was writing my ff and so decided to add it after part 19. So pleased you enjoyed reading about DK's romantic dinner too. 😳 I was hoping you would enjoy their romance. 😳

Thanks for your comment yaar and sorry again. 😭

Arre Haan!!! I almost forgot ur question to me!! 😕 Well hun, I wish I could say when he is gonna face you....There are 3 Monas in the picture. 1st Mona Singh, 2nd Mona Vasu aur 3rd Mona Sharma....so if you look at it like that then when he's done with Mona Vasu then your turn will come! 😉😆

Anu

Originally posted by: thesaint148

Anu my darling, i dont know what to say ... but i will say one thing which i usually never mention. while reading your post there were soo many parts when an unintentional smiled touched my lips and by the time i realized i was already smiling. and you know how i realised i was smiling, because i could feel that happiness and peace deep within my heart. i felt calm and happy and i realized this is the magic of your writting.

Wow Anu, i am still thinking about the part. the dinner scene where dev made everything for her ... Men have this amazing quality of surprising women if they really love. Their love is just beyond words and i can see the same in dev. His love is beyond words. ... truly.

and then the dance scene ... wow ... loved the twists and turns and then dev securing her in his arms preventing her from falling ... awwww sometimes i wish i was kaajjal .... hehheheh

And man my fav scene the running and teasing one. "if u want to kiss me you have to catch me" now this is romance with humor. and though kaj's heart wanted his lips on hers all along but her teasing him and his not listening is what gave me goosebumps. i love it when a man understands a girl's unsaid words and ignore her said words .... hahahhaha i hope i made some sense here. 😉

Brilliant part anu ... simply Brilliant. here is my heartfelt congratulations to you for a part such beautifully written. 👏

Kashish dear, really you have overwhelmed me with your very kind words. 😳 I am so touched by your response that I hardly know how to thank you. You are so wonderful at describing DK romance, and to read you complementing my attempt means so much to me. 😳 I am delighted that you enjoyed the whole of it. I wanted to show Dev doing something special for Kaajjal, to show her how much she means to him on their special day, and this is how the idea of him preparing the meal came about. I am so pleased too that you liked their dance...see you predicted it nah? 😉 I wasn't going to go for it but in the end it seemed so right. And yes, you made perfect sense when speaking about men understanding what women don't say....Dev and Kaajjal's love does not need words, at least I have always felt so. They know each other inside out, hai nah? 😉😳

So glad that you liked this part Kashish and thank you ever so much for your beautiful words. 😳

Anu

Originally posted by: ploye

Anu...Angel... 😳 😳 😳
what a part that was angel...the sweetest n most catching thing i have ever read...you know how lazy i am to read.. 😆 but...ur FF just caught my eyes on the screen for 10 mins... 😳 😳 😳
wowwwww DK soooo romantic..the dance..killing me..and naughty dev..wanting a kiss..and kaajjal..only dev's lips can stop her blabbering na? 😳 😆 😆
Wowww u really fot me here....this is one heeluva romantic nite angel as angelic as u! 😳 😳 😳

And coming to Mona's b'day gift...for a moment i even started to believe that her name os really mona singh.. 😆 😆 then realised... 😆
wowwww DK to her b'day party..aawwww and yea Angel great job..u leaked her exam results.. 😆 😆 😳

wowww congrats twinny .n happy b'day..
Angel i just loved it......n sorry for my disappearence.. 😭 😭 😭

now i will be back wth comments after each part...

mindblowing.... 👏


😳 Komal

Komal!!!!?????😲

Do you know yaar I actually had to look twice when I saw your name!! 😆 It's great to have you back dear....and I am so delighted that you read my ff, coz yeah I know how much you hate reading. Aww thanks for liking it hun and I am glad you enjoyed the post I made for Mona too. 😳 But seriously, I didn't leak her results as such....I didn't say what she got!!! 😕😆 Ah well, you know me nah? I was sooo happy at the time. 😃

Thanks for coming back to my ff Komal and for your sweet response. 😳

Anu