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Posted: 18 years ago
Dev says ki wahan mein bahut bore ho ra tha, and turns around and asks weren't you?? Kaajjal says ha, mein bhi baht bore ho rahi thi. Dev then asks Kaajjal to see the moon,and the sky, it's filled with stars, and the moon is brightly shining.
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Posted: 18 years ago
vakemein, kithni aache raath hai, then looks up the sky and says, mamma hum ko dek rahi hai vaha sai, and she points at the sky and, after than starts crying a little. muhje maamma ka aab bahut yaad araha hain. kaash voh bein hamara saath hota, meri shaadi mein
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Posted: 18 years ago
Dev then wipes her tears and says jo log hamare dil ke bahut paas hote , woh hamare paas hi hote hai, baale hi woh is duniya se kitne door hai. Dev then teasingly says mein mom ko keh kar hamare shaadi jaldi kar dounga. Kaajjal says o really ,mein momma ko pehle se warn kar doun gi ke aap kya soch rahi hai. Dev says vaah,honi waali Bahu aur saas apas pe kya kya karti hai. Kaajjal then curiously tells Dev agar hum nahi milte usse raat, to mein Kaha hoti, or tum kaha.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sorry to intrude, but I just had to say that you guys are doing a FANTASTIC job! I've read all 50 pages, and am enjoying myself thoroughly. Waah, kya baat hai! 😃

I'm not a very good romantic writer, otherwise I would add to the story.

Please continue! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thaks you so much ritika but i am waiting for sharna, as we are supposed to give other people a chance. 😊



Edited by Hasnain - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago


You guys are doing a Wonderful job! Keep it up! :)

Love,
~Payal
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks you so much Payal di, will continue soon, as soon as somebody else continues, as per the rules.







Edited by Hasnain - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rwishka17

Sorry to intrude, but I just had to say that you guys are doing a FANTASTIC job! I've read all 50 pages, and am enjoying myself thoroughly. Waah, kya baat hai! 😃

I'm not a very good romantic writer, otherwise I would add to the story.

Please continue! 👏

thankss, maria is good na, sorry maria i'l continue now😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
Aheeeem, nandani babhi coughs, Agar tum log ka romance katham hui, thu hum neechi jai? Saab log inthizar karaha hai. both look embaressed but agrees. and dev says thank you bhabi, and bhabi teasingly hits him and says, akri baar (last time), and smiles.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Dev and Kaajjal both go downstairs. Satya says aab hum chalte hai, bahut deere ho gayi hai, aur khana bahut accha tha, NT says Bhai saheb thore deer aur rok jate, satya says nahi woh kal college bhi jaana hai to hum chalte hai. Kaajjal and family leaves. Outside the house before leaving, Kaajjal looks at Dev's window, but doesn't see him, she waits when hottie asks Kaajjal chal na, hottie keeps saying that but Kaajjal keeps looking at Dev's window.



Edited by Hasnain - 18 years ago

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